मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR

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muqaddar yaaron mera bhi badal gaya hota,
waqt rahte gar sanp aasteen ka nikal gaya hota,

chahne walon se hi barkarar hai ab tak,
noor warna tajmahal ka bhi dhal gaya hota,

tapish sachchai ki teri baaton me bhi kam thi,
wazood mere jhooth ka warna pighal gaya hota,

apahij bana diya mujhe, tere beja sahare ne
thokren kha ke do-chaar, mai bhi sambhal gaya hota,

kharid leta "BEKARAR" bhi jahan bhar ki khushiyan,
khota sikka gar bazar me mera chal gaya hota

मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता,
वक़्त रहते गर साँप आस्तीन का निकल गया होता,

चाहने वालों से ही बरकरार है अब तक,
नूर वरना ताजमहल का भी ढल गया होता,

तपिश सच्चाई की तेरी बातों मे भी कम थी,
वज़ूद मेरे झूठ का वरना पिघल गया होता,

अपाहिज बना दिया मुझे, तेरे बेजा सहारे ने
ठोकरें खा के दो-चार, मे भी संभल गया होता,

खरीद लेता "बेकरार" भी जहाँ भर की खुशियाँ,
खोटा सिक्का गर बाज़ार मे मेरा चल गया होता
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 10:16:44 AM »
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bht bht khoob bekarar ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 11:09:40 AM »
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Mast likha hai aapne Bekarar ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mein bhee shayari tujh jaisi karne lag gayee hoti
Kuchh shabdon ne kuchh khayaalon ne saath diya hota

Naam mera bhee Guinness Book of World Records me hota
Bas kismat ne meree en-waqt par dhokha naa diya hota
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 01:45:12 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 27, 2010, 09:35:44 AM
muqaddar yaaron mera bhi badal gaya hota,
waqt rahte gar sanp aasteen ka nikal gaya hota,

chahne walon se hi barkarar hai ab tak,
noor warna tajmahal ka bhi dhal gaya hota,

tapish sachchai ki teri baaton me bhi kam thi,
wazood mere jhooth ka warna pighal gaya hota,

apahij bana diya mujhe, tere beja sahare ne
thokren kha ke do-chaar, mai bhi sambhal gaya hota,

kharid leta "BEKARAR" bhi jahan bhar ki khushiyan,
khota sikka gar bazar me mera chal gaya hota

मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता,
वक़्त रहते गर साँप आस्तीन का निकल गया होता,

चाहने वालों से ही बरकरार है अब तक,
नूर वरना ताजमहल का भी ढल गया होता,

तपिश सच्चाई की तेरी बातों मे भी कम थी,
वज़ूद मेरे झूठ का वरना पिघल गया होता,

अपाहिज बना दिया मुझे, तेरे बेजा सहारे ने
ठोकरें खा के दो-चार, मे भी संभल गया होता,

खरीद लेता "बेकरार" भी जहाँ भर की खुशियाँ,
खोटा सिक्का गर बाज़ार मे मेरा चल गया होता




Bahut khoob bekrar ji...
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2010, 05:30:32 PM »
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Kya baat hai kya baat hai kya zabardast badlaav aaya hai tumhari shayri me mere bhai tum to Dravid se seedha Sehwag ban gaye ho chauke chakko ki line laga di hai.............kitne zabardast sher kahe hai yaar its just mind blowing.

chahne walon se hi barkarar hai ab tak,
noor warna tajmahal ka bhi dhal gaya hota,

Terrific yaar just terrific alfaz nahi hai is sher ki tareef me.

tapish sachchai ki teri baaton me bhi kam thi,
wazood mere jhooth ka warna pighal gaya hota,

Kya baat hai hai maar dala zalim itna zabardast shikwaa aaj tak kisi jhooth ne sach se nahi kiya hoga.

Wahh wahhh Koi samjhe na samjhe Ghayel in shero ki ehmiyat samajhta hai.

Ghayel khush hua. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 07:08:36 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 27, 2010, 10:16:44 AM
bht bht khoob bekarar ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

rachna ko sarahne ke liye bahoot shukriya Manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 07:18:02 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 27, 2010, 11:09:40 AM
Mast likha hai aapne Bekarar ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mein bhee shayari tujh jaisi karne lag gayee hoti
Kuchh shabdon ne kuchh khayaalon ne saath diya hota

Naam mera bhee Guinness Book of World Records me hota
Bas kismat ne meree en-waqt par dhokha naa diya hota

taarif ke liye shukriya koyal ji....waise Guinness Book of World Records me kya record darz karane ki khwaish hai aapki?
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 07:18:57 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 27, 2010, 01:45:12 PM
Bahut khoob bekrar ji...
bahoot bahoot shukriya bbl ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 07:21:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on December 27, 2010, 05:30:32 PM
Kya baat hai kya baat hai kya zabardast badlaav aaya hai tumhari shayri me mere bhai tum to Dravid se seedha Sehwag ban gaye ho chauke chakko ki line laga di hai.............kitne zabardast sher kahe hai yaar its just mind blowing.

chahne walon se hi barkarar hai ab tak,
noor warna tajmahal ka bhi dhal gaya hota,

Terrific yaar just terrific alfaz nahi hai is sher ki tareef me.

tapish sachchai ki teri baaton me bhi kam thi,
wazood mere jhooth ka warna pighal gaya hota,

Kya baat hai hai maar dala zalim itna zabardast shikwaa aaj tak kisi jhooth ne sach se nahi kiya hoga.

Wahh wahhh Koi samjhe na samjhe Ghayel in shero ki ehmiyat samajhta hai.

Ghayel khush hua. Usual Smile


in sheron ki kismat se mujhe rashq ho raha hai ki inhe aapke itne khoobsoorat comment mile..dil se shukriya mere bhai  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 10:45:31 PM »
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Bekarar jee,
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 08:10:30 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahutttttttttt Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!! Aapke Lekhni Ki Tareef mein aakhir hum kya kahen

Har Ek Sher Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 08:24:14 AM »
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Sanjeev jee!bahut chubhte hue teer chalaaye haiN ...padhne wwalon ke seedhe dil par vaar kar rahe haiN... dherodaad kubool kareN....
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 10:32:17 AM »
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Bahut Khub Bekrar Ji Mashallah Kya likha Hai Aapne Wah Wah
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 05:30:31 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 27, 2010, 07:31:28 PM
Har Baar Ki Tarah Ek Behatreen Peshkash
Aagaz Se Anjaam Tak Behatreen Rahe Ashar
Bahut Hi Umda Sanjeev Bhai..Mubarq Ho

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
bahoot shukriya bhai shihab....aapke comments padh-kar behad khushi hoti hai...aur achcha likhne ki prerna bhi...
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 05:31:58 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 27, 2010, 10:45:31 PM
Bekarar jee,
Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
Applause Applause

shukriya bhai rahim aapne waqt nikala aur saraha.. Usual Smile
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