zindagi ki kitaab meiN hum ne - ZARRAA

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«Reply #15 on: May 26, 2013, 04:34:49 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on May 25, 2013, 05:25:38 PM
waah waaah zarra lajwaab kalaam pesh kiya hai apne
ek rau to banta hai
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Sahal ji ... Daad aur rau ke liye bahaut bahaut shukriya
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«Reply #16 on: May 26, 2013, 04:36:53 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on May 25, 2013, 05:33:04 PM
waa waa bohat bohat khubsurat ghazal,...........bohat bohat c daad aik rau ke saath,............
Laaiba ji .... Inaayat ... Daad aur rau ka shukriya
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«Reply #17 on: May 26, 2013, 05:21:52 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 25, 2013, 05:53:32 PM

gr8888888888888 ghazal ,sir but still lengthy

Thank you MB ji .... Haan length ka zaroor gunrhgaar hoon Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 26, 2013, 05:25:52 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 25, 2013, 06:32:39 PM
Zarra sahib, bahut khubsurat ghazal hai, meyaari ashaar se murassa.
Bahut bahut mubarakbaad. Isi tarah Bazm ki rounaq barhaate rahye.

Janaab Hassan sahab .... Apki zarranawaazee aur hausla afzaaee ka shukriya ada karne ko alfaaz kam parh rahein hain. Jis tarah aap is bazm ki aur hum shoraon ki rehnumaaee karte hain uske hum qarzdaar hain ...sabhi duaon ke saath .... Zarraa
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«Reply #19 on: May 26, 2013, 05:33:24 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on May 25, 2013, 06:47:54 PM
BOHUT KHUB ZARAA JI BOHUT UMDA GHAZAL WAAAH

Saahill ji apka bahaut bahaut shukriya
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«Reply #20 on: May 27, 2013, 02:27:57 PM »
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Quote from: NeelamJ on May 25, 2013, 07:01:22 PM
Very nice creation, ZARRAA

Thank you do much Neelam
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«Reply #21 on: May 27, 2013, 02:29:11 PM »
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Quote from: rahul sengar on May 25, 2013, 07:17:59 PM
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Thank you very much Rahul
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«Reply #22 on: May 27, 2013, 02:31:39 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 25, 2013, 07:23:49 PM
dard-e-dil ho hi phir gaye uriyaaN
laakh rak’kha hijaab meiN hum ne

chaaNdnee raat aur hasrateiN chand
gharq kar deeN sharaab meiN hum ne

ye do ashaar mujhe khoob bhaaye.

Kya baat hai Zarra saheb
ek se ek umda ashaar..
dil daad qubool farmaayen


Mukesh ji ... apki lagaataar hausla-afzaaee aur protsaahan ka Behad shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #23 on: May 27, 2013, 02:33:27 PM »
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Awesome zarra ji. behad umda kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne. har sher bahut bahut khoob hai. bahut pyaare ehsaas aur khayalath se saji hai aapki yeh ghazal. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare


Thank you so much for those kind words Aqsh ji ...... am very grateful !!!
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«Reply #24 on: May 27, 2013, 02:34:14 PM »
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wah zarraa saaheb, wah, kya baat hai, bahut hi kasi hui ghazal kahi hai aapne, aur vo khana kharaab aur sharaab wale sher ke to kehne hi kya, bas yahi darkhwast hai aapse, ki aage bhi aap yuNhi likhte raheN, ahcha lagta hai aapko padhna....!!
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«Reply #25 on: May 27, 2013, 08:32:42 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 25, 2013, 09:31:04 PM

Zarra Sahaab Aadaab....!



Janab Aap jaise umdaa shayaroN ki itni gair hazeri bazm ko ronaq ko kam karti hai... Ummid hai aap humari baat samjheN ho... Usual Smile


Waise itni umdaa kalaam ke saath aaye haiN aapke ke shikayat ka koi chance hi nahi rakha aapne... Usual Smile
Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.. bade hi gehre aur pur asar ashaar rahe... behad khoob.. Usual Smile

Is umda kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Parwaaz Sahaab .... Aadaad .... Janaab agar koyee aise apne pan se shikaayat kare to usse dil ko bahaut sukoon milta hai .... ji apki baat sar aankhon par ....Is mohabbat bhare reply ka tah e dil se shukriya .... Ji pooree koshish rahegi ki kitna ban parhe utni khidmat kar paaoon is bazm ki aur iske pyaare Dotson ki .... Janaab apne jis shauq se ghazal ko parha aur jis dariyadilee se daad ata ki uska main waqayee behad shukrguzaar hoon aur apki hauslafzaayee se ek naya utsaah bhi mila hai .... dheron duaon ke saath .... Zarraa
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«Reply #26 on: May 27, 2013, 08:35:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 25, 2013, 10:25:01 PM
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Wah,Wah,Wah Zarra sabab,
Bahut umda ghazal kahi hai aapne.Urdu ke difficult words ke meaning likhne se aik aam reader ko aapki ghazal ko sakjhne me aasaani hogi.Really very nice.Khass taur pe aapka ye sher bahut pasand aaya-

hum ko sabzah babool meiN bhi mila
khaar paaye gulaab meiN hum ne


Sudhir ji .... Pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya .... Really grateful for your kind words
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«Reply #27 on: May 27, 2013, 09:06:23 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 25, 2013, 11:23:46 PM
Har ek lafz.. har ek sher lajawab.. bahut bahut umda... sach kahu maza aa gaya padh ke.. bahut khubsurat peshkash.. Usual Smile
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Janaab ... Itne dil se daad dene ke liye aapka Behad shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #28 on: May 27, 2013, 09:40:30 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khooob Zarraa Ji... Ek Se Badhkar Ek Ashaar..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat..

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«Reply #29 on: May 28, 2013, 02:12:38 AM »
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Quote from: Tuhina on May 26, 2013, 02:19:15 AM
Zarra   sahiba  aapke   khayal ,  shabd  aur  urdu  bhasha  pe  pakad   lajavaab   hai  ,   dheron      badhaiyan   aapko .......   

Tuhina ji ... Apki qadrdaanee ke liye apka tah e dil se shukriya ada karta hoon
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