zindagi-nama

kya hai bahar,kaisi khiza,sochti rahi ye zindagi
mouqa o maash ki talash me bhataktirahi ye zindgi
kabhi wafa ke baam pe thahari zara ye zindagi
beshtar waqt to daga hi deti rahi ye zindagi
chandi ki chamak sikkon ki khanak se khali hi rahi
goki muflisi ki khanadamad rahi ye zindagi
ta-umar nizam-e-zindagi sanwarne me kat gayee
maseeha ban saleeb apna dhoti rahi ye zindagi
har taraf apni gumnami ka sabab poochti rahi
jabki nazmon me,gazalon me khilti rahi ye zindagi

VERY NICE,

thanks Rajeshji.housala afzai ke liye tahedil se shukriya.

Shukriya Mamta ji, meaning bataane ke liye. Ab mukammal taur par samajh mein aai ye ghazal jo waqai bahot khoobsurat hai.

aap sabhi hazraat ko meri housla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya...

aap ki tareef ne hume farsh se utha arsh par pahuncha diya..shukriya janab nazar sahib..

wah wah , kya kahene ,, jitni bhi tareefen ho sakti wo sub apki is taherir ke naam , aur shayari pe jo pakad hai apki uska jawab nahi , tareef ka jama pahenana mushkil ho chala hai , wah ahh khuch bhi kar len bhar pai hona mumkin nahi ,, matla meri sacha-e- pe mabni hai , khanadamad aur muflisi ka kya qoob istemal kiya hai apne wah ,, zindagi talq haqeeqath ko kitni saaf goi aur asani se bayan kiya hai mamta saheba , aisi taqleeqen nazar se kamm hi guzarti hain , jub guzarti hain to zahen ke goshe me ghar kar jaati hain ,, allah apko khush rakhe ,, hazaro dad ,,


duwa go

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