उठ गया ......सृष्टिराज चिंतक

by srishti raj chintak on July 10, 2013, 02:31:14 PM
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 पैदा हुआ
 उठ गया
 गोद में

 लेटा था
 उठ गया
 बैठ कर

 बैठा था
 उठ गया
 पैरों पर

 गिर पड़ा
 उठ गया

 फिर गिरा
 फिर उठा

 गिरता गया
 उठता गया

 उठता गया
 उठता गया

 फिर ऐसा गिरा
 कभी ना उठा
 उठ ही गया

   "?"

 uth gayaa

 paidaa huaa
 uth gayaa
 god mai

 letaa tha
 uth gayaa
 baith kar

 baitha tha
 uth gayaa
 pairo par

 gir pada
 uth gayaa

 fir gira
 fir uthaa

 girta gaya
 uthtaa gaya

 uthtaa gaya
 uthtaa gaya

 fir aisaa gira
 kabhee na utha
 uth hee gaya

      "?"
(Srishti Raj Chintak)


 
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2013, 03:46:16 PM »
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पैदा हुआ
 उठ गया
 गोद में

 लेटा था
 उठ गया
 बैठ कर

 बैठा था
 उठ गया
 पैरों पर

 गिर पड़ा
 उठ गया

 फिर गिरा
 फिर उठा

 गिरता गया
 उठता गया

 उठता गया
 उठता गया

 फिर ऐसा गिरा
 कभी ना उठा
 उठ ही गया

   "?"

 uth gayaa

 paidaa huaa
 uth gayaa
 god mai

 letaa tha
 uth gayaa
 baith kar

 baitha tha
 uth gayaa
 pairo par

 gir pada
 uth gayaa

 fir gira
 fir uthaa

 girta gaya
 uthtaa gaya

 uthtaa gaya
 uthtaa gaya

 fir aisaa gira
 kabhee na utha
 uth hee gaya

      "?"
(Srishti Raj Chintak)


 


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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2013, 05:02:39 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2013, 08:50:48 PM »
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So Nice.
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2013, 11:41:19 PM »
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niceeeeeeeee ...
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2013, 05:46:30 PM »
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सभी गुणीजनो का हृदय से आभार.
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