Zindgi ko azmana chahti hu...

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«Reply #30 on: October 24, 2010, 06:10:51 AM »
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aaammmmmeeeeeeennnnnnn.......
 
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«Reply #31 on: October 24, 2010, 10:42:44 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 09:25:29 PM
I have no words Geet ji.. kitni aasaani se aap itni gehri baat keh gaye.. yahi khoobsurti hoti hai aapke lekhni ki ki aap bahut bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaason kp pesh karti hain.. bahut sundar rachna hai... sach kahun to mujhe taarif ke liye words nahi mil rahe hain.. I am speechless...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Apne itna pyara comments diya hai aur kuch kehne ki zarurat nhi hai ji...bahut bahut shurkiya ki apko merri kavita pasand aayi...dil se apki shukr guzar hu...
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«Reply #32 on: October 24, 2010, 10:46:50 AM »
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Quote from: Intezar on October 23, 2010, 09:47:52 PM
Bahut hi achha likha hai Shihab sahab aapne bahut hi umda... !

na kar gham is baat ka ki tu ab bhi ajnabi raha uske liye
kuch wakt de use dekh lena wo tujhe jaroor pehchan jaayega...

Unhe bhi aajma lene de khud ko ek baar tere bagair “Shihab”
Yakeenan tera dard ek roz unhe tujh tak jaroor kheench laayega… !

Intezar !



Quote from: veenavarsha on October 24, 2010, 02:01:10 AM
sadiyo se chali aa rahi, kahnai fir dohra gayi
 kisi ko intezar to kisi ko bewafai thama gayi
kuch ki majboori,kuch ki kamzori kahi gayi
kuch ki khushi, kuch ka sitam aur raah badal gayi



Bahut hi khoob intezaar ji aur veena ji...
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«Reply #33 on: October 24, 2010, 10:53:00 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 24, 2010, 05:12:01 AM
geet geet geet.......ufffffff kya kahun main har ek lafz chubhta hua..itna gussaa itna pyaar itna dard itni tadap.....
har ek lafz me ye samaye hain itna k bas padhte jao aur mehsus karte jao ise....
har dua kubul ho tumhari aur har khushi pao tum....

Bahut bahut bahut bahut shurkiya kasak ji khuda apke sath sath merri bhi dua sune ki merri kasak di ko duniya ki har khushi mile...take care ji...
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«Reply #34 on: October 24, 2010, 11:53:06 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 24, 2010, 05:17:23 AM
excellent reply khwaish ji....aap to mastam mast ho ji.....itna pyara likhta hai koi...kuch lines jo mujhe chhu gai ya mere dil ki baat hain wo ye hain


Tere Har lafz Mujhse Ab Bahut Kuch Kehta Hai!!!
Sharminda Naa Ho Jaau, Itni Inn Lafzo Mein Gehraai Naa De

Agar Ishq Karna Naseebo Ki baat Hai To Haan Mujhe Ishq naseeb hua
Par Eh Khuda Ishq Ke Baad Phir Yuh Dard-e-Judaai Naa De...

Mujhe Bhool Jaana Hi Behtar Hai Zindagi Ke liye!!!
Jis Rishte Ki koi Buniyaad nahi,Uss Rishte ka Phir koi mol Bhi Nahi..
Bas Guzaarish Hai Khuda Tujhse, Aisi Khudaai Naa De...


Haaye!!!! Itni Tareef Naa Kijiye Anuji..Itna Pyaara To Aap Bhi bahut Likhte hai..Sach kahoon To Geetji Ki Yeh Nazm Hi thi Jo Yeh sab Likhwa gayi..isme Bhi taarif Unki Hi hai..

Aur Sach mein Anuji, Jo Aapne Sher Bataye Jo Aap ke Dil ko chute Hai,Yakeen Maniye yeh Mujhe Bhi Dil Ke kareeb lage.... icon_flower

Tehhhhhhhh Dillllllllll se Shukriya Anuji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #35 on: October 25, 2010, 03:32:55 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 25, 2010, 10:48:05 AM
Aah Ha Kya Baat Hai Ji
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aapne
Kuch Bante Hi Insha ALLAH
Rep Karunga..Tab Take

Mast, Chust, Aur Wyast Rahiye.


