zindagi amaanat rahi.....(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 19, 2012, 06:35:03 PM
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                          sabab udaasii kaa wo tab poochey hai.!
                          lagii nikalney rooh jab poochey hai.!!


                          mayyat ameer kii bhi ameer lagey hai.!
                          kaun ghareeb ko yahaan kab poochey hai.!


                          hai khushnumaa zindagi vasiyat bann ne tak.!
                          ki khairiyat betaa her shab poochey hai.!


                          kiyaa be-fikrii sey kharch daulat tooney apni.!
                          huaa sifer(zero) khazaanaa hisaab abb poochey hai.!

                        
                          hai amaanat zindagi teri, aye khamosh sunnn.!
                          baad maut ke  tujhsey rab poohey hai.!!
                          
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2012, 06:38:04 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 19, 2012, 06:35:03 PM


                          sabab udaasii kaa wo tab poochey hai.!
                          lagii nikalney rooh jab poochey hai.!!


                          mayyat ameer kii bhi ameer lagey hai.!
                          kaun ghareeb ko yahaan kab poochey hai.!


                          hai khushnumaa zindagi vasiyat bann ne tak.!
                          khairiyat betaa her shab poochey hai.!


                          kiyaa be-fikrii sey kharch daulat tooney apni.!
                          huaa sifer(zero) khazaanaa hisaab abb poochey hai.!

                         
                          hai amaanat zindagi teri, aye khamosh sunnn.!
                          baad maut ke  tujhsey rab poohey hai.!!
                         


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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2012, 07:43:25 PM »
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bahot aache ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 12:40:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khamosh jee.
acchi ghazal hai. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 12:43:30 AM »
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zabardast.. bahut hi umda bahut badhiya lajwab....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2012, 02:45:20 AM »
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bahut khub K_A JI
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2012, 03:22:22 AM »
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bahut umda khamoshji, dhero dad, id mubarak, kuchh id mubarak par likhney ki koshish ki hai, padhiyega jaroor, 
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2012, 04:17:56 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 19, 2012, 06:35:03 PM


                          sabab udaasii kaa wo tab poochey hai.!
                          lagii nikalney rooh jab poochey hai.!!


                          mayyat ameer kii bhi ameer lagey hai.!
                          kaun ghareeb ko yahaan kab poochey hai.!


                          hai khushnumaa zindagi vasiyat bann ne tak.!
                          ki khairiyat betaa her shab poochey hai.!


                          kiyaa be-fikrii sey kharch daulat tooney apni.!
                          huaa sifer(zero) khazaanaa hisaab abb poochey hai.!

                         
                          hai amaanat zindagi teri, aye khamosh sunnn.!
                          baad maut ke  tujhsey rab poohey hai.!!
                         


Waah waah khamosh ji Kya khub umda  khayalaat pesh kiye hain apne is gazal me ek se badh ek .... dheron daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kariye..Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2012, 11:49:31 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob K_A ji..!!!
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on August 19, 2012, 06:38:04 PM
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Quote from: nirala on August 19, 2012, 07:43:25 PM
bahot aache ji

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Bahut khoob Khamosh jee.
acchi ghazal hai. Applause Applause

THANX
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 20, 2012, 12:43:30 AM
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