~ ~ ~ zinda hu...

by thinkhattk on November 16, 2009, 09:16:34 AM
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Zaher to zaher tha mene pee bhi liya,
jalte he log ki me zinda hu kese??
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2009, 12:22:02 PM »
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Zahar Ko Amrit samjh kar pee liya
Meine to usme bhi tere pyar dekha
Isliye Usse bina anjam soche pee liya
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2009, 07:36:31 AM »
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Meera ki bhakti ko pehchante nahi ye log
Naari k prem ki shakti ko jaante nahi ye log

Jaisa nik-name waisa he hai soach aur josh tera
Zehar KA ASAR N hone se pareshaan hai aashiq tera
Zinda hai tu ye maanta he nahi wo bewaffa bechara
Jalta hai ab wo do shamaaon k beech parwaana tera



Quote from: thinkhattk on November 16, 2009, 09:16:34 AM

Zaher to zaher tha mene pee bhi liya,
jalte he log ki me zinda hu kese??
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pankshivam
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2009, 04:11:51 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Devangi ji  Applause Applause Applause
Nice Attempt Rishi & Koyal Ji Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2009, 04:32:33 AM »
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Nice One THTK
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2009, 04:40:05 AM »
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thanku....
rishi ji,pankaj ji,rajesh ji....
very nice koyal ji....
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2009, 05:43:59 AM »
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Bahut khoob Deevangi ji,Rishi ji,Koyal ji,lovely creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2009, 05:48:30 AM »
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In response of Koyal post.

Radha ka Meera ka to sabhi zikr karte hain
Rukmani ko kyon magar koi yaad nahin karta
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2009, 09:33:20 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on November 25, 2009, 04:11:51 AM
Bahoot Khoob Devangi ji  Applause Applause Applause
Nice Attempt Rishi & Koyal Ji Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 25, 2009, 05:43:59 AM
Bahut khoob Deevangi ji,Rishi ji,Koyal ji,lovely creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnx Pankaj Bro and Madhu JI
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2009, 05:01:49 PM »
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Thanks Pankji....

Quote from: pankshivam on November 25, 2009, 04:11:51 AM
Bahoot Khoob Devangi ji  Applause Applause Applause
Nice Attempt Rishi & Koyal Ji Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2009, 05:12:28 PM »
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Tariff tou karvi padse Dear Mani-ben.....do line ka jawaab chhen 6 line mai diya hai.... Winking Winking Winking Winking

Milawat ka jamaana hai,Naqli ka bol baala hai
Zehar jo peeya tha sakhi tune wo shudh paani kaala hai


Quote from: thinkhattk on November 25, 2009, 04:40:05 AM
thanku....
rishi ji,pankaj ji,rajesh ji....
very nice koyal ji....
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«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2009, 05:15:32 PM »
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Thanks...Madhu-di....

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 25, 2009, 05:43:59 AM
Bahut khoob Deevangi ji,Rishi ji,Koyal ji,lovely creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2009, 05:30:02 PM »
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Riyaz106ji....
Pyarr ko he yaad karte hain log.....
Rukmani ke pyarr k charche he nahi huye...

Ek poem yo par he padhi thee..."Krishnalila"...by Smardiaji....us ka ek stanza pesh hai...Rukmani ke naam...

"Hey Kanhiya !
Main bhi tumhari tarah
Premlila ka aanand
Uthana chahta hu
Radha tou shayad
Mil bhi jay
Per………
Rukmani si bharya kahan pau
Jo Radha ko sah paye



Quote from: riyaz106 on November 25, 2009, 05:48:30 AM
In response of Koyal post.

Radha ka Meera ka to sabhi zikr karte hain
Rukmani ko kyon magar koi yaad nahin karta
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