ZULFON ME WO PAHLI SI MAHAK AAJ NAHEEN HAI .................................. HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 30, 2013, 04:48:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 31, 2013, 01:35:00 AM »
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so amazing creation.....
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«Reply #16 on: July 31, 2013, 01:37:00 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
Rishta  hai , 'Hasan' , itna  mere  Aaj  ka  Kal  se ,
Kal  tak  thha  Mehrbaan  Falak  aaj  naheeN  hai

Applause Applause Applause bahut khoobsurat maqta hai.

1971..ye kya..jaane kitni ghazlen publish huee hongi..
amazing..us age me hi aapne..itni unchaaiyan paa lee thi..aur ab to.
Itni aala hastee hamare beech hai..ye ham sabke liye fakra ki baat hai..sab kuch jaante hue bhi aap apni ghazlen share karte hai..isse badi baat aur kya ho sakti hai..
aapne ye bahr bhi batayee thi..
is shahr me har shaksha pareshan sa kyun hai
saadar
Applause Applause Applause
mubarakbaad dene ke liye mere paas shabda hi naheen..
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«Reply #17 on: July 31, 2013, 01:41:39 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Saheb, bahut khoobsoorat behr aur khoobsoorat ghazal hai. Bahut achhi lagi, padh kar bahut maza aaya.
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«Reply #18 on: July 31, 2013, 02:52:43 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 30, 2013, 05:33:56 PM
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HASAN SIR,,,kya baat hai superb..bahut hee zabardast umda qalaam. har ek ashhar lajawab atulniyah,,,,,,,,,,salut u salut u salut u salut u...................ek rau bhi jo is qalaam ke aage kuch bhi nahi hai... waise to har ek sher par ek rau banta hai...par rau ki jagah ... aap hamari lakhon  DILLI daad o mubarak baad le .........

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Bahut shukrguzar hoon Soudagar saheb aapke behad mukhlisana tabsire ke liye .Yeh eik purani aur meri shuru ki ghazal hai aur ise post karne mein aaj bhi main utna hi dar raha thha jitna kisi dost ki farmaaish par Souvenir ke liye dete hue us waqt dara thha . Us waqt nai nai shairi ki wajah se dara thha aur aaj isliye ki yeh ghazal outdated samajh kar reject na kar di jaaye.Lekin us waqt ke doston ki tarah aaj mere naye doston ne bharpoor ta'awun de kar bahut housla diya hai . Aap ki mohabbat ke liye tah e dil se mamnoon hoon.. Khuda aap ko shaad o abaad rakhhe aur aap ki muhabbat yunhi milti  rahe. Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2013, 02:54:52 AM »
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Lovely creation... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: July 31, 2013, 05:47:43 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 30, 2013, 04:48:36 PM

ZulfoN  meiN  woh  pahli  si  Mahak  aaj  naheen  hai ,
Thee  Rukh pe  jo  unke  woh  Chamak aaj  naheeN  hai

1971 ka model kab tak chale ga ji ye 2013 hai. meri baat karo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
GhaazoN  ne  badha  dee  hai  go  Rukhsaar   ki  garmi ,
Woh  Husn  ke  SholoN  mein  Lapak  aaj  naheeN  hai
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))tumhaari soch boodhi ho gai hain ji.warna shola aur shabnam apni khasiyat hamesha rakhte hain

Is  daur  meiN  Shokhi  ne  jagah  lee  hai  Haya kee ,
Thee  Husn  meiN  pahle  jo  Jhijhak  aaj  naheeN  hai
     shokh zamaane ne husn ko shokh kar diya.
     lazzat-e-uryaniyat ne jijhak ko badzauq kar diya. sad5


Zakhm  itne  mile , mit  gayi  Ehsaas  ki  Shiddat ,
Rahti  thi  jo  pahle  woh  Kasak  aaj  naheeN  hai
aaj gar dard nahin hota hai to pareshan ho jaati hoon ki dard kyon nahin hua icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

Peene  ko to  maiN  aaj  bhi  pee  leta  hooN , lekin
Thee  Jaam - o - Suboo  ki  jo  Lalak  aaj  naheeN  hai
peete the jiski yaad mein jab wahi saath hai to phir lalak kaisi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Saghar  hai  wahi, Jaam  wahi , Saaqi  wahi  hai ,
Mayekhaane  meiN  lekin  woh  Khanak  aaj  anheeN  hai
isliye ki ab gham-e- ashiqi mein peene waale kam hi aate hain. ab to fashion
kai daur hai peena pilana jo ki ehsaas se pare hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Rishta  hai , 'Hasan' , itna  mere  Aaj  ka  Kal  se ,
Kal  tak  thha  Mehrbaan  Falak  aaj  naheeN  hai

dekho ji aaj insaan duniyadaar,khudgarz itna ho gaya hai ki ooper wale ko uss dil se uss chaaht se nahin yaad karta hai jaisa ki pahle ke log hote the.
aur khuda ke banaaye oosoolo.n ki khelaafwarzi bhi bahut hone lagi hai aaj kal phir bhi uski meharbaani ham pe qaayam hai

