zara si takraar ka yeh natija nikal.......(nazar ghour)

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Ahl-e-mehfil ghazal hazir hai ,umeed karta hoon yeh meri koshish kuch hadd tak pasand bhi aegi.



Koi saazish ho jaae gi ujaalao'n ke beech....!
bas tum mujhe rehne do andherao'n ke beech...!

Zara si takraar ka, yeh natija nikal aaya....!
Deewarein oonchi ho gaein makaano'n ke beech..!

Jaane kis ka zarf chhoot gaya aakhir..........!
koi ro raha tha wahaan qahqahao'n ke beech....!

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.....!

mein aur tu to nadaan hain phir bhi...........!
yahaan to ekhtelafaat hain daanishwaro'n ke beech.!

israar-o-takraar, aah! khuda khair kare........!
yehi do baatein reh gai musalmaanao'n ke beech.!

yeh yaqeen hogaya ujdi basti dekh kar..........!
chandh darinde bhi hain insaanao'n ke beech....!

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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 12:47:37 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 31, 2010, 12:16:27 AM
Ahl-e-mehfil ghazal hazir hai ,umeed karta hoon yeh meri koshish kuch hadd tak pasand bhi aegi.


BAHUT KHUB



Koi saazish ho jaae gi ujaalao'n ke beech....!
bas tum mujhe rehne do andherao'n ke beech...!

Zara si takraar ka, yeh natija nikal aaya....!
Deewarein oonchi ho gaein makaano'n ke beech..!

Jaane kis ka zarf chhoot gaya aakhir..........!
koi ro raha tha wahaan qahqahao'n ke beech....!

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.....!

mein aur tu to nadaan hain phir bhi...........!
yahaan to ekhtelafaat hain daanishwaro'n ke beech.!

israar-o-takraar, aah! khuda khair kare........!
yehi do baatein reh gai musalmaanao'n ke beech.!

yeh yaqeen hogaya ujdi basti dekh kar..........!
chandh darinde bhi hain insaanao'n ke beech....!

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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 04:58:08 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah.. MashaAllah Kya khoob Likha hai Nazar ji... Bahoot Khoobsoorati se aapne Zindgai ki sachaiyon ko apni Ghazal se bayan kiya hai...

Bahoot bahoot Umda Peshkash ! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 07:37:52 AM »
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Wow Nazar ji bahut hi khoob.great creation,bahut achi lagi aapke poem.excellent icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2010, 08:06:10 AM »
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Marhaba Marhaba Marhaba.............kya kahe Nazar saheb har sher par aapko karodo daad, dil khush kar diya janab aapne.............Subhan_allah bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash.
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2010, 08:12:02 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nazar Saheb!!!!

Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2010, 04:43:05 PM »
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nAZAR SAHEB BEHAD KHOOBSOORAT OR CHUNINDA ALFAZON SE AAP NE APNI GAZAL KO SANWARA HAI MERE PAAS SHABD KAM HAIN BHAVNAYEN ZYADA HAIN SO DAAD QUBOOL FRMAYEN. EK CHOTI SI KOSHISH MERI OR SE BHI

KITANE SOORAJ QATL KIYE UJALON KE BEECH
WO ANDHERON KA SHAIDAI THA UJALON KE BEECH
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2010, 06:39:22 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 31, 2010, 12:16:27 AM
Ahl-e-mehfil ghazal hazir hai ,umeed karta hoon yeh meri koshish kuch hadd tak pasand bhi aegi.



Koi saazish ho jaae gi ujaalao'n ke beech....!
bas tum mujhe rehne do andherao'n ke beech...!

Zara si takraar ka, yeh natija nikal aaya....!
Deewarein oonchi ho gaein makaano'n ke beech..!

Jaane kis ka zarf chhoot gaya aakhir..........!
koi ro raha tha wahaan qahqahao'n ke beech....!

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.....!

mein aur tu to nadaan hain phir bhi...........!
yahaan to ekhtelafaat hain daanishwaro'n ke beech.!

israar-o-takraar, aah! khuda khair kare........!
yehi do baatein reh gai musalmaanao'n ke beech.!

yeh yaqeen hogaya ujdi basti dekh kar..........!
chandh darinde bhi hain insaanao'n ke beech....!

