कोई अदावत नही है bekarar

by bekarar on January 16, 2011, 09:35:31 PM
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जिन लोगों को इक-दूजे से शिकायत नही है,
ये निशानी है की अब उनमे मोहब्बत नही है,

ग़लत देख कर भी जो नज़रें झुकी रहें,
उन शरीफों मे जान लो शराफ़त नही है,

सर-ए-आम क्यूँ नुमाइश, कुछ परदा तो रखो.
रस्म-ए-उलफत है मियाँ, कोई बग़ावत नही है,

मेरी मस्तमौलेपन की इक ये भी वज़ह रही
दुनियादारी के फन मे मेरी महारत नही है,

अस्मत-आबरू और ईमान का बाज़ार है बड़ा,
इनको बेचना अब कोई, हिमाकत नही है,

माँगने से ना मिले तो छीन के ले लो,
भूख से मर जाना, शहादत नही है,

मदद करो ग़रीबों की मगर किरदार भी देखो,
मुफ़लिसी, ईमानदारी की जमानत नही है,

मे दवा कहता हूँ, वो मए को ज़हर कहते हैं,
इसी बात का झगड़ा है कोई अदावत नही है

jin logon ko ek-duje se shikayat nahi hai,
ye nishani hai ki ab unme mohabbat nahi hai

Ghalat dekh-kar bhi jinki najren jhuki rahe,
un sharifon me jaan lo sharafat nahi hai

sar-e-aam numaish kyun, kuch parda to rakho,
rasm-e-ulfat hai miyan, koi baghavat nahi hai

mere mast-moulepan ki ik ye bhi wazah rahi,
duniyadaari ki fun me meri maharat nahi hai

Asmat-aabroo aur imaan ka bazar hai bada,
ab inko bechna, koi himakat nahi hai,

magne se na mile to fir cheen ke le lo,
bhookh se marna, koi shahadat nahi hai,

madad karo gharib ki magar kirdaar bhi dekho,
muflisi, imaandaari ki jamanat nahi hai

mai dava kahta hun, wo "may" ko zahar kahte hain,
isi baat ka jhagda hai, koi adavat nahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 03:50:02 AM »
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Waj Kya Baat Hai Sanjeev Bhai... Zindgi Ke Kuch Kadve Ehasaason Se Ru-B-Ru Karwa Diya aapne.. Har ek Sher Apne aap Me Succhaai Liye Hue Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 04:55:21 AM »
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wahhh bekaraar ji waah..mast likha hai har ek sher aapne...dil se nikla hua... kadwi dawa jo acche parinaam deti hai..bht mast ji...
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 06:10:20 AM »
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wah wah bekararji bhut khub

aapki shayari sach main kamal hai...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 10:20:54 AM »
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Waj Kya Baat Hai Sanjeev Bhai... Zindgi Ke Kuch Kadve Ehasaason Se Ru-B-Ru Karwa Diya aapne.. Har ek Sher Apne aap Me Succhaai Liye Hue Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**

aapki har daad ke liye shukriya bhai vicky...bas aapka saath bana rahe..likhne me maja aata hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 10:25:02 AM »
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wahhh bekaraar ji waah..mast likha hai har ek sher aapne...dil se nikla hua... kadwi dawa jo acche parinaam deti hai..bht mast ji...

shukriya KDK ji humesha ki tarah aapki daad ne dil ko sukun panhuchaya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 10:26:35 AM »
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wah wah bekararji bhut khub

aapki shayari sach main kamal hai...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

yun hi najr-e-inayat banaye rakhen bahoot shukriya manjum ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 10:35:47 AM »
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Mast kalaam hai aapka....Bekararji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Maiy ghunt do ghunt piyo tou dawaa hai....
Botal poori pee jaao tou badi khataa hai....
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 10:46:33 AM »
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bahut hi badhiya likha h apne bekarar ji..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 02:48:21 PM »
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@ koyal ji,
bahoot shukriya aapki sarahna ke liye..aur aapki fatafat express se nikli ye do line bahoot khoob rahi.... Usual Smile
@ abhi ji
pasand farmane ke liye shukriya dost  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 07:03:23 PM »
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Janaab Bekharaar Saheb Aadaab!

Kia kaheN janab... kia khoob likhate hai aap..
Behad khoob khayaal aur byaani hai aapki...

