Zindagi ke saat panno par...

by prakrati on May 02, 2011, 04:59:50 AM
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hi.
Main abhi 12 years ki hun aur ye kavita maine ek sal pahle likhi thi. ye mujhe apni sabhi kavitao mani sabse pasand hai. Aapko kaisi lagi apne vichar bataiye.
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"Zindgi ke saat panno par.."

Zindgi ke in saat panno par
Ek chhota sa shabd kho gaya.
“Bachpan” ne dhundha pahle panne par,
“Shuruaat” ne dhundha dusre panne par,
Dono hue nakam,
Fir....
“Darr” ne kaha kyon na ham miljul kar dhundhe,
Aur kaam shuru hua,
Par chhathe panne tak pahunchne par,
Sab thak gaye.
Lekin...
“Mehnat” apne dost “Sahas” ko lekar
Saatven panne par pahunchi,
Un dono ne
Sabse pahle dhundh lia
Us shabad ko jo bahut zaruri hai
Aur wo shabad hai
“Maut” ek yesa shabad,
Jo tab likha jata hai
Jab...
“Zindagi” ka “Ant” hota hai.

Parakrati

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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2011, 05:08:41 AM »
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Hamari yadon ko dil me aab tak saja rkha hai..
Wo kahte to zaroor hai....♥....mujhe aap se mohabbat nahi..
Bad-e-wafa ....Kya haseen jhoot mujh se chupa rkha hai.....♥♫
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2011, 06:23:52 AM »
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kya baat hai prakrati...

itni kam umr main itne gahra khyal.... bahut khub.... likhti raho... ek din bahut naam ho tumhara....

khush raho... likhto raho...
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2011, 07:14:45 AM »
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bohut khoob prakarti kya sach ko doonda hai sath pano mein gud
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2011, 07:20:53 AM »
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Shayed yeh taaza si judai ka tha assar
har shakal bus kuch teri surat si ho gayi
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 08:34:18 PM »
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Hello Prakurti Jee Usual Smile

Realy nice to read you Usual Smile.... You are a good talent hunted person in poetry... It's very true and and you are written it very well an expression and thought are very good .. Keep it up dear Usual Smile

Keep writting, Keep posting May God bless You .. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2011, 03:34:45 AM »
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thank u ishuji
thank u saahilji
thank u manjumji
thank u parwazji

thaks for all of u
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2011, 03:42:19 AM »
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prakriti………
nice poetry by u…
bht ghahri soch h aapki…
keep it up dear…
han thoda sa apna bachpana aur natkhatpan,chanchlta bhi rahne dena apni poetry me bachchi… Usual SmileUsual Smile

khus raho
god bless u
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2011, 11:39:58 AM »
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thanks kb bhaia

thanks
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2011, 11:44:03 AM »
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very good writing
prakriti ji.
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2011, 11:46:22 AM »
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thanks suresh sir
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2011, 11:47:35 AM »
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Prakarti Ji bahut bahut Khoob!!!

Aapne Sach mein bahut Gehri Baatein kehdi Par jaise Killbill Ji ne kaha,Woh sach hai,Main Bhi yehi kahunga, Soch Zaroor Apne Gehri rakho Par Saath-saath Mein Zindagi Ko Zinda-dilli Se jeeo..Abhi Umar Hi kya Hai??

Aap Humesha khush raho... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2011, 11:53:20 AM »
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thanks khwaish sir

ji bhaia main aapki baton ko yad rakhugi aur use apnaungi bhi.

thanks for ur support
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2011, 12:54:31 PM »
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bahna o bahna………:)Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2011, 05:41:27 AM »
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ji bhaiya mere bhaiya
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