तो बेहतर होगा....

by Minakshi vats on June 19, 2014, 12:48:55 AM
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नारी है,नर से बेहतर है इसे ये अहसास ना दिलाया तो बेहतर होगा,

नींव है इस समाज की इस जहान की,इसे ना हिलाया तो बेहतर होगा,

चुप है तो ये भी अंदाज है इसका,इसे मौन रहने दिया जाए तो बेहतर होगा,

जन्म देती है तो मिटाना भी जानती है,इसे ये हाल मे ना लाया जाए तो बेहतर होगा,

लक्ष्मी है किसी घर की किसी आंगन की,इसे दुर्गा ना बनाया गया तो बेहतर होगा।
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