zindagi mahaj

by @kaash on May 28, 2009, 01:42:24 PM
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zindagi mahaj pyaar me doob jane ka naam nahi
zindagi me vohi kaamyaab hai jo isse anjaan nahi


zindagi shaam hai shaam ki, subah ki subah hai
gham baatne ka hota gham me doobna anjaam nahi


zindagi me gham aur dard sabke hisse me hain
par jeene vaalon ke paas milte gham ke nishaan nahi
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2009, 01:46:29 PM »
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bahot achche, last two lines r very nicely phrased
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2009, 02:07:08 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji.
Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne.
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2009, 03:41:47 PM »
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WAH WAH KAASH JI BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2009, 05:22:07 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji...last sher bohot hi gehra hai....bohot khoob !
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2009, 06:57:28 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji..

Aakhri Sher mein bahut Gehrai hai..
Bahut Ache Kaashji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 06:06:56 AM »
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bohut acha likha hai kaash ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2009, 06:08:00 AM »
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very very nice kaash ji,bahut acha likhte ho aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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