कब तलक:Shairi - E

ramspathak

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कब तलक लोगों को लूटते जाओगे ,
वो दिन कब आएगा जब पछताओगे !

जिनकी दुआओं से राजा बन बैठे हो ,
उनकी ही नज़र से एक दिन गिर जाओगे !

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"


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aqsh

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2013, 12:16:20 AM »

waah waah waah bahut khoob. bade hi achche khayalon se saji hai aapki yeh rachna. aapko hazaron dili daad is kalaam par...

रूह भी छोड़ देगी इस गंदे जिस्म को ,
फिर इस जिस्म को लेकर कहाँ जाओगे!

सिकंदर भी ना ले जा पाया जहाँ से
खाली हाँथ आये थे खाली हाँथ जाओगे !!
Clapping Smiley


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Sudhir Ashq

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2013, 12:49:54 AM »

Wah,Wah,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.Very nice.


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2013, 01:06:45 AM »

बहुत खूब


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 02:28:30 AM »

waah waah waah, bahut khoob deepak jee, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.


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nashwani

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 02:31:22 AM »

behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi ram jee..dhero daad.. happy9


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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2013, 02:53:54 AM »

Quote from: ramspathak on July 05, 2013, 11:23:59 PM

bahut khoob........!


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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2013, 09:41:57 AM »

bahut khoobsoorat


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aru12

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2013, 11:00:41 AM »

waah waah kya baat hai bahut khoob hai......


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Miru;;;;

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2013, 12:20:09 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB..... Applause


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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2013, 11:58:59 PM »

Quote from: ramspathak on July 05, 2013, 11:23:59 PM

मंदिर मज़्जिद के नाम पे खूब लूटा ,
एक दिन वहां भी दरवाज़ा बंद पाओगे !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"

Bahut Khoob


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Re: कब तलक

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Re: कब तलक

«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2013, 01:16:58 PM »

Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in "Aug 2013 Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter". We hope you will continue to grace this Bazm with your beautiful words always. Comments and feedback is appreciated.


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