Aapko padhne ka aur samjhne ka alag hi mazaa hai..Usual Smile
         



जिन लोगों को इक-दूजे से शिकायत नही है,
ये निशानी है की अब उनमे मोहब्बत नही है,

Waah Janaab Waah!
Be IntehaaN sahiN farmayaa aapne...
Isi Khayaal se wabastaa hume aik sher yaad aa gaya..


Kabhi kabhi mohobat meiN aazmaish honi chahiye
Be IntehaaN pyaar meiN taqraar ki gunjaish honi chahiye         

         


ग़लत देख कर भी जो नज़रें झुकी रहें,
उन शरीफों मे जान लो शराफ़त नही है,

Hmmm kia tanz kia hai janab. behad haq baat kahi hai daad Usual Smile         

सर-ए-आम क्यूँ नुमाइश, कुछ परदा तो रखो.
रस्म-ए-उलफत है मियाँ, कोई बग़ावत नही है,

Hmmm... Achcha sher hai... daad Usual Smile         

मेरी मस्तमौलेपन की इक ये भी वज़ह रही
दुनियादारी के फन मे मेरी महारत नही है,

ye hoye kia kahne hai janab.. waah dil jeet lia aapne behad khoob daad daad daad... Usual Smile         

अस्मत-आबरू और ईमान का बाज़ार है बड़ा,
इनको बेचना अब कोई, हिमाकत नही है,

Kia kaheN saheb aaj ke dunia ki sachai hai bus... daad daad Usual Smile         

माँगने से ना मिले तो छीन के ले लो,
भूख से मर जाना, शहादत नही है,

KahaaN se aise khayaal aate hai janab aapke..
ZaheN meiN waah kia bus loot liaa aapne is sher se .. Usual Smile           


मदद करो ग़रीबों की मगर किरदार भी देखो,
मुफ़लिसी, ईमानदारी की जमानत नही है,

Hmmm Janab... Daad Daad daad Usual Smile         


मे दवा कहता हूँ, वो मए को ज़हर कहते हैं,
इसी बात का झगड़ा है कोई अदावत नही है

Kia kahne hai janab Bahut umdaa behad khoob...
Dil se daad kabool kijiye.. Usual Smile         



Janab Aise umdaa khayaal aur umdaa ashaaroN ke tareef ke liye humare paas lafz nahi...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye...
Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2011, 03:05:20 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Sanjeev Ji Bahut Hi Snder Likha Hai
Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2011, 04:13:23 AM »
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Nasiihat detii aur dil ko chhute ehsaas bahut khoob likhe hai aapne ... bekaraar Ji ! ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa kalaam likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush raheN ... !

ek umdaa peshkash ... ! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

duaaon ke saath .. !
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2011, 05:44:45 AM »
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Wah Wah Sanjeev Bhai Kya Kehne ,Aapka Jawaab Nahi
Well Main Aapko Comment Karun Itni To Meri Auqaat Nahi
Par Kya Karun Aapko Parhkar Chhup Bhi To Nahi Reh Sakta
Mere Pass Alfaaz Nahi Hain Tareef Ke Liye Humesha Ki Tarah
Ek Lajawaab Peshkash Bahut Hi Khuub Bhai.Makte Ko Chhodkar
Baaki Sab Mujhe Bahut Hi Pasand Aaya Aur Dil Ke Kareeb Raha.

Hazaron Dad...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~



Bhai Shihab,
Apaka bahoot shukriya ki aapne is koshish ko itna sararha......lekin makte ko agar aap mahaj "sharab se" jodkar dekhenge to aapko pasand na yaae....makte me "maye" kisi sanket ki tarah se istemaal kiya gaya hai aur kahne ki koshish ki gai hai ki "ho sakta hai kisi ke liye koi chese kharab ho ya buri ho...lekin wahi chese kisi aur ke liye achchi bhi ho sakti hai......isiliye to likha ki "adavat nahi hai" sirf vicharon ka jhagda hai......
aapki comment ka fir se shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2011, 05:49:09 AM »
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Janaab Bekharaar Saheb Aadaab!

Kia kaheN janab... kia khoob likhate hai aap..
Behad khoob khayaal aur byaani hai aapki...

Aapko padhne ka aur samjhne ka alag hi mazaa hai..Usual Smile
         



Janab Aise umdaa khayaal aur umdaa ashaaroN ke tareef ke liye humare paas lafz nahi...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye...
Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhshe.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         



Parwaaz ji aapki itni behtreen samiksha ka mai to yakinan kayal hun....har rachna ko aapka yun samay dena har sher ko dhyaan se padhna.....badhai ke patr to aap hain, bahoot bahoot shukriya janab  Usual Smile
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