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ghaaza=cosmetics ; shiddat = intensity ; falak = sky
Note : Yeh University days ki eik Ghazal hai jo
Yaum - e - 'Siraj' Lakhnavi ke mouqe par nikaale gaye  
Souvenir (1971) mein publish hui
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जुल्फों में वह पहली सी  महक  आज  नहीं है
थी रुख पे  जो उन  के वह चमक आज नहीं है
 

गाजों  ने  बढ़ा  दी है गो रुखसार की गर्मी
वह  हुस्न  के  शोलों  में  लपक आज नही है


इस दौर में शोखी  ने  जगह ली है हया की
थी  हुस्न  में  पहले  जो  झिझक  आज नही है


ज़ख्म  इतने  मिले , मिट गई  एहसास  की  शिद्दत
रहती  थी जो  पहले , वह कसक  आज नही  है


पीने  को  तो मैं  आज भी पी  लेता हू  , लेकिन
 थी  जाम - ओ - सुबू  की  जो  ललक  आज  नही  है


साग़र  है वही , जाम वही , साक़ी   वही  है
मैखाने  में  लेकिन वह  खनक  आज  नही  है


रिशता  है ' हसन ' इतना  मेरे  आज  का  कल से
कल  तक  था  मेहरबान  फ़लक  आज  नही  

fazal sahab iss 1971 ke model ki ghazal to aaj bhi 2013 se zyaada tez hai ji
 per aap sach-sach batana kitni thee.n ladkiyaa.n jo ispe fida huee.n.main to buss behosh hui jaati hoon per hosh mein ek rau de doon phir behosh hoti hoon.........! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2013, 01:05:21 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 30, 2013, 05:36:47 PM
just excellent bhaijaan
Thanksa lot  , Saini bhai
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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2013, 11:34:16 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 30, 2013, 05:42:55 PM
no words to appreciate, superb waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah hi waaaaah...
SHUKRIYA IQTEDAR SAHEB . GOD BLESS YOU.
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«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2013, 01:46:23 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 30, 2013, 04:48:36 PM


Is  daur  meiN  Shokhi  ne  jagah  lee  hai  Haya kee ,
Thee  Husn  meiN  pahle  jo  Jhijhak  aaj  naheeN  hai

Rishta  hai , 'Hasan' , itna  mere  Aaj  ka  Kal  se ,
Kal  tak  thha  Mehrbaan  Falak  aaj  naheeN  hai


इस दौर में शोखी  ने  जगह ली है हया की
थी  हुस्न  में  पहले  जो  झिझक  आज नही है

रिशता  है ' हसन ' इतना  मेरे  आज  का  कल से
कल  तक  था  मेहरबान  फ़लक  आज  नही 

Waah siddiqui saheb bahut khoob
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2013, 01:50:37 AM »
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beautiful.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: August 01, 2013, 06:47:27 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on July 30, 2013, 06:03:20 PM

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«Reply #26 on: August 01, 2013, 02:06:04 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on July 30, 2013, 06:15:22 PM

shuker hai HASAN sahab ap apne beete hue dino ko yaad karne peeche gaye warna ye kalaam hum se rubaru nai hota..ye kalam hamein bhi apke university days tak legaya.
bilkul tar o taza hai.

khoob karte hain bayan apne jazbaat,
apke kalaam mein jhijak aaj bhi nahi hai.
 
ek Rau meri taraf se bhi qubool karein.

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Sahal saheb , Adaab .  Shukrguzar  hoon ki  aap ne ye purana
kalaam saraaha aur hausla afzai ki . Aayenda bhi kuchh purani
ghazlein hazir karne ki himmat bandhi hai . Yaqeen hai ki aap
jaise sukhan shinaas hazraat  aayenda  bhi apni mohabbat se
nawazte raheinge.Bahut duaaon ke sath , Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: August 01, 2013, 02:08:58 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah hasan ji. Is khoobsurat kalam par waah waah waah aur sirf waaaaaaah. mujhe bahut bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh kalaaaam... sabhi ashaar dil ko ek dam chooo gaye. aaapko mere dil se dee gaye hazaron daad aur ek rau qubool ho.

Is  daur  meiN  Shokhi  ne  jagah  lee  hai  Haya kee ,
Thee  Husn  meiN  pahle  jo  Jhijhak  aaj  naheeN  hai


Zakhm  itne  mile , mit  gayi  Ehsaas  ki  Shiddat ,
Rahti  thi  jo  pahle  woh  Kasak  aaj  naheeN  hai

Rishta  hai , 'Hasan' , itna  mere  Aaj  ka  Kal  se ,
Kal  tak  thha  Mehrbaan  Falak  aaj  naheeN  hai

in ashaaron ke kya kehne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: August 01, 2013, 04:05:55 PM »
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Lines are just Amazing sir...
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«Reply #29 on: August 01, 2013, 05:17:49 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 30, 2013, 06:19:41 PM
Superb
Thanks , nandbahu ji.God bless you.
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