Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 19, 2010, 10:44:41 AM
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Insaan Kayi Baar Apni Zindagi Se,Kuch Yuh Pareshaan Ho jaata Hai Ke Chaah Kar Bhi Usse Koi Nayi Raah Nazar Nahi Aati Aur Iss Duniya Mein Shayad Hi koi Aisa Insaan Ho,Jo Yeh keh sake Ke Mujhe Kisi Baat Ka Koi Gham Nahi Yaa Apni Zindagi Se Koi Shikayat Nahi..Iss Nazm Mein Ek Aise Insaan Ka Zikr Kar Raha Hoon Jo khud Se Yeh Baat Kehta Hai Ke Zindagi Khud mujhe Badalte waqt Ke saath Jeena Sikhati Hai..Iss Nazm Ko Zaroor Padhiyega..

Zindagi Ko kaise Jeena Hai
Yeh Zindagi Khud Mujhe Seekha Gayi..

Auron Ko Rota Dekh,Yeh Aankhein Bhi Ro Padhti Thi
Ab To Aadat Hi Nahi Rone Ki,
Aankhon Ko Yeh pathar Sa Bana Gayi..

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...

Yahan Dard Hi Dard Ki Dawa Hai!!
Yeh Haqeeqat Hai,
Haqeeqat Se Yeh roobaroo Karwa Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...

Jisse Hum Apna Maante Hai
Usse Khud Se Door Jaate Dekh Kabhi Alwida Nahi Keh Paate
Par Ab To Tanhaiyon Se Yeh Dosti karwa Gayi

Zindagi khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi....

Kuch Benaam Si Lakeeron Ko
Kaagaz Par Utaarta Raha!!
Hairaan Hoon, Apne Hi jazbaaton ko Yeh Shayari Bana Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...

Doston se Waffa Ki umeede Naa Rahi Ab!!
Guzarte Hue Daur ke Saath-Saath,
Badalte Hue Waqt Ki Tasveer Dikha gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi....

Duniya Ke Iss Bazaar Mein,
Koi Gham Ka Khareedaar Nahi!!!
Yeh Aaj Ke Duniya Ki Sachai Hai Jo Mere Rooh Mein Sama Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi....

"Khwaish" Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho,Har Haal Mein Muskuraana Zaroori Hai!!
Zinda Rehne ka Jazba Bhi Ek Aag Ki Tarah Hai,
Jo Mere Nas-Nas Mein Laga Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi.....


                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2010, 03:11:17 PM »
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Wah...Bas kya kahoun main tariff main...Yeh nazm mere dil main sama gayi...bahaut khoob...kuch lines toh bahaut hi sunder hai...Tanhayi se dosti..wah..shayad mere liye hi likha hai...bahaut ache... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2010, 03:49:23 PM »
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Iss nazm ki taarif kya karu....zindagi ki sachaayi ko byaan karti aapki ye nazm kai anjaane swaalon k jwaab de gayi......sach kha aapne...zinda rehna bhi ek jazba hai...bas ye jazba har shakhs mein kayam rahe.....bas zindagi tanha basar na ho.....ho sakein toh tanhaiyon se zindagi ki dosti mat karvaiyega khwaish ji.... Usual Smile.........itni acchi nazm k liye dhero taaliyan........
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause....................
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2010, 09:49:03 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish sahaab,..

Yahan Dard Hi Dard Ki Dawa Hai!!
Yeh Haqeeqat Hai,
Haqeeqat Se Yeh roobaroo Karwa Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...


Kuch Benaam Si Lakeeron Ko
Kaagaz Par Utaarta Raha!!
Hairaan Hoon, Apne Hi jazbaaton ko Yeh Shayari Bana Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...

Doston se Waffa Ki umeede Naa Rahi Ab!!
Guzarte Hue Daur ke Saath-Saath,
Badalte Hue Waqt Ki Tasveer Dikha gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi....

