बहारों के खिलाफ:Shairi - E

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इश्क़ पर उठते हुए कड़वे सवालों के खिलाफ,
उठ रही है इक लहर कच्चे किनारों के खिलाफ ||

चाँद सा चेहरा दिखा तो चल पड़े उसकी तरफ,
क्या चलेंगी अब हवाएं इन् जहाज़ों के खिलाफ ||

जो करें तक़सीम इस को मज़हबों के नाम पर,
अब खड़ा है गुलसिताँ ऐसी बहारों के खिलाफ||


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Re: बहारों के खिलाफ

«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2014, 01:56:04 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2014, 06:27:26 PM »

Nakul jee Aadaab ...!

Behad khoob khayaal bayaaN kiye hai janab... aapke kalaam ki zameen to behad umdaa thi par aapne 3 sher par hi kalam rok lii yeH hairat huyi hume...

Khair koshish kariye kalaam ko pura karne kii ... in khoobsurat ashaar par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....

Likhte rahiye... bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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Re: बहारों के खिलाफ

«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2014, 04:48:35 AM »

bahut khoob ji...!!!


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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2014, 04:49:26 AM »

वाह.....

क्या ज़ज्बात हैं.....

बहुत खूब.....


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Re: बहारों के खिलाफ

«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2014, 06:11:08 AM »

Shukriya Parwaaz ji,

in Ashaaron ki zameen udhar li gayi hai, Dwijendra Dwij saheb ki ghazal se... Iss liye aapko pasand aayi..

3 hi ashaar hue hain.. bhala udhar ki zameen par kitne kile banayen ..

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 08, 2014, 06:27:26 PM


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Re: बहारों के खिलाफ

«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2014, 06:11:54 AM »

Sabhi pasand karne waalon ka shukriya..


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