जिसको जाना था, गया; पीछे छोड़ी धूल / Jisko jaanaa thaa, gayaa!

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जिसको जाना था, गया; पीछे छोड़ी धूल !
कौन गया? कब गया था? पथ जाएगा भूल !!

साथी खा ठोकर गिरा, पथिक हुआ बेहाल !
गिरा, गिरा ही रह गया; ऐसा था भूचाल !!

 Jisko jaanaa thaa, gayaa; peechhe chhodee dhuul!
Koun gayaa? Kab gayaa thaa? Path jaayegaa bhuul!!

Saathee khaa thhokar giraa, pathik huaa behaal!
Giraa; giraa hee rah gayaa; aisaa thaa bhuuchaal!!

                  - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya' / abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2014, 09:29:35 AM »
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वाह......
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So nice.
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on October 24, 2014, 09:29:35 AM
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Dhanyawaad, Saxenaji!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 24, 2014, 10:31:33 AM
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Dhanyawaad Saini ji!
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on October 24, 2014, 10:47:00 AM
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Shukriyah Amit ji!
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 24, 2014, 12:55:43 PM
So nice.

Thanks Ravi ji!
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Surindarn ji!
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