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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2010, 11:54:48 PM »
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Bhut hi khoob ...........kya bolon ....  Applause Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP hello2 icon_salut

bilcul sach hai

Jindgi khud jeena sikha hi deti hai
Roti hui ankhon ko bi hansa deti hai
Zara bi kafa na ho eh jindgi jeene vale
Tokar kha ke b yeh chalna sikha hi deti hai
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2010, 05:40:20 AM »
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Bahut hi achchhi peshkash Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2010, 05:41:33 AM »
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Nice response Ghouri Ji N  Neel Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2010, 06:01:09 AM »
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Bahut umda poem likhi hai Khwaish ji. Padhkar kuchh sochne majboor ho gaya. Haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne. Bahot khoob.

Duniya Ke Iss Bazaar Mein,
Koi Gham Ka Khareedaar Nahi!!!
Yeh Aaj Ke Duniya Ki Sachai Hai Jo Mere Rooh Mein Sama Gayi
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2010, 07:21:46 AM »
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Wah...Bas kya kahoun main tariff main...Yeh nazm mere dil main sama gayi...bahaut khoob...kuch lines toh bahaut hi sunder hai...Tanhayi se dosti..wah..shayad mere liye hi likha hai...bahaut ache... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya,Iss Nazm Ke Ehsaas Ko Samjha..

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2010, 09:47:57 AM »
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Iss nazm ki taarif kya karu....zindagi ki sachaayi ko byaan karti aapki ye nazm kai anjaane swaalon k jwaab de gayi......sach kha aapne...zinda rehna bhi ek jazba hai...bas ye jazba har shakhs mein kayam rahe.....bas zindagi tanha basar na ho.....ho sakein toh tanhaiyon se zindagi ki dosti mat karvaiyega khwaish ji.... Usual Smile.........itni acchi nazm k liye dhero taaliyan........
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause....................

Inn Der Saari taaliyon ke Liye Teh Dil Se shukriya Pooja..

Aapne Iss Nazm ke Dard Ko Sahi Maayne Mein Samjha..

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Aap Ka Teh Dil se Shukriya Pooja..

Aage Bhi Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiye.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2010, 02:52:12 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish sahaab,..

Yahan Dard Hi Dard Ki Dawa Hai!!
Yeh Haqeeqat Hai,
Haqeeqat Se Yeh roobaroo Karwa Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...


Kuch Benaam Si Lakeeron Ko
Kaagaz Par Utaarta Raha!!
Hairaan Hoon, Apne Hi jazbaaton ko Yeh Shayari Bana Gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi...

Doston se Waffa Ki umeede Naa Rahi Ab!!
Guzarte Hue Daur ke Saath-Saath,
Badalte Hue Waqt Ki Tasveer Dikha gayi

Zindagi Khud Mujhe Jeena Seekha Gayi....



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Nazar Saheb Aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2010, 09:52:15 AM »
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Bhut hi khoob ...........kya bolon ....  Applause Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP hello2 icon_salut

bilcul sach hai

Jindgi khud jeena sikha hi deti hai
Roti hui ankhon ko bi hansa deti hai
Zara bi kafa na ho eh jindgi jeene vale
Tokar kha ke b yeh chalna sikha hi deti hai

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Neelji.. Usual Smile

Aapne Bhi Bahut Khoob Likha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2010, 10:10:14 AM »
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Bahut hi achchhi peshkash Khwaish Ji

Bahut bahut Shukriya Rajeshji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: April 22, 2010, 08:42:34 AM »
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Bahut umda poem likhi hai Khwaish ji. Padhkar kuchh sochne majboor ho gaya. Haqeeqat bayaan ki hai aapne. Bahot khoob.

Duniya Ke Iss Bazaar Mein,
Koi Gham Ka Khareedaar Nahi!!!
Yeh Aaj Ke Duniya Ki Sachai Hai Jo Mere Rooh Mein Sama Gayi

Riyaz Ji Aapne Iss Nazm Ko Baariki Se Padha,Iss Ehsaas Ko Samjha,teh Dil se Aapka Shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2010, 02:00:56 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish DostClapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Ek baar phir se apni shayari ke zariye Zindagi ki talkh haqeeqat se rubru karwa diya aapne.... BOhot hi Khoob !!
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