**Zindagi ko jeena seekho** by Rahim

by dead heart on April 21, 2010, 08:36:15 PM
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Yeh nazm kuch khaas hai..Hm pehle toh main apna naam dalta tha mager aj se 'Khamosh' dala karunga...
Dusri baat yeh ke yeh meri ek udaas dost ko dedicated hai...Allah usse khush rakhe...Aur usse hi kya, tamam dukhi dilon ko, toote bikhre dilon ko dedicated hai...Hamesha khush rakhe Allah sabhi ko..Ameen..
Ek sandesh dena chahta hoon...Thorra sa waqt iss nazm ko zaroor dijiyega..
Dobara kehta hoon; ek bahaut khaas nazm hai yeh mere liye...

Apne ghirte askhon ko peena seekho,
Harke dobara jeetna seekho,
Koi insaan ke dokhe se toot na jana doston,
Main kehta hoon ghirke utna seekho,
Iss khubsoorat zindagi ko jeena seekho…

Hai yeh ek nayab tofa Allah ka,
Isse istamal karna seekho,
Jo tumhe na mile woh tumhara kabhi tha hi nahin,
Iss haqeeqat ko khud main basana seekho,
Iss haseen zindagi ko jeena seekho…

Waise toh kayi log chorr jaenge tumhe zindagi main,
Aise musafiron ko bhoolna seekho,
Manta hoon ke asan nahin ateet ko bhoolna,
Mager dil se koshish karna seekho,
Iss badalti zindagi main zindagi ko jeena seekho…

Mat gawao apni mohobat unke peeche jo tumhe nahin chahte,
Jo tumhe mohobat karte hai unke saath rehna seekho,
Manta hai ‘Khamosh’ ke asar chorr jata hai pehla pyaar,
Mager jo tumpe mare; usse apnana seekho,
Manlo baat aur aur bhool jao apne ateet ko,
Har nayi raah par ek nayi shuruwat karna seekho,
Musafir toh ate jate rahenge raah-e-zindagi main,
Dokhe bazon ko bhool; har naye musafir ko dil main jagah dena seekho,
Allah ne tumhare liye bhi koi na koi banaya hoga,
Uss haseen hamsafar ko talash karna seekho,
‘Khamosh’  toh muskuraega ab se zindagi main,
Tum saab doston se bhi darkhwast karta hai,
Iss khubsoorat zindagi ko jeena seekho…


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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 09:49:36 PM »
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bahut khoob Rahim bhai... ab aap alag likhne lage hain... dard se rishta tod chalen hain aap bhi... lagta hai hamari baaton ka kuch kuch asar hua hai aap pe... shukriya dost... sach kaha aapne humein zindagi ko jeena sikhna chahiye... ye hunar bahut kam logo me hoti hai jo sahi mayine me zindagi ko jeete hain... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 12:25:09 AM »
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OMG Rahim Ji i can see a change here..........
I am really very very happy to read dis post .....

U knoe wat i alwyz belive " Wat is happnd its alwyz for d good"
Voh alag baat hai iss ka ehsas hume bhut hi der baad hota hai ..yeh main apne personal experience se bol rehi hoon ....

Main usually itna kabhi kuch likhti nahi hoon kissi b post pe bt yeh topic kuch aisa hai i cnt control myself....

Yeh bhut jaroori hai jo bi kuch lyf main hua ho usse picche chod ke We hv 2 move .........apke rukne se ya dukhi hone se kissi ko fark pada nahi na . voh apni lyf main khush hai to we also hv 2 move ahead .........

Thanx 2 u to bringing dis kinda of poem ......
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 03:53:01 AM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai Rahim Ji

Jo zindagi mein jeena seekh jata hai
Wahi zindagi ko sahi manye mein jeeta hai
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 10:37:32 AM »
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Wah wah Abdul Rahim ji bahot hi achhi aur purkashish nazm likhi hai aapne. Jo mayusi so ummeed ki taraf le jaane ke liye hausal badhati hai. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 11:22:06 AM »
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bahut khoob Rahim bhai... ab aap alag likhne lage hain... dard se rishta tod chalen hain aap bhi... lagta hai hamari baaton ka kuch kuch asar hua hai aap pe... shukriya dost... sach kaha aapne humein zindagi ko jeena sikhna chahiye... ye hunar bahut kam logo me hoti hai jo sahi mayine me zindagi ko jeete hain... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!
Shukriya Dost...Haan asar hua hai...
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2010, 11:23:48 AM »
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OMG Rahim Ji i can see a change here..........
I am really very very happy to read dis post .....

U knoe wat i alwyz belive " Wat is happnd its alwyz for d good"
Voh alag baat hai iss ka ehsas hume bhut hi der baad hota hai ..yeh main apne personal experience se bol rehi hoon ....

Main usually itna kabhi kuch likhti nahi hoon kissi b post pe bt yeh topic kuch aisa hai i cnt control myself....

Yeh bhut jaroori hai jo bi kuch lyf main hua ho usse picche chod ke We hv 2 move .........apke rukne se ya dukhi hone se kissi ko fark pada nahi na . voh apni lyf main khush hai to we also hv 2 move ahead .........

Thanx 2 u to bringing dis kinda of poem ......

Shukriya yaar..
Haan shayad change aya hai..
Btw ap likha karein...aur likha karein..kaha karein...
hmm haan jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai...mera bhi experience hai...
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2010, 11:24:57 AM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai Rahim Ji

Jo zindagi mein jeena seekh jata hai
Wahi zindagi ko sahi manye mein jeeta hai
Shukriya aur apne bhi bahaut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2010, 11:28:50 AM »
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Waah Waah waah Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut Khoobsurat Aur Umeedo Se Bhari Hui Nazm Pesh ki hai Aapne..

Sach Kaha,Bahut Zaroori hai Ke Insaan jeena Seekhe..

Bahut Achi peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2010, 11:36:44 AM »
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Wah wah Abdul Rahim ji bahot hi achhi aur purkashish nazm likhi hai aapne. Jo mayusi so ummeed ki taraf le jaane ke liye hausal badhati hai. Bahot khoob.
Shukriya !
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2010, 11:37:27 AM »
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Waah Waah waah Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut Khoobsurat Aur Umeedo Se Bhari Hui Nazm Pesh ki hai Aapne..

Sach Kaha,Bahut Zaroori hai Ke Insaan jeena Seekhe..

Bahut Achi peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahaut shukriya Khwahish jee...Ap tariff karte hai toh bahaut acha lagta hai...Shukriya!
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2010, 11:45:15 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Ji. Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2010, 11:48:10 AM »
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Shukriya Sammual jee...
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«Reply #13 on: April 22, 2010, 11:23:25 PM »
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 Welcome Smiley ALyz!!!!!
Shukriya yaar..
Haan shayad change aya hai..
Btw ap likha karein...aur likha karein..kaha karein...
hmm haan jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai...mera bhi experience hai...
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