zindagi ke char din

by samir_bc on November 08, 2008, 06:55:57 AM
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ek din guzar gaya duniya se bekhaber
                     [ bachpan ke woh din]
ek din guzar gaya masti me mauj me  
                     [ jawani ki mauj masti]
ek din guzar gaya utha ke zimmedariya
                     [ shadi, naukri, bachcho ki padai]
ek din guzar gaya yaadon me teeno din ki
                     [ akhri padao zindagi ka]


yunhi tamam zindagi ke chaar din kiye.



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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2008, 07:26:06 AM »
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bohat khoobsurti se samir tumne zindagi ke 4 dino ka safar pura kiya apne is kalam me very good.
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2008, 07:43:49 AM »
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Bahut achche se aap ne chaar dino ko bayan kiya hai Samir Ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2008, 04:01:23 PM »
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Samir ji bohat khoob Applause
Zindagi ke 4 din aapne kitni achche se kahe hai g88... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2008, 04:53:24 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 08, 2008, 07:26:06 AM
bohat khoobsurti se samir tumne zindagi ke 4 dino ka safar pura kiya apne is kalam me very good.

thanks sajid ji, bus koshish ki likhne ki. thanks apko achi lagi.
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2008, 04:54:11 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 08, 2008, 07:43:49 AM
Bahut achche se aap ne chaar dino ko bayan kiya hai Samir Ji


shukriya rajesh ji.
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2008, 04:55:21 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on November 08, 2008, 04:01:23 PM
Samir ji bohat khoob Applause
Zindagi ke 4 din aapne kitni achche se kahe hai g88... Thumbs UP

thanks honey ji, apko pasand aya.
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2008, 05:54:22 PM »
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Very Nice Lines Samir...Zindagi ki talakh haqeeqat khol ke rakh di, chaar lines main !
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2008, 06:25:04 PM »
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Bahut Khoob!! Socha jaaye, to vaakai mein bahut tez guzar jaati hai yeh zindagi.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2008, 10:57:45 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on November 08, 2008, 05:54:22 PM
Very Nice Lines Samir...Zindagi ki talakh haqeeqat khol ke rakh di, chaar lines main !
Quote from: khwaish on November 08, 2008, 06:25:04 PM
Bahut Khoob!! Socha jaaye, to vaakai mein bahut tez guzar jaati hai yeh zindagi.. Applause Applause

bahot bahot shukriya ap dono ka, thanks celmira ji, khwaish ji.
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