' खेल ' Vs " मैं "

by rsd4u on February 04, 2012, 07:13:20 PM
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वो लिखते हैं हमारा नाम मिट्टी में ,
और मिटा देते हैं....
उनके लिए तो ये खेल होगा मगर ;
हमें तो वो मिट्टी में मिला देते हैं.....
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2012, 04:19:29 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2012, 04:31:28 AM »
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khub
mitti pe naam likh ,mithi se he dabate hai
sach kahe gar ko pyar ko logo se bachate hai hai
Quote from: rsd4u on February 04, 2012, 07:13:20 PM

वो लिखते हैं हमारा नाम मिट्टी में ,
और मिटा देते हैं....
उनके लिए तो ये खेल होगा मगर ;
हमें तो वो मिट्टी में मिला देते हैं.....
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2012, 05:41:31 AM »
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bht khoob kaha janaab
daad daad
Quote from: rsd4u on February 04, 2012, 07:13:20 PM

वो लिखते हैं हमारा नाम मिट्टी में ,
और मिटा देते हैं....
उनके लिए तो ये खेल होगा मगर ;
हमें तो वो मिट्टी में मिला देते हैं.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2012, 07:31:03 AM »
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Quote from: rsd4u on February 04, 2012, 07:13:20 PM

वो लिखते हैं हमारा नाम मिट्टी में ,
और मिटा देते हैं....
उनके लिए तो ये खेल होगा मगर ;
हमें तो वो मिट्टी में मिला देते हैं.....
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2012, 06:01:34 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2012, 06:02:30 PM »
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Thank u so much for your precious compliments..... love4
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2012, 06:24:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai..Applause

BeintehaN pyar ka saboot hai ye
dil me tu basa hai hosh me kaha ve
kahkar ye baat unka dil na dukha
teri is khata se anjaan hai ve
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2012, 02:54:04 AM »
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bahut khub
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Bahut khoob likha hai..Applause

BeintehaN pyar ka saboot hai ye
dil me tu basa hai hosh me kaha ve
kahkar ye baat unka dil na dukha
teri is khata se anjaan hai ve
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2012, 03:01:48 AM »
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bahut khub
Shukriya manoj Bhai
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2012, 01:11:25 AM »
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wah ji wah. really good.
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bahoot khoob likha janab
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