ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से .....................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 02, 2013, 01:12:34 AM
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दुनियाँ भर की खाक़ हम छानते रहे
ज़िंदगी में  ज़िंदगी से भागते रहे

कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

ना ज़मीन को पाया ना आसमाँ देखा
जाने किस किस का कहा मानते  रहे

इसीलिए आँखोंमें अश्क दामन में खाक़ है
हम दिल के ज़रूरी काम सारे टालते रहे

आते भला कैसे भीगी-सी आँखों में अपनी
ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से हम जागते रहे

शामिल ही कब थे चूहे भी दौड़ में
बिल्लियों को देखकर वो भागते रहे

दर्द ने सीने में उठकर बिठा दिया 'सरु'
बोझ जमाने का जो दिल पर डालते रहे

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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2013, 01:28:28 AM »
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बहुत उम्दा.
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2013, 02:00:04 AM »
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nice suresh ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2013, 02:28:12 AM »
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bahut umda suresh jee..daad..happy9
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2013, 08:52:43 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya saini ji
aap yun hi hausla afzahi karte rahen
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bahut 2 shukriya
Ravi ji
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 02, 2013, 01:12:34 AM

 
दुनियाँ भर की खाक़ हम छानते रहे
ज़िंदगी में  ज़िंदगी से भागते रहे

कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

ना ज़मीन को पाया ना आसमाँ देखा
जाने किस किस का कहा मानते  रहे

इसीलिए आँखोंमें अश्क दामन में खाक़ है
हम दिल के ज़रूरी काम सारे टालते रहे

आते भला कैसे भीगी-सी आँखों में अपनी
ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से हम जागते रहे

शामिल ही कब थे चूहे भी दौड़ में
बिल्लियों को देखकर वो भागते रहे

दर्द ने सीने में उठकर बिठा दिया 'सरु'
बोझ जमाने का जो दिल पर डालते रहे




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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2013, 02:38:05 PM »
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barhee hi khoobsurti se ehsaasaat e dil bayaan kiye Suresh ji ... bbahaut khoob !
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कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

Bahut khoob Suresh jee
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«Reply #14 on: October 02, 2013, 03:23:11 PM »
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कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

आते भला कैसे भीगी-सी आँखों में अपनी
ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से हम जागते रहे
waah waah lajawaab suresh ji
umda kalaam pesh kiya hai ,behad achhe lage ye asaar.
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