Zindgi Bahisht Banjaati Hai Mohabbat se......

by surindarn on October 09, 2013, 11:38:10 AM
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I read the first two lines by some poet, I was inspired to add two lines to it.

Zindgi Yun Bhi Kam Hai Mohabbat Ke Liye,
Roothkar Waqat Gunwane Ki Zarurat Kya Hai...

Zindgi Bahisht Banjaati Hai Mohabbat Se,
Payaar Kiye Jaa Bahisht Yahi Hai, Yahi Hai...

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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2013, 01:28:10 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2013, 01:33:08 PM »
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good one ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2013, 01:53:53 PM »
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very nice....
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2013, 03:32:23 PM »
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Nice One.!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2013, 06:13:56 AM »
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Thank you all for appreciating it, I have made a slight improvement as under:
Zindgi Bahisht Ban Jaati Hai Mohabat Se,
Pyaar Kiyey Jaa Bahisht Yahi hai, Yahin Hai.....

Surindarn                          "MohanN"
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2013, 07:12:12 PM »
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Very nicee..
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2013, 08:38:09 PM »
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veru nice addition
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