पर्दा हटाओ तो जानें / Pardaa hataao to jaaneN.......................SAINI

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गुनाहों  से  पर्दा   हटाओ   तो  जानें  |

सज़ा  कातिलों  को दिलाओ  तो जानें ||
 

उठा  कर  नज़र  क्यों  मिलाते नहीं हो |

नज़र  में  किसी  को बसाओ तो जानें  ||
 

कमाया  है कितना  लुटाया  है कितना |

ज़रा खुल के सब को बताओ तो जानें  ||
 

दिलों में  ये दूरी   बढ़ी  आज  कैसे |

बढ़ी सो  बढ़ी है मिटाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

अलग  अपने रास्तों पे सब जा रहे हैं |

इन्हें  आज जा  के मनाओ तो जानें ||
 

कमी तो  बताते हो सब की ग़ज़ल में |

कमी  दूर  करके दिखाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

किसी  को  न‘सैनी ’की परवाह कोई |

उसे  महफ़िलों में बुलाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी  


GunaahoN  se  pardaa  hataao  to  jaaneN.
Sazaa  qaatiloN  ko   dilaao  to  jaaneN.

Uthaa  kar nazar kyoN milaate naheeN ho.
Nazar  meN  kisee  ko  basaao  to jaaneN.

Kamaayaa hai kitnaa lutaayaa hai kitnaa.
Zaraa  khul  ke  sab ko bataao to jaaneN.

DiloN  meN  ye  dooree badhee aaj kaise.
Badhee  so  badhee  hai mitaao to jaaneN.

Alag apne  rastoN pe sab  jaa rahe haiN.
Inhe  aaj   jaa  ke  manaao  to   jaane.

Kamee to bataate  ho sab kee ghazal meN.
Kamee  door  karke   dikhaao  to  jaaneN.

Kisee  ko  n  ‘saini’   kee parwaah koi.
Use  mahfiloN  meN   bulaao   to  jaaneN.

Dr.Surendra Saini  

 
 

 
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 07:46:43 AM »
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waaaahh waah...bohot khoob likha hai sir...
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 08:26:42 AM »
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sir lajwab aur mukammil ghazal kahi hai, bohut sari daad aur dili Mubarakbad
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 10:16:23 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI SIR
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 10:33:29 AM »
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waah waah Saini Ji, bahut khoob kaha, kabhi mehfil saajayenge to aap ko jaroor bulaayenge, bahut bahut badhai aur ek rau bhi
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 10:53:20 AM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne jee bahut khoob.... badi hi
khoobsurat gazal kahi hai... behad khoob janab...

Matle se lekar maqte tak khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ka
muzahera kiya hai... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: sksaini4 on June 15, 2012, 06:27:43 AM


GunaahoN  se  pardaa  hataao  to  jaane.
Sazaa  qaatiloN  ko   dilaao  to  jaane.

Behad gazab ka matla kaha hai janab... bahut
khoob aur behad umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile                   

Uthaa  kar nazar kyoN milaate naheeN ho.
Nazar  meN  kisee  ko  basaao  to jaane.

achcha sher hai jee daad Usual Smile                   

Kamaayaa hai kitnaa lutaayaa hai kitnaa.
Zaraa  khul  ke  sab ko bataao to jaane.

Waah waah waah jee kia baat hai... yeH toH direct
sawaal hai bahut khoob daad ..                   

DiloN  meN  ye  dooree badhee aaj kaise.
Badhee  so  badhee  hai mitaao to jaane.

Kia kahne jee bahut khoob..                   

Alag apne  rastoN pe sab  jaa rahe haiN.
Inhe  aaj   jaa  ke  manaao  to   jaane.

bahut khoob janab ...                   

Kamee to bataate  ho sab kee ghazal meN.
Kamee  door  karke   dikhaao  to  jaane.

Hahahahaha janab itna hunar nahi hai hum meiN...
Hum kamiyaaN dikhane waalon meiN se hai.. tongue3
Achcha taNz kiya hai daad daad daad Usual Smile                   

Kisee  ko  n  ‘saini’   kee parwaah koi.
Use  mahfiloN  meN   bulaao   to  jaane.

Bahut khoob jee achcha andaaz haiN dawat maNgne ka ..
zaroor janab... aur aapki parwaaH kise nahi hai janab..
aap toH is mehfil ki shaan ho... Usual Smile                   

Dr.Surendra Saini 

 
 

 
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 11:30:49 AM »
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very nice Sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2012, 01:17:32 PM »
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A collection of superb ash'ar.
1 Rau pesh-ae-khidmat hai.
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2012, 01:43:34 PM »
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bahut  khoob  saini  saheb . daad  +  rau  .
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2012, 02:09:00 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saini ji....!~!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2012, 04:15:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saini Jee. Roz ki tarah aapki ye ghazal bhi kaafi achhi rahi. Meri taraf se dheron daad aur ek Rau.

Ek cheez kehne ki gustakhi karna chahunga Saini Jee, aapne jo jaane likha hai wo jaanein hona chahiye meri nazar se.

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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2012, 04:36:49 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 15, 2012, 06:27:43 AM
गुनाहों  से  पर्दा   हटाओ   तो  जानें  |

सज़ा  कातिलों  को दिलाओ जानें  तो  ||
 

उठा  कर  नज़र  क्यों  मिलाते नहीं हो |

नज़र  में  किसी  को बसाओ तो जानें  ||
 

कमाया  है कितना  लुटाया  है कितना |

ज़रा खुल के सब को बताओ तो जानें  ||
 

दिलों में  ये दूरी   बढ़ी  आज  कैसे |

बढ़ी सो  बढ़ी है मिटाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

अलग  अपने रास्तों पे सब जा रहे हैं |

इन्हें  आज जा  के मनाओ तो जानें ||
 

कमी तो  बताते हो सब की ग़ज़ल में |

कमी  दूर  करके दिखाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

किसी  को  न‘सैनी ’की परवाह कोई |

उसे  महफ़िलों में बुलाओ  तो जानें  ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी 


GunaahoN  se  pardaa  hataao  to  jaaneN.
Sazaa  qaatiloN  ko   dilaao  to  jaaneN.

Uthaa  kar nazar kyoN milaate naheeN ho.
Nazar  meN  kisee  ko  basaao  to jaaneN.

Kamaayaa hai kitnaa lutaayaa hai kitnaa.
Zaraa  khul  ke  sab ko bataao to jaaneN.

DiloN  meN  ye  dooree badhee aaj kaise.
Badhee  so  badhee  hai mitaao to jaaneN.

Alag apne  rastoN pe sab  jaa rahe haiN.
Inhe  aaj   jaa  ke  manaao  to   jaane.

Kamee to bataate  ho sab kee ghazal meN.
Kamee  door  karke   dikhaao  to  jaaneN.

Kisee  ko  n  ‘saini’   kee parwaah koi.
Use  mahfiloN  meN   bulaao   to  jaaneN.

Dr.Surendra Saini 

 
 

 

JANAAB KYA KAHOO.N YE MEHFIL TO AAP KO SURR AANKH PE RAKHTI HAI SKS.

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   (NAZAR SE NAZAR MILAAO TO JAANE) ----SHER 2

         
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