Zindagi.......... manjum

by manjum on March 10, 2011, 03:26:09 AM
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                "Zindagi"


Sunsan haweli hai bichhadi si saheli hai.
Ek bhid har taraf hai fir bhi ye akeli hai.

Iska har ek lamha rahta hai uljha uljha,
Ise sochte hain har pal ansuljhi paheli hai.

Apna banake isko dil se lagaye rakkha,
Apni na ho saki hai dulhan ye naweli hai.

Chalna tha isko daud ke har mod har safar par,
Ek bar ruk gai to fir hamne dhakeli hai.

Gulshan main isko khilna aur khub mahakna tha,
Ab kya batayen ham ye murjhai chameli hai....

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2011, 04:25:03 AM »
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wah ji bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2011, 04:28:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kishanji.... yun hi sath rahen....
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2011, 04:31:14 AM »
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bhai hum to har pal dosto ke sath hi rahete hai lekin kuch kaam esa hota hai jike chalte dur jana padta hai
Quote from: manjum on March 10, 2011, 04:28:10 AM
bahut bahut shukriya kishanji.... yun hi sath rahen....
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2011, 04:37:53 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 04:40:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anjaanji... sath rahiega....
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 04:58:52 AM »
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bahot khoob likha he manju ji........

"Apna banake isko dil se lagaye rakkha,
Apni u ho saki hai dulhan ye naweli hai."

bahot aache ..........maja aa gaya padkar........

2 - 3 theme ko mix kiya he apne aur bade hi lubhane wale andaaj me likha he.........wonderfull creation........keep writting .....
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2011, 05:19:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya metrixji.....

theme to bas zindgi hai... par zindgi main to na jane kitni bate hain... islie theme jyada lag rahe hain.... shukriya aapka.....

bas koshish hai dil ki baat kahne ki....

sath rahen....
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2011, 05:22:41 AM »
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kishanji... aap hamara likha padte rahen aur... apne comments dete rahen.... aur kya chahie....

bas yese hi sath rahen.... jaise aaj hain..
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2011, 05:30:45 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2011, 05:39:40 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya adilji.....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2011, 07:42:16 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on March 10, 2011, 03:26:09 AM
                "Zindagi"


Sunsan haweli hai bichhadi si saheli hai.
Ek bhid har taraf hai fir bhi ye akeli hai.

Iska har ek lamha rahta hai uljha uljha,
Ise sochte hain har pal ansuljhi paheli hai.

Apna banake isko dil se lagaye rakkha,
Apni na ho saki hai dulhan ye naweli hai.

Chalna tha isko daud ke har mod har safar par,
Ek bar ruk gai to fir hamne dhakeli hai.

Gulshan main isko khilna aur khub mahakna tha,
Ab kya batayen ham ye murjhai chameli hai....

manju "mann"






Waah Waah Waah!!!! Kya Baat Hai Manjum Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurti Se Aapne Apne Lafzon Mein Zindagi Ko Darshaaya Hai..Vakaai Zindagi Kuch Aise Hi Hai...Har Ek Lafz Mein Gehraai hai..Bahut Khooooooooob

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Humse Kya Puchte Ho Zindagi Ke Baare Mein!!!
Ajnabi Kya Batlayega Ajnabi Ke Baare Mein!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 10, 2011, 07:52:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... tahedil se shukriya.... aapne samjha aur saraha....

yun hi sath rahen....
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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2011, 04:51:50 AM »
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nice one.... manjum ji....  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2011, 04:47:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya... tamnnaji... sath rahie...
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