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zindagi ka har lamhaa ek judaa ehsaas liye hota hai.
kabhi dil ye hanstaa hai kabhi kabhi ye rota hai.
kabhi pyar mein lut jataa hai .
kabhi nafrat mein jal jaataa hai.
kabhi din mein bhi sotaa hai.
kabhi raaton ko jagaataa hai.
zindagi ka har lamhaa judaa ehsaas liye hota hai.
kabhi hoti hai jisse ummeed-e-karam
wahi aksar khaali haath lautataa hai.
kabhi zindagi lagti haseen hai.
kabhi dil maut se fariyaad kartaa hai.
kahaan jeete hain hum aaj ko.
kabhi gujre waqt ko yaad kartaa hai.
kabhi aane wale waqton ka khwab dekhta hai.
zindagi ka har lamha juda ehsaas liye hota hai.
waqt ke saath saath sab kuch badal jataa hai.
nazaare badal jaate hain nazr badal jaati hain.
hum yun hi ilzaam dete hain zamane ko
kabhi khud hume apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hota hai.
kabhi maa lagti hai khudaa se zayadaa ek roz
usi aulaad ko uska saaya bhi bhaari lagtaa hai.
zindagi ka har lamhaa judaa ehsaas liye hota hai.
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 11:18:54 AM » |
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Bahut hi shandaar likha hai Suresh ji. Padhkar bahut achha laga. Bahot umda aur purkashish. Marhaba. Aajkal aapka Yo par aana kam hota hai.
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 11:22:09 AM » |
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Humesha Ki Tarah..
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji 
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 11:30:24 AM » |
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Shukriya Riyaz ji .ki aapne pasand farmaaya.bahut achha lagaa .hausla afzahi karte rahen.Aajkal zindagi ne gheraa hua hai. fir bhi koshish jaari rahegi. Bahut hi shandaar likha hai Suresh ji. Padhkar bahut achha laga. Bahot umda aur purkashish. Marhaba. Aajkal aapka Yo par aana kam hota hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 11:33:47 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 11:38:58 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Khwaishji.ye hamesha ki tarhaa ka matlab mere liye achha nahin hai.I dont like my own poems.I like all written by you.
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 11:43:56 AM » |
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thanx khwaishji. mutual understanding is very good. And I Like All Poetries Written By you.. |
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 11:57:44 AM » |
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bahut shukriya aapka hausla afzahi ke liye .Kaashji. |
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2010, 12:53:20 PM » |
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likha hai aapne Suresh ji... "zindagi ha har lamhaa juda ehsaas liye hota hai"... bahut sahi kaha hai aapne... waise bhi agar har lamha ek sa ho jaaaye to zindagi jeene ka mazaa hi khatam ho jaaye... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2010, 01:07:25 PM » |
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shukriya klaskar ji. bahut khoobsurat kavita likha hai aapne Suresh ji... "zindagi ha har lamhaa juda ehsaas liye hota hai"... bahut sahi kaha hai aapne... waise bhi agar har lamha ek sa ho jaaaye to zindagi jeene ka mazaa hi khatam ho jaaye... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2010, 02:53:53 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji......
Zindagi ka har lamha ek judaa ehsaas liye hota hai
har lamha zindagi ka jeene ke liye hota hai
jab koi kuch paata hai toh bahut khush hota hai
gar koi kuch khota hai toh kyun rota hai
kya saath laya tha kya saath le jaana hota hai
fir bhi na jaane insaan kyun itna udaas hota hai
kyun nahi samajhta insaan kuch din ka mehmaan hota hai
kuch lamha ghum toh kuch lamha khushi ka hota hai
ro kar toh zindagi mein kuch haasil nahi hota hai
zindagi wah hi jeeta hai jo har lamha khush hota hai
zindagi ka har lamha uska saath deta hai jisko maa-baap ka ashriwaad hota hai
jo thukraye apne maa-baap ko wo insaan bada badnaseeb hota hai
bhul jaata hai ki kal usko bhi kisi ka maa-baap banna hota hai
jab uski aulad uska saath nahi deti toh fir kyun rota hai
zindagi ka har lamha ek judaa ehsaas liye hota hai
apne maa-baap ki seva karna bhi ek khaas ehsaas hota hai....
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2010, 09:45:50 PM » |
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Bahut achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Suresh Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2010, 10:52:44 PM » |
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SUresh JI Mind blowing .......
Vry vry nyc.......
YH its real lyf saab kuch likh diya aap ne
vry gud ......
LYK IT
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 SUCH, AAPNE LAST KI LINE'S ME KHOOB KAHA KI MAA BAAP BHI BOJH LAGNE LAGTE HAIN. BADNASEEB HAIN WO LOG JO MAA BAAP KA PYAR NAHI PAATE,APNI GALTIYON SE. KYA BAAT SANGWAN JI. BAHUT KHOOB.
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2010, 10:16:23 AM » |
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wah cara ji wah aapke jawaab ka hume khaas intezaar hota hai. bahut umdaa baat kahi hai aapne. Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji......
Zindagi ka har lamha ek judaa ehsaas liye hota hai
har lamha zindagi ka jeene ke liye hota hai
jab koi kuch paata hai toh bahut khush hota hai
gar koi kuch khota hai toh kyun rota hai
kya saath laya tha kya saath le jaana hota hai
fir bhi na jaane insaan kyun itna udaas hota hai
kyun nahi samajhta insaan kuch din ka mehmaan hota hai
kuch lamha ghum toh kuch lamha khushi ka hota hai
ro kar toh zindagi mein kuch haasil nahi hota hai
zindagi wah hi jeeta hai jo har lamha khush hota hai
zindagi ka har lamha uska saath deta hai jisko maa-baap ka ashriwaad hota hai
jo thukraye apne maa-baap ko wo insaan bada badnaseeb hota hai
bhul jaata hai ki kal usko bhi kisi ka maa-baap banna hota hai
jab uski aulad uska saath nahi deti toh fir kyun rota hai
zindagi ka har lamha ek judaa ehsaas liye hota hai
apne maa-baap ki seva karna bhi ek khaas ehsaas hota hai....
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