نعت شریف:Shairi - E

jellani

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jellani

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2010, 08:11:29 AM »

i submitted this kalam for correction so plz help me


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jellani

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2010, 06:22:50 PM »

اگر آپ شاعر ھیں تو آپ سے التجا ہے کہ درج بالا کلام فنی لحاظ سے دیکھ کر ضرور اصلاح کریں


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brokenbyluv

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2010, 07:10:40 AM »

Bahut khob jellani ji......


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2010, 07:17:16 AM »

Bahut khoob Jellani Ji


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jellani

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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2010, 07:59:00 AM »

RAJESH HARISH n BROKENLUV thanx 2U ......lakin main aap se pochna chahta hon kia yeh kalam fun k lihaz se drust hai aor wazan mukamal hai aap k jawab ka intizar rahe ga


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jellani

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #6 on: September 28, 2010, 08:16:30 AM »

مجھے خاک میں ملاکر میری خاک بھی اڑادے
تیرے نام پر مٹا ہوں مجھے کیا غرض نشاں سے

بیدم شاہ وارثی


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brokenbyluv

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2010, 08:23:24 AM »

Merre hisab se ye kalaam shayar-e-zindgi mein thik hai...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2010, 08:24:08 AM »

Moved to appropriate section!

Thanx..

YOINDIA MONITOR!


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Gudiaa

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2010, 11:35:08 PM »

Quote from: jellani on September 25, 2010, 09:30:17 AM

AEY RASOOLE KHUDA TERI KIA BAT HAI
TERE JALWOOn SE ROSHAN MeRI RAT HAI
MUJH KO JO BHI MILA TERE SADQE MILA
TERE SADQE PE PALTI MeRI ZAT HAI
HAR DO AALAM KA DOLAHA TO HE MERE SHAH
SUB YEH KHULQE KHUDA TERI BARAT HAI
BADSHAH BHI ZAMANE K POCHEn USE
SHAH JIS KO MILI TERI KHERAT HAI
KON MIDHAT BAYAn TERI SARWAR KERE
YEH KITABE MOBEEn SUB TeRI NAAT HAI
HO NABI MOHTARAM SADA TERA KARAM
SADQA TUM KO MeRE AAQA SADAT HAI
AAJ HAI KHOSH UN KA YEH KHWAJA BADA
IS NE SHAYID LIKHI PHIR KOI NAAT HAI

Bahot khoob Jellani Ji .... hume jyaada urdu wording ke meanings to samajh nahi aate .. par kaafi had tak is kalaam ko samajh paaye hai .. aur jitana samjha hai utana hume kaafi achchha laga ..

Aap yunhi likhate rahiye .. aur aate aate aap ki kalam mai aur nikhaar aa jaayega ... aur fir hum aayenge aap ke paas seekhane ke liye

Maayoos naa huaa kijiye kabhi ... bas keep trying .. aap kaafi achchha likhate hai ..

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe


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jellani

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Re: نعت شریف

«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2010, 10:32:48 AM »

Goodia jee aap ka shukria .... jeti rahen


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