ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से .....................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 02, 2013, 01:12:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 02, 2013, 05:22:53 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya sahal ji
Quote from: sahal on October 02, 2013, 03:23:11 PM
कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

आते भला कैसे भीगी-सी आँखों में अपनी
ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से हम जागते रहे
waah waah lajawaab suresh ji
umda kalaam pesh kiya hai ,behad achhe lage ye asaar.
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«Reply #16 on: October 02, 2013, 05:24:55 PM »
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thankeww so muchhhh zarra ji so nice of u apne comments likhna ke liye
Quote from: zarraa on October 02, 2013, 02:38:05 PM
barhee hi khoobsurti se ehsaasaat e dil bayaan kiye Suresh ji ... bbahaut khoob !
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«Reply #17 on: October 02, 2013, 05:26:44 PM »
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thankewwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooooo much....
aapne apna waqt diya iqtedar ji
Quote from: Iqtedar on October 02, 2013, 02:45:50 PM
bahot khooooob  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: October 02, 2013, 06:35:09 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 02, 2013, 01:12:34 AM

 
दुनियाँ भर की खाक़ हम छानते रहे
ज़िंदगी में  ज़िंदगी से भागते रहे

कुछ राबता तो है उस शहर से मेरा
पलके बिछाए रास्ते मुझे ताक़ते रहे

ना ज़मीन को पाया ना आसमाँ देखा
जाने किस किस का कहा मानते  रहे

इसीलिए आँखोंमें अश्क दामन में खाक़ है
हम दिल के ज़रूरी काम सारे टालते रहे

आते भला कैसे भीगी-सी आँखों में अपनी
ख्वाब टूटने के शोर से हम जागते रहे

शामिल ही कब थे चूहे भी दौड़ में
बिल्लियों को देखकर वो भागते रहे

दर्द ने सीने में उठकर बिठा दिया 'सरु'
बोझ जमाने का जो दिल पर डालते रहे



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«Reply #19 on: October 02, 2013, 06:48:51 PM »
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just beautiful , sangwan ji . Congrats .
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«Reply #20 on: October 02, 2013, 08:53:02 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: October 02, 2013, 11:58:28 PM »
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thakewwwwwwwwww K_A ji
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«Reply #22 on: October 03, 2013, 12:00:27 AM »
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  bahut 2 shukriya siddiqui ji
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just beautiful , sangwan ji . Congrats .
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«Reply #23 on: October 03, 2013, 02:05:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaah waah waah.. behtareen peshkash.. dheron daaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #24 on: October 04, 2013, 12:11:12 AM »
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Waaaaaah waah waah.. behtareen peshkash.. dheron daaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #25 on: October 06, 2013, 04:07:56 AM »
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khoooooooooooooooooooob suresh ji daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #26 on: October 06, 2013, 04:51:37 PM »
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thanks parinde ji..........
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khoooooooooooooooooooob suresh ji daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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