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BAHUT KHOOB NAZAR BHAI MASHAALLAH.....BEHTREEN GHAZAL Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2010, 10:08:23 PM »
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Aafreen Aafreen
Kya Kehne Nazar Sahab Aapke
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal
Bazm Ko Ata Ki Hai Aapne...
Ek Muqammal Peshkass Mubaarq
Yeh Sher Bada Sacha Aur Sacha Laga

Isaar-o-Takraar, Aah! Khuda Khair Kare.......!
Yehi Do Baatein Reh Gai Musalmaano'n Ke Beech.....!
Bahut Hi Umda....... Applause Applause Applause

Hazaron Dad....

Khush Rahen...
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2010, 09:57:32 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 31, 2010, 12:16:27 AM
Ahl-e-mehfil ghazal hazir hai ,umeed karta hoon yeh meri koshish kuch hadd tak pasand bhi aegi.

Sazisho ki duniya me sazisho ke bitch
ek zindagi gujar jati hai
 saazish karta koi  aur sikar banta hai
ladte  zelte ek umar yu hi guzar jati hai
itihaas purana saazisho ka
nahi baksata bhagwaan ko bhi
naam uske bhi ,sath use bhi
shamil  maan nit nayi rachi jati hai
saazish




Koi saazish ho jaae gi ujaalao'n ke beech....!
bas tum mujhe rehne do andherao'n ke beech...!

Zara si takraar ka, yeh natija nikal aaya....!
Deewarein oonchi ho gaein makaano'n ke beech..!

Jaane kis ka zarf chhoot gaya aakhir..........!
koi ro raha tha wahaan qahqahao'n ke beech....!

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.....!

mein aur tu to nadaan hain phir bhi...........!
yahaan to ekhtelafaat hain daanishwaro'n ke beech.!

israar-o-takraar, aah! khuda khair kare........!
yehi do baatein reh gai musalmaanao'n ke beech.!

yeh yaqeen hogaya ujdi basti dekh kar..........!
chandh darinde bhi hain insaanao'n ke beech....!

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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2010, 10:18:21 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 31, 2010, 12:16:27 AM
Ahl-e-mehfil ghazal hazir hai ,umeed karta hoon yeh meri koshish kuch hadd tak pasand bhi aegi.



Koi saazish ho jaae gi ujaalao'n ke beech....!
bas tum mujhe rehne do andherao'n ke beech...!

Zara si takraar ka, yeh natija nikal aaya....!
Deewarein oonchi ho gaein makaano'n ke beech..!

Jaane kis ka zarf chhoot gaya aakhir..........!
koi ro raha tha wahaan qahqahao'n ke beech....!

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.....!

mein aur tu to nadaan hain phir bhi...........!
yahaan to ekhtelafaat hain daanishwaro'n ke beech.!

israar-o-takraar, aah! khuda khair kare........!
yehi do baatein reh gai musalmaanao'n ke beech.!

yeh yaqeen hogaya ujdi basti dekh kar..........!
chandh darinde bhi hain insaanao'n ke beech....!

                                                    nazar ghouri
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wah bahut hi khoob nazar ji.... really nice..

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2010, 12:59:00 PM »
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Bahot khoobsurat takhleeq hai Nazar ji. Ek ek sher shandaar aur ba-maani hai. Bahot achha laga aapka ye kalaam. Hazaaron daad qubool farmayen. Ye sher sabse achha laga:

aaj mere hauslaon ki haar yaqeeni hai.........!
dost bhi baithe hain  dushmanao'n ke beech.
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2010, 08:59:38 PM »
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bahot bahot shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2010, 09:02:30 PM »
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aap ne hamari ghazal ko pasand kiya saraha jiss ke liye hum aap ka teh dil se shukriya ada karte hain.
Quote from: Sophi on May 31, 2010, 04:58:08 AM
Waah Waah Waah.. MashaAllah Kya khoob Likha hai Nazar ji... Bahoot Khoobsoorati se aapne Zindgai ki sachaiyon ko apni Ghazal se bayan kiya hai...

Bahoot bahoot Umda Peshkash ! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2010, 09:06:08 PM »
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sajid bhai aap ki daad ka to mein intezar karta hoon .aap ne itna pasand kiya mei samajhta hoon ke kisi hadd tak meri koshish kaamyaab hogai,hausla afzai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.
Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 31, 2010, 08:06:10 AM
Marhaba Marhaba Marhaba.............kya kahe Nazar saheb har sher par aapko karodo daad, dil khush kar diya janab aapne.............Subhan_allah bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash.
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