ZARRAA - dasht dekha hai gulsitaaN dekha

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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2013, 08:03:00 PM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on September 09, 2013, 03:51:27 AM
Umda kalaam aur umda ashaar ! Meanings last me likhen to zyada acha rahe baaki jaisa thik lage.  Dheron daad kubool karen!

Janaab Kaash ji .... Pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya ..... Ji apki baat bhi bilkul baja hai .... Saath saath meaning likhne se ghazal ke flow mein rukawat parh sakti hai, khaas taur se un parhnewaalon ko jin ka Urdu ilm achchha hai aur jin ko translation ki darkaar naheen hai.... par us ka fayda ye hota hai ki jo parhnewaale meanings per dependant hain sher samajhne ke liye un ko suvidha hoti hai .... Aisa mujhe feedback mila hai ......Ab koyee aisa raasta sochna hoga ki donon baatein ho sakein .... Meanings
 sahi waqt par sahib jagah bhi mil jaayein aur ghazal ka flow bhi na toote ......ek baar phir apka tah e dIl se shukriya ada karte huwee ... Duaein
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«Reply #16 on: September 09, 2013, 09:35:21 PM »
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Saini sahab .... Is khoobsurat daad aur hauslafzaayee ka tah e dil se shukriya

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 09, 2013, 09:24:44 AM
ye ghazal yaa motyon kee ladee hai dheron daad

dasht dekha hai gulsitaaN dekha
saare aalam ko be-imaaN dekha 

(dasht = wilderness)

 
azm har hote naa-tawaaN dekha
har jatan jaate raayegaaN dekha

(azm = resolve, naa-tawaan = weak, jatan = effort, raayegaan = futile)


jitna waaiz ko sargaraaN dekha
utna rindoN ko meherbaaN dekha

(waaiz = preacher / advisor, sargaraaN = arrogant / haughty, rindoN = drunk people / carefree)


is ujarhti huee si bastee ke
paasbaanoN ko shaadmaaN dekha

(paasbaanoN = guardians / protectors, shaadmaaN = happy / mirthful


gul-e-khandaaN pe ro raha hai chaman
usne hai mausam-e-khizaaN dekha

(gul-e-khandaaN = blooming flowers)


raunak-e-raahguzar roz barhe
ik naya roz laa-makaaN dekha

(laa-makaaN = homeless)


aabla-pa koyee to tha guzra
pa ka giriyaaN sa ik nishaaN dekha

(aabla-pa = one with blisters on feet, giriyaaN = weeping)


dikh raha aaeene meiN jo chehra
yaad aata naheeN kahaaN dekha


jaam haathoN meiN pee naheeN sakte
baar isse bhi kya garaaN dekha

(baar = burden, garaaN = heavy)


gul hi gul khil wahaaN wahaaN uth’the
hum ne tujh ko jahaaN jahaaN dekha


tere mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamzaa tera kahaaN dekha

(mizhgaaN = eyelashes, kham = curves, ghamzaa = amourous glance)


baat tab tak lagee raqeeb ki sach
kehte jab tak tujhe n haaN dekha


ek dooje se yooN theeN ummeedeiN
ek ranjish ko darmiyaaN dekha

(ranjish = unpleasantness)


ghar ki veeraaniyoN se oob gaye
ja ke baazaar meiN makaaN dekha


ooNchee ooNchee imaaratoN ke makeeN
n zameeN dekhi aasmaaN dekha

(makeeN = residents)


jitna dekha bahaut hai dekh liya
maana zyaada naheeN jahaaN dekha


khaar “zarraa” chunooN to log kaheiN
koyee aisa n gul-fishaaN dekha

(khaar = thorns, gul-fishaaN = one who is scattering flowers)

-   ZARRAA
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«Reply #17 on: September 10, 2013, 02:12:10 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on September 09, 2013, 09:47:27 AM
wah wah bohut khub dear

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sahill ji ....
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«Reply #18 on: September 10, 2013, 10:11:33 AM »
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Wah wah wah Zarra jee
eik se eik badhkar ashaar
eik aala aur umda peshkash
bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur quoted ashaar par khususi daad
Mukesh ji .... Is ghazal ko kisi bhi layak samajhna inayat hai apki ... Hauslafzaayee ka Intehaayee shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #19 on: September 10, 2013, 03:40:28 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: September 10, 2013, 04:22:46 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on September 09, 2013, 10:20:10 AM
bhai jaan bahut waqt baad aapko padhne ka mauka mila, aur yakeen maaniye saaheb "it was everything to wait for if not more" maza aa gaya,meri dili mubaraqbaad aur ek rau qubool farmaiye...

Taish bhai ... Bahaut achchha lagta hai aap jaise fankaar se daad pa kar ... Pasand karne ka aur rau ka ka tah e dil se shukriya .... aur bahaut khushi ki ye silsila phir se shuru hua .... Take care ... Duaon ke saath .... Zaaraa
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«Reply #21 on: September 10, 2013, 07:47:58 PM »
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dili daad kubul kare zarra ji..

behad umdaa bahut khoobsurat..

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«Reply #22 on: September 10, 2013, 10:54:16 PM »
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Sahal ji .... Is ghazal ko pasand karne aur dil mein jagah dena ka bahaut bahaut shukriya

Quote from: sahal on September 09, 2013, 01:23:45 PM
dikh raha aaeene meiN jo chehra
yaad aata naheeN kahaaN dekha


ghar ki veeraaniyoN se oob gaye
ja ke baazaar meiN makaaN dekha

WAAH WAAH ZARRA JI AAPKI LIKHAI QABIL E TAREEF HAI ,
UMDA KALAAM ALA KHYAAL SE LABREZ

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«Reply #23 on: September 11, 2013, 12:40:39 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 09, 2013, 01:41:29 PM
dili daad, bas waaaah hi waaah
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Inaayat Iqtedaar ji .... Shukriya !!!
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«Reply #24 on: September 11, 2013, 09:03:37 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on September 09, 2013, 02:29:18 PM
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«Reply #25 on: September 11, 2013, 09:35:12 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 10, 2013, 03:40:28 PM
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behtareen, behtareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen, excellent, aa'la darje ki ghazal hai Zarra jee, jitni taa'reef karuN kam hai, Dil jhoom utha padh ke, mujhe hamesha yaad rahegi ye ghazal. Abhi Rau nahiN de sakta per baad meN Insha Allah zaroor.
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«Reply #27 on: September 12, 2013, 12:48:07 AM »
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Apki daad sar ankhon mein Touhid ji ..  Hauslafzaayee ka Behad shukrguzaar hoon

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 10, 2013, 07:47:58 PM
dili daad kubul kare zarra ji..

behad umdaa bahut khoobsurat..

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«Reply #29 on: September 12, 2013, 02:27:12 PM »
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Tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon Touhid ji is ghazal ko tawajjo dene ke liye aur kisi bhi laayak samajhne ke liye ... Meri jaanib se apko dheron duaein

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 10, 2013, 07:47:58 PM
dili daad kubul kare zarra ji..

behad umdaa bahut khoobsurat..

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