Zindgi ka kinara...

by brokenbyluv on September 12, 2010, 09:16:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 13, 2010, 02:51:54 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 13, 2010, 01:57:56 PM
Wah Geet-di ek naya nayaab andaaz...2 in 1.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



He he he thnx sweetu..
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«Reply #16 on: September 13, 2010, 02:53:43 PM »
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Very nice BBL bhut acha likha hai aapne..............keep writing..............khush rahiye 



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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2010, 02:54:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aaina ji.....
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«Reply #18 on: September 13, 2010, 11:51:43 PM »
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very beautiful feeling !!!!!!!!!!!

Very very gud !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: September 14, 2010, 07:47:32 AM »
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wah ji wah.. bahut khoobi se aapne apne ehsaas bayaan kiye hain shabdon ka sahaara leke... bahut nirale andaaz me aapne pehle apna dard aur fir apna darr bayaan kiya aur bahut hi khoob liya hai... too good hai ji...!!!

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«Reply #20 on: September 14, 2010, 12:11:47 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya neel ji n kapil ji...
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«Reply #21 on: September 14, 2010, 01:57:26 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji.

Mujhe Aapki Yeh kavita Bahutttttttt Pasand Aayi hai.Aapne Itni Khoobsurti se Jazbaaton Ko Lafzon mein Utara Hai Ke Kya Kehne..

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«Reply #22 on: September 14, 2010, 04:41:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...........
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«Reply #23 on: September 15, 2010, 11:39:27 AM »
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Geet di padha kar laga ki  meri zindgi ke kuchh purane ehsaas yaad aa gaye, sach me padhkar aankhen naam ho gai.... our is me meri bhi sachai he zindgi ki.... Sabd nahi tarif karne ke liye....


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«Reply #24 on: September 15, 2010, 11:46:52 AM »
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apka naam nahi janta ...sabhi ne apko Geet di kaha me bhi keh leta hun...gustakhi maaf hoo

geet dii...bahut pyara likha he apne

shabda kam he so apne andaz me pesh karta hun~

ek kahani apni bhi thi
ek raja the ham ek rani apni bhi thi
na puchho manjar muhabbat ka kaisa tha
khush ham the khush ishq ki rawaani thi
na tha to bas manjoor kismat ko
muskurahat kam jyada ankh me pani thi
haan kuchh eisi ek kahani thi
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«Reply #25 on: September 15, 2010, 01:57:39 PM »
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Achhi teri kahaani thee
Raja tha Ranee bhi thee

Mohbaat teri puraani thee
Kachche dhage si tooti thee

Kya nanee tujhe sunaati ye kahaani thee



Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 15, 2010, 11:46:52 AM
apka naam nahi janta ...sabhi ne apko Geet di kaha me bhi keh leta hun...gustakhi maaf hoo

geet dii...bahut pyara likha he apne

shabda kam he so apne andaz me pesh karta hun~

ek kahani apni bhi thi
ek raja the ham ek rani apni bhi thi
na puchho manjar muhabbat ka kaisa tha
khush ham the khush ishq ki rawaani thi
na tha to bas manjoor kismat ko
muskurahat kam jyada ankh me pani thi
haan kuchh eisi ek kahani thi
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«Reply #26 on: September 16, 2010, 04:16:02 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on September 15, 2010, 11:39:27 AM
Geet di padha kar laga ki  meri zindgi ke kuchh purane ehsaas yaad aa gaye, sach me padhkar aankhen naam ho gai.... our is me meri bhi sachai he zindgi ki.... Sabd nahi tarif karne ke liye....


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Thnx alot dev..main khuda se dua karungi ki tumhara dard kam ho jaye halaki ye sach hai ki mhbt ka dard aesa hai jo waqt k sath bhi nhi bharta per aksar koshishe kamiyab ho jaya karti hai.. happy9 icon_thumleft
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«Reply #27 on: September 16, 2010, 04:18:42 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 15, 2010, 11:46:52 AM
apka naam nahi janta ...sabhi ne apko Geet di kaha me bhi keh leta hun...gustakhi maaf hoo

geet dii...bahut pyara likha he apne

shabda kam he so apne andaz me pesh karta hun~

ek kahani apni bhi thi
ek raja the ham ek rani apni bhi thi
na puchho manjar muhabbat ka kaisa tha
khush ham the khush ishq ki rawaani thi
na tha to bas manjoor kismat ko
muskurahat kam jyada ankh me pani thi
haan kuchh eisi ek kahani thi


Bahut bahut shukiya abhi ji,merra naam GEETANJALI hai aur sabhi mujhe pyar se GEET,BBL, ya GEET DI keh kar bulate hai,apne mujhe geet di kaha mujhe bura bilkul nhi laga,aur apki ye chhoti si magar pyari si kahani bahut sunder hai shukriya ji...
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«Reply #28 on: September 16, 2010, 05:55:02 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 15, 2010, 01:57:39 PM
Achhi teri kahaani thee
Raja tha Ranee bhi thee

Mohbaat teri puraani thee
Kachche dhage si tooti thee

Kya nanee tujhe sunaati ye kahaani thee

haan koyal ji apko kaise pata chala~~haahah
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«Reply #29 on: September 16, 2010, 05:56:23 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 16, 2010, 04:18:42 AM
Bahut bahut shukiya abhi ji,merra naam GEETANJALI hai aur sabhi mujhe pyar se GEET,BBL, ya GEET DI keh kar bulate hai,apne mujhe geet di kaha mujhe bura bilkul nhi laga,aur apki ye chhoti si magar pyari si kahani bahut sunder hai shukriya ji...

shukriya apka geet di~
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