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji..mujhe apke reply ka intezar  rahega ji...take care..
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«Reply #36 on: October 25, 2010, 03:35:31 PM »
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Quote from: Intezar on October 24, 2010, 05:35:36 AM
doston... maine aap logon ki dua mein kuch likha hai agar pasand na aaye to bura mat maanana please... !

dono the kisi galat fahmi ke shikaar yaaron
khud se zaada tha ek dusre par yakeen yaaron,

mushkil tha dono ka ek dusre ke bina reh paana
phir bhi kiya kubul ek dusre ki khaatir juda ho jaana,

ek ne raah sochi tanha jeene ki to dusre ko bhi tanha kar gaya,
lagaate lagaate ilzaam ek dusro par wakt jaane kahaan gujar gaya,

ye hasrat liye dono tanha jeete rahe ki koi aakar manaa jaye use
ab to fakat ye dekhna baaki reh gaya ki  kaun manaayega kab kise,

aye khuda badi shiddat se mangi hai kar kubul aaj Dua Intezar ki,
mita kar gile shikwe tu aur majboot kar de buniyaad is pyaar ki..!

Intezar !




Ameen...bahut hi khubsurat likha hai intezar ji behetareen..alfaz nhi hai taarif k liye per yakin maaniye bahut hi umda likha hai...toooo gud ji...bahut shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: October 25, 2010, 03:47:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 23, 2010, 11:57:19 AM

Geetji, Kuch Instant likh Raha Hoon..
Umeed Karta Hoon Pasand Aaye Aapko..


Main Tanha Ro Loon Par tujhe Kabhi Dikhaai Na De
Main Tujhe Awaaz Doon Par tujhe Sunaai naa De..

Khatawaar Bhi Main Hoon Aur kasoorvaar Bhi Main!!!
Jo chaahe kehle Par Apni Ruswaai Naa De..

Ishq kiya To Hai par Nibhaana Bhool Gaya!!!
Eh khuda Mujhe Kabhi Jag-Hasaai naa De...

Tere Har lafz Mujhse Ab Bahut Kuch Kehta Hai!!!
Sharminda Naa Ho Jaau, Itni Inn Lafzo Mein Gehraai Naa De

Mere Khwaab Aaane Ki tarah Toot Gaye Hai Par Gham Nahi!!!
Par Toote Khwaabo ki Duniya Mujhe Phir Dikhaai Naa De.

Mujhe To Aadat Hai Bhari Mehfil mein GumsuUm Rehne ki
Par Dua Hai Meri tujhe Kabhi khuda Tanhaai Naa De...

Agar Ishq Karna Naseebo Ki baat Hai To Haan Mujhe Ishq naseeb hua
Par Eh Khuda Ishq Ke Baad Phir Yuh Dard-e-Judaai Naa De...

Mujhe Bhool Jaana Hi Behtar Hai Zindagi Ke liye!!!
Jis Rishte Ki koi Buniyaad nahi,Uss Rishte ka Phir koi mol Bhi Nahi..
Bas Guzaarish Hai Khuda Tujhse, Aisi Khudaai Naa De...



Bahut wadiya ji maaf karna thodi der ho gyi reply vich..


Terre ansuo ki tapish merre dil mein mehsus hoti hai,
terre har dard ki cheekh mujhe sunai deti hai,

tujhe kyun kasurvaar kahu main merre humsafar,
mhbt ka kaam hi hai sachi qurbat mein judai deti hai,

na tu bhula hai ishq nibhana na maine koi waada toda,
zamane ki aadat hai toote dilo ko aksar jag-hasai deti hai,

merre lafzo ki gehrai terri hi chahat ka karam hai,
ye har dil tak pahuch kar hamare rishte ki gawahi deti hai,

khwab tut'te hai phir bante hai tu gum naa kar ye bata,
khwabo k bin hamare milan ki aas aur kahan dikhai deti hai,

mehfilo k shor mein mujhe bhi ghum rehne ki aadat hai,
sukoon merre dil ko ab sirrf tanhai deti hai,

tujhe bhul kar bhi bhulana manzur nhi merre dil ko..
koi chahe jo kahe mujhe ishq k dard ko sehne ki himmat khuda ki khudai deti hai.........
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«Reply #38 on: October 25, 2010, 04:14:32 PM »
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Shihab ji, bas wakt aap hi logo ke liye to hai... bas hausla thoda ab bhi baaki hai... aap yunhi likhte rehiye... khush rahiye..

