कारोबार करके देखो -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: March 27, 2012, 06:22:50 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on March 27, 2012, 08:03:57 AM

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Sanjeev Bro..Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!!

Gehrai Aur Saadgi se Kahe Hue Lafz Dil Ko Aur Bhi Zyaada Chuute Hai

Bahut Hi Achi Peshkash!!!

भाई ख्वाइश, स्नेह के लिए हार्दिक आभार Usual Smile


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Re: कारोबार करके देखो

«Reply #16 on: March 27, 2012, 06:24:12 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on March 27, 2012, 10:43:55 AM

nice......!

शेबा जी रचना का सौभाग्य है की हर एक शेर को आपकी दाद मिली, बहूत आभार


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Re: कारोबार करके देखो

«Reply #17 on: March 27, 2012, 06:25:44 PM »

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on March 27, 2012, 10:48:22 AM

bahut sunder jajbaat hain, kuch aisa he khyaal mere bhi hain

किसी के दिल क़ी गहराई में उतर कर देखो
किसी से प्यार करके वफ़ा करके देखो
गर फिर भी न मिले तुम्हे प्यार ओ वफ़ा
तो उसको बेवफा कहने से पहले
अपने गिरेबान में भी तो झाँक कर देखो ......अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

बहूत आभार मित्र, और आपने भी बहूत खूब लिखा है Usual Smile


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Re: कारोबार करके देखो

«Reply #18 on: March 27, 2012, 06:28:00 PM »

Quote from: mkv on March 27, 2012, 12:31:08 PM

Bahut khoob bekaraar jee
sabhi sher ek badhkar ek..
par 2nd one is the best.
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mkv ji aapki saraahna ke liye shukriya janab Usual Smile


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Re: कारोबार करके देखो

«Reply #19 on: March 27, 2012, 06:30:30 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 27, 2012, 03:08:22 PM

Bahut khubsurat peshkash. Guzarish hai
ki post ke title mein apna naam bhi de
diya karein.achha kalaam padhne mein der
hoti hai to bahut takleef hoti hai.

बहूत आभार मित्र, जी बिल्कुल आगे से नाम भी लिख दिया करूँगा.... Usual Smile


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«Reply #20 on: March 29, 2012, 09:12:10 AM »

bekaraar ji bahut sunder likha hai.
ehsaas bhi koot koot kar bhare hain.
maza aa gaya.
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Re: कारोबार करके देखो

«Reply #21 on: November 28, 2019, 09:40:40 AM »

Waah waah kya kahne sanjay bhai jawab nahi ..ahsaasat o jazbaat ka mela laga diya hai aapne...dad qabool karen bhai


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