zulm........................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on July 28, 2012, 09:56:46 AM
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                       ho  nigaah  terii  ya  jaam-e-maiqadaa koi.!
                       aalaam-e-maikashii  mein  detaa  sadaa koi.!!


                       rahi   fitrat  ek-sii   dekho  azal  se unkii.!
                       kahe    chehra   kuch   aur,  hai   adaa  koi.!


                       panhaa dard-e-ashiqi ko yahaan mayassar kahaan.!
                       rahe    haamii    kisi    kii,  kare   judaa  koi.!

                      
                       samjhaa   kar   dil   ko   ab  haar  gaye  hum.!
                       ho   jaaye   qurbaan   ya   mile   ridaa   koi.!


                       khaaye  zakhm  inteha phir bhii rahaa  khamosh.!
                       hanste-hanste     dekho   hua   bidaa     koi.!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 10:14:58 AM »
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Kya baat hai bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam KA ji............ Dhero daad aur mubarakbad
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 10:25:28 AM »
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waah khaamosh ji bahut hee shaandaar peshkash padh kar badee taS****e hui aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 10:33:17 AM »
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BAhut BAhut Khub K_A JI Mubarak Ho
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 10:54:45 AM »
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KHAMOSH JI JUST BEAUTIFUL. MUBARAK HO
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 10:57:11 AM »
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Wow , it is superb.
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 11:17:05 AM »
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Vaah vaah vaah Khamosh jee
Bahut bahut jabardast kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.
Mujhe antim do sher khoob pasand aaye.
Applause  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 01:26:31 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 28, 2012, 09:56:46 AM


                       ho  nigaah  terii  ya  jaam-e-maiqadaa koi.!
                       aalaam-e-maikashii  mein  detaa  sadaa koi.!!


                       rahi   fitrat  ek-sii   dekho  azal  se unkii.!
                       kahe    chehra   kuch   aur,  hai   adaa  koi.!


                       panhaa dard-e-ashiqi ko yahaan mayassar kahaan.!
                       rahe    haamii    kisi    kii,  kare   judaa  koi.!

                     
                       samjhaa   kar   dil   ko   ab  haar  gaye  hum.!
                       ho   jaaye   qurbaan   ya   mile   ridaa   koi.!


                       khaaye  zakhm  inteha phir bhii rahaa  khamosh.!
                       hanste-hanste     dekho   hua   bidaa     koi.!!
wah ji wah
bahot khoob Khamosh ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2012, 05:25:13 PM »
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wah wah wah... Applause Applause

bahut bahut bahut khoob khamosh ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2012, 06:28:22 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia gazab ki kalaam kahi hai... waaH waaH waaH
aaj toH yakeen janiye aapki kalaam ne mehfil loot lii..

behad gazab ke khayaalaat aur umdaa taqayyul ki Parwaaz
lii hai aapne... har ashaar laa jawaab raha janab bus
gazab ki kalaam rahi...

Humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...
Aur aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..

Aate rahiye... likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   


Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 28, 2012, 09:56:46 AM


                       ho  nigaah  terii  ya  jaam-e-maiqadaa koi.!
                       aalaam-e-maikashii  mein  detaa  sadaa koi.!!


Behad khoob matla hai janab daad daad daad...
                   

                       rahi   fitrat  ek-sii   dekho  azal  se unkii.!
                       kahe    chehra   kuch   aur,  hai   adaa  koi.!

Masha Allaah janab kia kahne waaH... aik umdaa
khayaal ko zubaaN bakhshi hai behad khoob ... amazing one...                   

                       panhaa dard-e-ashiqi ko yahaan mayassar kahaan.!
                       rahe    haamii    kisi    kii,  kare   judaa  koi.!

Kia kahne sahaab... Kis mughalbe meiN aise tez
khayaalaat aaye hume bhi bataiye... bahut khoob...                   

                     
                       samjhaa   kar   dil   ko   ab  haar  gaye  hum.!
                       ho   jaaye   qurbaan   ya   mile   ridaa   koi.!

Waah waaH waaH... bahut khoob.....                   

                       khaaye  zakhm  inteha phir bhii rahaa  khamosh.!
                       hanste-hanste     dekho   hua   bidaa     koi.!!

Haay jaan nikal dii janab, gazab ka maqta raha... daad daad daad ...                   


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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2012, 10:05:45 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 28, 2012, 10:14:58 AM
Kya baat hai bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam KA ji............ Dhero daad aur mubarakbad

thanx
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2012, 08:24:54 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 28, 2012, 10:25:28 AM
waah khaamosh ji bahut hee shaandaar peshkash padh kar badee taS****e hui aapko bahut bahut mubarakbaad

thanx sks
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2012, 06:21:38 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 28, 2012, 10:33:17 AM
BAhut BAhut Khub K_A JI Mubarak Ho

thanx
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2012, 10:44:49 AM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 28, 2012, 10:54:45 AM
KHAMOSH JI JUST BEAUTIFUL. MUBARAK HO

thanx
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2012, 11:00:56 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Khamosh ji,great creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Hats off to you!
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