प्यारा इक ख़्वाब ....................saru.................

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 06, 2013, 08:23:43 PM
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #15 on: December 07, 2013, 12:21:34 AM »
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adil ji taab means ----chamak hai yahan

anyway thankeww so much
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«Reply #16 on: December 07, 2013, 12:22:18 AM »
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thanks a lot zaif ji
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O teri, kya kehne yar. Waaaaaaaaah !!!
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«Reply #17 on: December 07, 2013, 12:23:19 AM »
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thanks sarfira ji
aap kahan rehte hain aajkal
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waaaahhhhj Suresh ji
aapke kalaamo ke kya kehne aajkal
bht khoob ar bht hi khoob ji
daad daad daad
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«Reply #18 on: December 07, 2013, 12:24:16 AM »
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thankewww lovely ji
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kya ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.. mubarak ho... behad khubsurat..
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«Reply #19 on: December 07, 2013, 12:35:30 AM »
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thanks charan ji
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«Reply #20 on: December 07, 2013, 01:47:59 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #21 on: December 07, 2013, 02:47:03 AM »
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adil ji taab means ----chamak hai yahan

anyway thankeww so much
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Saru jee, sahi hai, taabaaN means raushani/chamak hota hai aur aapne bilkul sahi likha hai.
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«Reply #22 on: December 07, 2013, 02:49:09 AM »
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आफ़ताब  में आग और  बादल में पानी से
बहुत खुश हूँ ए आसमाँ तेरी सायबानी से

शौक़-ए-वफ़ादारी तो उसको भी ना था कुछ
कुछ  बात  बिगड़ती  रही  मेरी  नादानी से

ये इंसानी फ़ितरत है दुनियाँ-ए-महफ़िल में
जलते  हैं  लोग  यहाँ  चाँद की ताबानी से

आती  हैं  आँधियाँ  हर  राह पे हर मोड़ पे
ये नहीं मुमकिन कट जाए सफ़र आसानी से

Bahut khoob Saru jee, ye ashaar kaafi achhe lage.
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«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2013, 01:55:02 PM »
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Waaaaaaah waaaaaaaah saru ji... bahut khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari peshkash rahi... sabhi ashaar bahut pyaare hain aur bahut pasand aaye... hazaron hazaron daaaaaad qubool karo...

Shauk-e-wafadaari to usko bhi na tha kuch
Kuch baat bigadati rahi meri nadaani se

Aati hain aandhiyan har rah pe har mod pe
Ye nahin mumkin kat jaye safar aasani se
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«Reply #24 on: December 07, 2013, 05:47:31 PM »
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आफ़ताब  में आग और  बादल में पानी से
बहुत खुश हूँ ए आसमाँ तेरी सायबानी से

प्यारा इक ख़्वाब पलक पे आकर बैठ गया
महक  उठा है  मोहब्बत  की मेहरबानी से

शौक़-ए-वफ़ादारी तो उसको भी ना था कुछ
कुछ  बात  बिगड़ती  रही  मेरी  नादानी से

ये इंसानी फ़ितरत है महफ़िल-ए- दुनियाँ में
जलते  हैं  लोग  यहाँ  चाँद की ताबानी से

आती  हैं  आँधियाँ  हर  राह पे हर मोड़ पे
ये नहीं मुमकिन कट जाए सफ़र आसानी से

जैसे  में  कुछ नहीं मेरा अरमान कुछ नहीं
कम  आँकने  लगा  वो  मेरी  फरावानी से

अश्क़  आँखों  में गई  सिजदे में सर लेकर
कैसे खुश हो गया वो 'सरु' की परेशानी से






Aaftaab mein aag o baadal mein paani se
Bahut khush hoon e aasmaan teri saibaani se

Pyara sa ik khwaab palak pe aakar baith gaya
Mehak utha hai mohabbat ki meharbaani se

Shauk-e-wafadaari to usko bhi na tha kuch
Kuch baat bigadati rahi meri nadaani se

Ye insaani fitrat hai mehfil -e-dunian mein
Jalte hain log yahan chand ki tabaani se

Aati hain aandhiyan har rah pe har mod pe
Ye nahin mumkin kat jaye safar aasani se

Jaise mein kuch nahin mera armaan kuch nahin
Kam aankne laga vo meri farwani se

Ashq aankhon mein gai sazde mein sar lekar
Kaise khush ho gaya vo ‘saru’ ki pareshani se






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«Reply #25 on: December 07, 2013, 07:04:50 PM »
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thankeww soooooooooooooooooo much iftakhar ji.
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आफ़ताब  में आग और  बादल में पानी से
बहुत खुश हूँ ए आसमाँ तेरी सायबानी से

शौक़-ए-वफ़ादारी तो उसको भी ना था कुछ
कुछ  बात  बिगड़ती  रही  मेरी  नादानी से

ये इंसानी फ़ितरत है दुनियाँ-ए-महफ़िल में
जलते  हैं  लोग  यहाँ  चाँद की ताबानी से

आती  हैं  आँधियाँ  हर  राह पे हर मोड़ पे
ये नहीं मुमकिन कट जाए सफ़र आसानी से

Bahut khoob Saru jee, ye ashaar kaafi achhe lage.
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«Reply #26 on: December 07, 2013, 07:05:43 PM »
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aqsh ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka
I like your comment very much.
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Waaaaaaah waaaaaaaah saru ji... bahut khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari peshkash rahi... sabhi ashaar bahut pyaare hain aur bahut pasand aaye... hazaron hazaron daaaaaad qubool karo...

Shauk-e-wafadaari to usko bhi na tha kuch
Kuch baat bigadati rahi meri nadaani se

Aati hain aandhiyan har rah pe har mod pe
Ye nahin mumkin kat jaye safar aasani se
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«Reply #27 on: December 07, 2013, 07:06:17 PM »
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qalb ji thankewww soooooooooooooo much
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«Reply #28 on: December 07, 2013, 07:07:50 PM »
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«Reply #29 on: December 07, 2013, 07:09:46 PM »
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thankewwwwww ssssooooooooooooooo much premdeep ji
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