अश्-आर कहने दो................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 06, 2013, 02:53:09 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 06, 2013, 02:18:56 PM »
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ज़ुल्फ़ो के पेच-ओ-ख़म में गिरफ़्तार रहने दो
तीर- ए- नज़र ही काफ़ी है तलवार रहने दो

होंठों पे लरज़िश है  कुछ तो ज़बान  खुली है
ग़ज़ल-ए-ज़िंदगी ना सही अश्-आर कहने दो
waah waah suresh jibohut khoob
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«Reply #16 on: October 06, 2013, 02:29:58 PM »
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thanks qalb ji
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«Reply #17 on: October 06, 2013, 02:31:03 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on October 06, 2013, 02:18:56 PM
ज़ुल्फ़ो के पेच-ओ-ख़म में गिरफ़्तार रहने दो
तीर- ए- नज़र ही काफ़ी है तलवार रहने दो

होंठों पे लरज़िश है  कुछ तो ज़बान  खुली है
ग़ज़ल-ए-ज़िंदगी ना सही अश्-आर कहने दो
waah waah suresh jibohut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2013, 02:38:16 PM »
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 thankewwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much sksaini ji...[/size][/b]
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«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2013, 02:58:45 PM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai. Bahut Pasand Aaya.
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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2013, 04:05:36 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2013, 04:19:18 PM »
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Waah bahaut achchhee ghazal kahi Suresh ji ..... Daad
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«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2013, 04:28:41 PM »
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Its awesomeeeeeeeee suresh ji.. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.. behtareeen peshkash.. hazaron dili daad qubool kijiye..
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thankewwwwwwwwww aqsh ji...           .
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Its awesomeeeeeeeee suresh ji.. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.. behtareeen peshkash.. hazaron dili daad qubool kijiye..
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«Reply #24 on: October 06, 2013, 06:06:40 PM »
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ज़ुल्फ़ो के पेच-ओ-ख़म में गिरफ़्तार रहने दो
तीर- ए- नज़र ही काफ़ी है तलवार रहने दो

Bahut bahut badhiya Suresh jee
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«Reply #25 on: October 06, 2013, 06:45:47 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH waaH jee kia kahne behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee... just mindblowing... Tusi ta kamaal hi kinda jee...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe ... gazab ke khayaalaat ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #26 on: October 06, 2013, 08:48:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji aapke comments bahut dino baad padhne ko mile bahut achha laga..hausla afzahi karte rahen.


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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 06, 2013, 06:45:47 PM

Suresh Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH waaH jee kia kahne behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee... just mindblowing... Tusi ta kamaal hi kinda jee...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe ... gazab ke khayaalaat ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #27 on: October 06, 2013, 08:49:47 PM »
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thaaaaaaaaaankewwwwwwwwwwwwww mkv ji.
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ज़ुल्फ़ो के पेच-ओ-ख़म में गिरफ़्तार रहने दो
तीर- ए- नज़र ही काफ़ी है तलवार रहने दो

Bahut bahut badhiya Suresh jee
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«Reply #28 on: October 06, 2013, 09:57:46 PM »
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behtreen peshkash - hazaron daaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: October 07, 2013, 12:58:35 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya iqtedar ji
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behtreen peshkash - hazaron daaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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