पैमाना लिए फिरता है .........

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 06, 2013, 08:38:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 07, 2013, 01:04:57 AM »
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shukriya mkv ji
Quote from: mkv on October 06, 2013, 09:50:55 PM
कौन सुने तेरी दास्ताँ 'सरु'दुनियाँ-ए-महफ़िल में
हर कोई जहाँ अपना ही अफ़साना लिए फिरता है
Bahut khoob Suresh jee
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«Reply #16 on: October 07, 2013, 02:33:00 AM »
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«Reply #17 on: October 07, 2013, 03:04:51 AM »
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जिंदगी का वो अपनी नज़राना लिए फिरता है
नज़रानों में हसरत-ए-मयख़ाना लिए फिरता है

लबों  पे  तेरे आकर  हर बात ग़ज़ल लगती है
वर्ना कितने ही लफ्ज़ ये ज़माना लिए फिरता है

बहुत कुछ पाने के बाद भी कुछ और बाक़ी है
दिल-ए-इनसां  अजीब सा पैमाना लिए फिरता है

तू मुस्कुराए तो दिल मिरा फूल सा खिल जाए
वर्ना कितने फूल हर दीवाना लिए फिरता है

दिल की शमाँ जले गर तू निगाह भर के देख ले
आँखों में कितना नशा परवाना लिए फिरता है

देना  तवज्जो  गर मेरी  नज़रों  में वफ़ाएँ है
वर्ना मोहब्बत कहाँ कोई बेगाना लिए फिरता है

कौन सुने तेरी दास्ताँ 'सरु'दुनियाँ-ए-महफ़िल में
हर कोई जहाँ अपना ही अफ़साना लिए फिरता है

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
वाह.!वाह.!बहुत उम्दा.!!
एक राउ क़बूल करें,सुरेश जी..!!
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«Reply #18 on: October 07, 2013, 01:30:37 PM »
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Waaaaaah waah waah... behad khoob... bahut achcha likhe ho aap... mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #19 on: October 07, 2013, 04:12:58 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: October 07, 2013, 07:57:53 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab...!


Waah waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob... Badi khoob kalaam huyi hai jee... aik se badhkar aik khayaaloN ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai aapne...

Kia kahne jee, Hume toH yaqeen hi nahi ho raha hai aapke kalam ki dhaar dekh kar... waqai behad umdaa kalaam huyi hai... Sabhi ashaar gazab ke rahe... Is umda kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #21 on: October 07, 2013, 07:59:46 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: October 07, 2013, 08:00:28 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: October 07, 2013, 08:02:17 PM »
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BAHUT 2 SHUKRIYA RAVI JI
Hausla afzahi karte rahen......
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 07, 2013, 03:04:51 AM

जिंदगी का वो अपनी नज़राना लिए फिरता है
नज़रानों में हसरत-ए-मयख़ाना लिए फिरता है

लबों  पे  तेरे आकर  हर बात ग़ज़ल लगती है
वर्ना कितने ही लफ्ज़ ये ज़माना लिए फिरता है

बहुत कुछ पाने के बाद भी कुछ और बाक़ी है
दिल-ए-इनसां  अजीब सा पैमाना लिए फिरता है

तू मुस्कुराए तो दिल मिरा फूल सा खिल जाए
वर्ना कितने फूल हर दीवाना लिए फिरता है

दिल की शमाँ जले गर तू निगाह भर के देख ले
आँखों में कितना नशा परवाना लिए फिरता है

देना  तवज्जो  गर मेरी  नज़रों  में वफ़ाएँ है
वर्ना मोहब्बत कहाँ कोई बेगाना लिए फिरता है

कौन सुने तेरी दास्ताँ 'सरु'दुनियाँ-ए-महफ़िल में
हर कोई जहाँ अपना ही अफ़साना लिए फिरता है

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
वाह.!वाह.!बहुत उम्दा.!!
एक राउ क़बूल करें,सुरेश जी..!!
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«Reply #24 on: October 07, 2013, 08:05:39 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bahut bahut shukriya parwaz ji
aap comments to itni tasalli se aur behtreen tareeke se likhte hain...bahut achha lagta hai.....
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 07, 2013, 07:57:53 PM

Suresh Jee Aadaab...!


Waah waaH waaH jee waaH kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob... Badi khoob kalaam huyi hai jee... aik se badhkar aik khayaaloN ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai aapne...

Kia kahne jee, Hume toH yaqeen hi nahi ho raha hai aapke kalam ki dhaar dekh kar... waqai behad umdaa kalaam huyi hai... Sabhi ashaar gazab ke rahe... Is umda kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #25 on: October 07, 2013, 08:07:36 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya  nandbahuji 
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