आस-पास हैं हम, नहीं जुदा !

by abdbundeli on November 07, 2014, 10:27:24 AM
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आस-पास हैं हम, नहीं जुदा !
एक नाव है, एक नाखुदा !
फर्क नहीं कुछ, गर, पैकर पर  
किसी और का नाम है गुदा !!

किस नाम से किसे जाना है
हमने ? काश, जानते हम भी !
किस को, कैसा पहिचाना है
हमने ? काश, जानते हम भी !!

एक डगर है, फिर भी अगर-मगर में,
क्यों यूं उलझे हैं हम !
रह तलाशते चौराहे पर,  
सचमुच ही अनसुलझे हैं हम !!

पता नहीं, कितने ही झूलों पर हम झूला झूल चुके हैं ?
एक राह पर मजबूती से आगे बढ़ना भूल चुके हैं !
काश, गाँव तक तेरे, कोइ काफिला आ, मुझको ले पहुँचे !
हम कितने ही मामूली मुआमलों को दे तूल, चुके हैं ?

            - ram prakash garg / abd bundeli
 
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waaaaaaaaH nihaayat khobsurat, dheron daad.
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khub abdji....
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 07, 2014, 10:27:24 AM
आस-पास हैं हम, नहीं जुदा !
एक नाव है, एक नाखुदा !
फर्क नहीं कुछ, गर, पैकर पर 
किसी और का नाम है गुदा !!

किस नाम से किसे जाना है
हमने ? काश, जानते हम भी !
किस को, कैसा पहिचाना है
हमने ? काश, जानते हम भी !!

एक डगर है, फिर भी अगर-मगर में,
क्यों यूं उलझे हैं हम !
रह तलाशते चौराहे पर,   
सचमुच ही अनसुलझे हैं हम !!

पता नहीं, कितने ही झूलों पर हम झूला झूल चुके हैं ?
एक राह पर मजबूती से आगे बढ़ना भूल चुके हैं !
काश, गाँव तक तेरे, कोइ काफिला आ, मुझको ले पहुँचे !
हम कितने ही मामूली मुआमलों को दे तूल, चुके हैं ?

            - ram prakash garg / abd bundeli
 


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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, dost!
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waaaaaaaaH nihaayat khobsurat, dheron daad.
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, mere dost!
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Doc. Sb'!!
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khub abdji....


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, mere dost!
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