Zimmedariyo.N Ne Qaid Kar Liya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 28, 2012, 11:32:25 AM
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Ghar Ka Bojh Uthaane Waale Bachpan Ki TaQdeer Na Pooch..!
Bachcha Ghar Se Kaam Pe Nikla Aur Khilona Toot Gaya........!!

                          ~~Munnawar Raana~~



Dil Ka Dard Aankhon Ka Paani Dekhte Jaao
Kaise Khatam Hui Hai Kahaani Dekhte Jaao

Main Jo Chala Phir Lautkar Naa Aaunga..!!!!!
Zinda Hoon Ab Bhi, yeh Nishaani Dekhte Jaao

Aaj Main Hoon Kal Sirf Meri Baatei.N Hongee
Kaise Guzar Jaati Hai Zindegaani Dekhte Jaao

Suune Jaate Naa The Tumse Gile-Shikwe Dil ke....!!
ShikayateN Bhi Hote Hai Baayan Be-Zabaani Dekhte Jao

Ghar Se Nikla To ZimmedariyoN Ne Qaid Kar Liya
Bhaag-Daud Mein Dhal Jaati Hai Jawaani Dekhte Jaao

"Khwaish" Kalam Haath Mein Hai,To Sach Hi Likhegi..!!!!
Zindagi Se Juudi Hai Mere Lafzo.N Ki Rawaani Dekhte Jaao


              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2012, 11:35:01 AM »
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 icon_flower waah waah bahut khoob dili daad qubool farmaaye icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2012, 11:36:18 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 28, 2012, 11:32:25 AM
Ghar Ka Bojh Uthaane Waale Bachpan Ki TaQdeer Na Pooch..!
Bachcha Ghar Se Kaam Pe Nikla Aur Khilona Toot Gaya........!!

                          ~~Munnawar Raana~~



Dil Ka Dard Aankhon Ka Paani Dekhte Jaao
Kaise Khatam Hui Hai Kahaani Dekhte Jaao

Main Jo Chala Phir Lautkar Naa Aaunga..!!!!!
Zinda Hoon Ab Bhi, yeh Nishaani Dekhte Jaao Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aaj Main Hoon Kal Sirf Meri Baatei.N Hongee
Kaise Guzar Jaati Hai Zindegaani Dekhte Jaao

Suune Jaate Naa The Tumse Gile-Shikwe Dil ke....!!
ShikayateN Bhi Hote Hai Baayan Be-Zabaani Dekhte Jao

Ghar Se Nikla To ZimmedariyoN Ne Qaid Kar Liya
Bhaag-Daud Mein Dhal Jaati Hai Jawaani Dekhte Jaao

"Khwaish" Kalam Haath Mein Hai,To Sach Hi Likhegi..!!!!
Zindagi Se Juudi Hai Mere Lafzo.N Ki Rawaani Dekhte Jaao


              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~



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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2012, 11:39:48 AM »
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khawahish ji aapki  nazm hamesa  aam insan se judi hoti hai .. na hi koi wajandar shabd na hi koi asamanjash wali baat sidhe shbd aam aadmi se jude aam aadmi ki samjh mein aane wale....aur padhkar ek bar to har koi ise apni gazal hi samjhta hoga apni kahani ho samjhta hoga.......kul milakar fankar to bahut se hote hai par adakar aisa jo hum khud ke ander dekh se wo aap lage.................

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yeh sirf is rachna ke liye nahi aapki har rachna ke liye.... happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2012, 02:40:30 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Khwaish Jee. Daad Qubool Kijiye

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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2012, 03:33:39 PM »
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good hai jee
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2012, 05:34:07 PM »
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lajawaab peshkash khwaish ji--
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2012, 10:43:55 PM »
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Har Baar Aap Zindagi Ki Ek Nayi Tasweer Saamne Laate Hain,.
Bohat Achchi Tarah Se Samjhaaya Hai Apne Zimmedaari Ke Baare Mein,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahe, May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2012, 01:26:22 AM »
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khawahish ji aapki kalam hamesa lajawab hi likhti hai. tareef ke liye shabd kam.........


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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2012, 06:33:32 AM »
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bahut khoob khwahishji...

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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2012, 08:16:17 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 28, 2012, 11:35:01 AM
icon_flower waah waah bahut khoob dili daad qubool farmaaye icon_flower


Saheb Aapki Daad Sar AankhoN Par..

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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2012, 11:30:47 AM »
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Khwaish ji . Aap  ki  nigaarishaat hamesha hi qabil e daad aur qaabil e deed  hoti  hain . Qabil e daad  isliye ki inmein  aksar koi  aham mouzu nazm kiya jaata hai jo zahn ko jhinjhorta hai aur qabil e deed is liye ki aap inke foreword ke taur per kisi achhe  shaair ka  koi topical sher bhi dete hain . Mazaa do aatsha ho jaata hai ... Aaj kal kam login kar paa raha hoon ,shaayed isi wajah se yeh khubsurat kalaam padhne mein taakheer ho gai.Eik baar phir mubarakbaad aur duaaein . HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2012, 12:12:14 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2012, 02:07:51 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2012, 02:30:29 PM »
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khoob farmayaa Applause Applause Applause
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