Intezar !

Quote from: Shihab on October 25, 2010, 11:00:40 AM
Sabse Pahle To Aapka Tahe Dil Se Mashkur Hun
Ki Aapne Pasand Farmaya Aur Apna Waqt Diya
Aur Dusri Baat Plz Yeh Sahab Hata Dijiye Aur
Sirf Shihab Bulaaiye. Meharbani Hogi..Khair
Aapne Bhi Hauslon Se Bhari Bahut Hi Pyari
Lines Likhi Hain Janaab.Bahut Khub...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #39 on: October 25, 2010, 04:17:48 PM »
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aapne kubul kiya yahi bahut hai Geet ji... taarif ki jaroorat kya hai hum to aap hi logo ke liye likhte rehte hain... aap bhi bas yunhi likhte rehiye aur Lafzon ka rishta banaye rakhiye... khush rahiye...

Intezar !

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 25, 2010, 03:35:31 PM
Ameen...bahut hi khubsurat likha hai intezar ji behetareen..alfaz nhi hai taarif k liye per yakin maaniye bahut hi umda likha hai...toooo gud ji...bahut shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #40 on: October 25, 2010, 06:37:50 PM »
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Ji behetar hai....shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: October 28, 2010, 08:42:32 AM »
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«Reply #42 on: October 28, 2010, 10:19:31 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 25, 2010, 03:47:38 PM
Bahut wadiya ji maaf karna thodi der ho gyi reply vich..


Terre ansuo ki tapish merre dil mein mehsus hoti hai,
terre har dard ki cheekh mujhe sunai deti hai,

tujhe kyun kasurvaar kahu main merre humsafar,
mhbt ka kaam hi hai sachi qurbat mein judai deti hai,

na tu bhula hai ishq nibhana na maine koi waada toda,
zamane ki aadat hai toote dilo ko aksar jag-hasai deti hai,

merre lafzo ki gehrai terri hi chahat ka karam hai,
ye har dil tak pahuch kar hamare rishte ki gawahi deti hai,

khwab tut'te hai phir bante hai tu gum naa kar ye bata,
khwabo k bin hamare milan ki aas aur kahan dikhai deti hai,

mehfilo k shor mein mujhe bhi ghum rehne ki aadat hai,
sukoon merre dil ko ab sirrf tanhai deti hai,

tujhe bhul kar bhi bhulana manzur nhi merre dil ko..
koi chahe jo kahe mujhe ishq k dard ko sehne ki himmat khuda ki khudai deti hai.........
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«Reply #43 on: October 28, 2010, 11:55:36 AM »
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Aaj ye teri nazmm padhkar naaz ho raha he tujh-pe o-meri pyaari sakhee..... Thumbs UP icon_thumleft hello2 wave hello
Ye ishq farmaane-wale khud ko tou jaante nahi
Akl kaudi kee nahi khud ko khuda maante hain

Naari ki shakti ko ye bechare pehchante nahi
Warna bewafaayee ka jurm kabhi karte nahi

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 22, 2010, 06:07:52 PM
Brokenbyluv...


Jitne hi naazo aur mhbt se nawaza tha tune mujhe,
utna hi gum aur taklif tune merri zindgi mein bhar di hai,

merre ajnabi main tou chal rahi thi virano mein hi,
tune aake merri zindgi aur bechain kar di hai,

apni raahe khud banana chahti hu main,
terri kami ne mujhe phir kamzor banaya hai,

kyun karta raha mhbt k bade bade wade,
jab ki tu ek bhi nibha nhi paya hai,

waise bhi koi makaam haasil nhi kiya hai maine,
jo main ab kuch gawa saku,

per merri maa hi merri zindgi hai,
kaash ye baat main tujhko kabhi bata saku,

maine bahut dukh diya hai sabhi apno ko,
mhbt ki khaatir nazar andaaz kiya hai unke sapno ko,

mujhe maaf karna merre ajnabi main tujhe bhulana chahti hu,
aaj pehli baar mhbt k bina bhi zindgi ko azmana chahti hu.........


GEET...
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«Reply #44 on: October 28, 2010, 02:28:17 PM »
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Bahut shukriya kapil ji,fivester ji n koyal... Usual Smile
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