किसे मैं अपना कहूँ

by Raqeeb on July 24, 2012, 12:39:23 PM
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वो देखो जा रहा है एक आम आदमी ।
सुना रहा है अपनी रोज़मर्रा की कहानी ।।

सर पे एक बोझ चेहरे पे लिए शिकन ।
हर रोज़ खो रहा है वो अपनी जिंदगानी ।।

कभी रिश्तों तो कभी दोस्तों की जुबानी ।
परेशान है वो, और क्यों बढ़ रही परेशानी ।।

एक अजनबी शहर में तेज़ धुप दोपहर में ।
देखो पशु कर रहे आदमियों की निगरानी ।।

खुद को स्वामी कहने वाला बन गया है दास |
भोतिक वस्तुओ की चाह मे रहता है उदास ।।

करना था उसे प्यार, कर रहा उसका इस्तेमाल ।
इस्तेमाल के चीज़ों से, हो गया है उसको प्यार ।।

चीज़ अपनी या लोग अपने, हर रोज़ सोचता रहूँ ।
ऐ 'रक़ीब' तू ही बता मुझे,किसे मैं अपना कहूँ ।।
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 01:43:09 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 01:43:26 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne raqeeb ji,....!!!
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bahut khoob...
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Bahut khoob Raqeeb jee
Applause
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bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 08:15:41 PM »
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Quote from: Raqeeb on July 24, 2012, 12:39:23 PM
वो देखो जा रहा है एक आम आदमी ।
सुना रहा है अपनी रोज़मर्रा की कहानी ।।

सर पे एक बोझ चेहरे पे लिए शिकन ।
हर रोज़ खो रहा है वो अपनी जिंदगानी ।।

कभी रिश्तों तो कभी दोस्तों की जुबानी ।
परेशान है वो, और क्यों बढ़ रही परेशानी ।।

एक अजनबी शहर में तेज़ धुप दोपहर में ।
देखो पशु कर रहे आदमियों की निगरानी ।।

खुद को स्वामी कहने वाला बन गया है दास |
भोतिक वस्तुओ की चाह मे रहता है उदास ।।

करना था उसे प्यार, कर रहा उसका इस्तेमाल ।
इस्तेमाल के चीज़ों से, हो गया है उसको प्यार ।।

चीज़ अपनी या लोग अपने, हर रोज़ सोचता रहूँ ।
ऐ 'रक़ीब' तू ही बता मुझे,किसको मैं अपना कहूँ ।।
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2012, 10:11:33 AM »
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Applause Applause Nice keep writing.....
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 24, 2012, 01:43:09 PM
bahut achhaa hai badhaai

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 24, 2012, 01:43:26 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne raqeeb ji,....!!!

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Quote from: gaytri gupta on July 24, 2012, 03:40:40 PM
bahut khoob...

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Quote from: mkv on July 24, 2012, 04:33:55 PM
Bahut khoob Raqeeb jee
Applause

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bahut khoob  Applause Applause

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Applause Applause Nice keep writing.....

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