अकेला......सृष्टिराज चिंतक

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क्या होता
अगर मैं
परम् विख्यात
बन जाता ?
तब
मुझ से ख़ुद
मैं ही छूट जाता
मैं तो जन्मते ही
माँ को छोड़ कर
अकेले हो जाने के
एहसास से
रो रहा था
फिर
अति विख्यात बन
ख़ुद को भी छोड़
निपट अकेला
क्या एक पल भी
जी पाता ?
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2013, 10:38:01 PM »
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Many thanks for appreciation.
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Thanks, Dr. Saini ji.
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