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लिबास देख के अब लोग औकात तोलते हैं ,
अँग्रेज़ी पे अधिकार से ही बात तोलते हैं,

शरीफों से हो ना हो, माफियाओं से ज़रूरी है
इसी पहचान से आपके, ताल्लुक़ात तोलते हैं,

घर पे बैठ के चाय की चुस्कियों से नही,
"बार" मे हुई मीटिंगों से मुलाकात तोलते हैं,

कितनी रुपया गाँठ मे, और कितनी ज़मीन है?
कलयुगी पूत इसीसे बाप के ज़ज्बात तोलते हैं,

ब्लेक शीप और ट्विंकल, कितना अच्छा बोलता है,
अब लोग इस तरह बचपन की शुरुआत तोलते हैं


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: औकात

«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 06:26:17 PM »

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
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Re: औकात

«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2012, 06:47:41 PM »

bekaraar ji aaj k daur ka darpan dikha diya aapne


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Re: औकात

«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2012, 09:40:05 PM »

bahut khoobsurat rachna hai Bekarar ji.... bahut hi umda likha hai aapne... bahut khoob....!!!


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Re: औकात

«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2012, 04:01:07 AM »

Mashaa allaah bahut pyaare khyaalaat hain tabeeyat khush ho gayee padh kar. meree aur se dheron daad qubool karen


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betukh_ bakbaki

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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2012, 04:02:15 AM »

gud


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khujli

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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2012, 05:23:13 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on February 21, 2012, 05:44:22 PM


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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2012, 08:33:26 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on February 21, 2012, 05:44:22 PM

gud one


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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2012, 08:34:54 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on February 21, 2012, 05:44:22 PM

Bahut Bahut Khooob Sanjeev Bro..


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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2012, 10:09:15 AM »

VERYYYYYYYYYY nice & Matrialistic Line Bekrar ji Congrats Clapping Smiley


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Dil Shah

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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2012, 10:44:23 AM »

kaafi badhyaa pesh kash sukriyaaa ji....


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Sahiba Zehra

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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2012, 11:40:21 AM »

Kitni asaani se aapne kitni sacchi baat boldi.

Janab Bekrar, apki peshkash waakai lajawaab hai.


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Re: औकात

«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2012, 11:09:16 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 21, 2012, 06:26:17 PM

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
Applause

bahoo bahoot shukriya janab iftakhar Ahmad sahab,...... Usual Smile


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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2012, 11:19:50 AM »

Quote from: @Heer@ on February 21, 2012, 06:47:41 PM

bekaraar ji aaj k daur ka darpan dikha diya aapne

bahoot abhar aapnesamay diya is rachna ko


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Re: औकात

«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2012, 12:55:05 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 21, 2012, 09:40:05 PM

bahut khoobsurat rachna hai Bekarar ji.... bahut hi umda likha hai aapne... bahut khoob....!!!

bahoot abhar hriday ji......
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