पहले काबिल बन जा......

by pawan16 on October 06, 2012, 03:11:24 PM
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पहले काबिल बन जा,
फिर किसी के लिये साहिल बन जा,
मेरी इस महफिल मे कर कुछ ऐसा,
हर एक की चाहत के मुताबिल बन जा,
राह मे ख्वाहिश ओढे चल,
एक चलता काफिल  बन जा,
छोड तु क्या था क्या हे,
सबके लिये  चाहत लफ्स   हासिल बन जा,
जुबान पर सबके तेरी पहचान  हो,
अब तु सबके लिये राहिल बन जा.......पवन
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2012, 03:48:37 PM »
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ye mutabil,qaafil kyaa hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2012, 04:48:31 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 06, 2012, 03:48:37 PM
ye mutabil,qaafil kyaa hai ji

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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2012, 05:15:07 PM »
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shayad mutaabik, kaafila likhna chaahte the aap.
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2012, 07:54:35 AM »
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Quote from: pawan16 on October 06, 2012, 03:11:24 PM
पहले काबिल बन जा,
फिर किसी के लिये साहिल बन जा,
मेरी इस महफिल मे कर कुछ ऐसा,
हर एक की चाहत के मुताबिल बन जा,
राह मे ख्वाहिश ओढे चल,
एक चलता काफिल  बन जा,
छोड तु क्या था क्या हे,
सबके लिये  चाहत लफ्स   हासिल बन जा,
जुबान पर सबके तेरी पहचान  हो,
अब तु सबके लिये राहिल बन जा.......पवन


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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2012, 01:11:22 PM »
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veryyyyyy niceeeeeeeee
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