काश!कोई प्यार का मंदिर होता

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 17, 2015, 05:41:06 PM
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काश!कोई प्यार का मंदिर बना होता
उसमे प्यार की देवी की प्रतिमा होती
अगर कोई भक्त चढाता प्यार का पुष्प
वह  प्यार की देवी को समर्पित होता

मंदिर में प्यारा सा पुजारी होता
और होती एक प्यारी सी पूजा
सबह शाम पुजारी आरती करता
तभी भगवान तुरंत खुश होता

मंदिर में जब कोई मन्नत मांगता
प्यार से अपना सर्वश चढ़ा देता
प्यार की देवी खुश होकर उसकी
उसके सारी तमन्नाये पूरी कर देती

 
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2015, 07:53:00 PM »
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Good idea Rastogi Jee, sabkee manat poori hojaati to phir shayari kaa kyaa hotaa.
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2015, 05:37:04 AM »
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श्री ह्रदय जी को ह्रदय से शुक्रिया
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2015, 05:39:33 AM »
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डा. सैनी जी शुक्रिया
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2015, 05:43:35 AM »
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श्री सुरिन्दर्ण जी शुक्रिया,शायर भी अपनी शायरी द्वारा मन्नत मांगता है कुछ लोग उसकी मन्नत पूरी कर देते है कुछ नही -आर के रस्तोगी


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श्री आहुजा जी शुक्रिया
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2015, 10:59:25 AM »
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behad khubsurat alfaaz hai ram sir ji,,,waaaahhhh daaaadddd,mannat word modify kar lijiye,mangat likha hai
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श्री जीत जैनम जी.मॉडिफिकेशन के लिए शुक्रिया|मन्नत शब्द को सही लिख दिया है |
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सभी पाठको व शायरों का शुक्रिया
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