मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2010, 05:34:53 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on December 28, 2010, 08:10:30 AM

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahutttttttttt Khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!! Aapke Lekhni Ki Tareef mein aakhir hum kya kahen

Har Ek Sher Lajawaab!!!

yaar khwaish jab tak kisi rachna pe aapke comments nahi aa jate tasalli nahi hoti..lagta hai shayad kuch kami rah gayi.....baharhaal aapke khoobsurat coments aa chuke hain to ab ye rachna mukammal hui..shukriya bro


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Re: मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR

«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2010, 05:37:57 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 28, 2010, 08:24:14 AM

Sanjeev jee!bahut chubhte hue teer chalaaye haiN ...padhne wwalon ke seedhe dil par vaar kar rahe haiN... dherodaad kubool kareN....

mamata ji aapke prashansa ke shabd aage likhte rahne ke liye humesha prerit karte hain.....samay dene ke liye dil se shukriya Usual Smile


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Re: मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR

«Reply #17 on: December 28, 2010, 05:39:48 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 28, 2010, 10:32:17 AM

Bahut Khub Bekrar Ji Mashallah Kya likha Hai Aapne Wah Wah

bahoot sukriya rishi ji..aapke comments padhne se jyada khushi hui ki aap fir se yoindia par sakriy ho gaye hain aate rahen


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Re: मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR

«Reply #18 on: December 29, 2010, 03:11:09 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on December 27, 2010, 09:35:44 AM

muqaddar yaaron mera bhi badal gaya hota,
waqt rahte gar sanp aasteen ka nikal gaya hota,

Janab kia soch payi hai aapne waqai aap behad khoob shayar hai... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Is umdaa khayaal ko bayaaN karne ke liye...

chahne walon se hi barkarar hai ab tak,
noor warna tajmahal ka bhi dhal gaya hota,

Oye Hoye hoye... Janab Kasam se shayari meiN aisa khoob khayaal aaj paheli bar padhne meiN aaya hai kisi aaj ke daur ke shayar se.... Masha Allah ... Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor bakhashe......

tapish sachchai ki teri baaton me bhi kam thi,
wazood mere jhooth ka warna pighal gaya hota,

Bahut umdaa janab kia tanz hai waqai har dil ko chhuu gaya hoNga.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..

apahij bana diya mujhe, tere beja sahare ne
thokren kha ke do-chaar, mai bhi sambhal gaya hota,

Hmmm Janab dil ko lag sa gaya aapka yeH khayaal...... Itni gala khushk hua ke kia kaheN.. Daad hazir hai janab...

kharid leta "BEKARAR" bhi jahan bhar ki khushiyan,
khota sikka gar bazar me mera chal gaya hota

Hmmmm Kia kareN yeH bhi chal jata par aajkal ke log humari samjh se nahi chalte naa janab....

Achcha sher hai daad

Masha Allah Janab ... Waqai behad umdaa ashaar kahe haiN aapne hume taree ke liye lafz hi nahi mil rahe the... Aapki yeH kalaam sar ta pauN...... tareef ke kabil hai ...

Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......


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Re: मुक़द्दर यारों मेरा भी बदल गया होता BEKARAR

«Reply #19 on: January 02, 2011, 03:32:58 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 29, 2010, 03:11:09 PM

Janab Bekharaar Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab kia kaheN.....
Aapki yeh kalaam waqi aik dilfareb kalaam hai ...
Humne usi din padhi thi per tareef ke liye lafz hi nahi mile.... BeIntehaaN khoob khayaal aur behd umdaa bayaani rahi janab ..... Dil ki gehraai se daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye...

Kia kaheN ab aapki is kalaam ke bare meiN
Dekhiye kia kia kaha hai aapne khud hi...

Masha Allah Janab ... Waqai behad umdaa ashaar kahe haiN aapne hume taree ke liye lafz hi nahi mil rahe the... Aapki yeH kalaam sar ta pauN...... tareef ke kabil hai ...

Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye....
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......

Aapne itni tareef kar dee hai ParwaaZ ji ki dil satven aasman pe hai...itna jaroor kahunga ki kisi mujh jaise adna se likhne wale ke liye naye saal ka isase behtreen tohfa kuch aur nahi ho sakta. aapke har us lamhe ka shukriya jo aapne rachna ko samrpit kiya. Usual Smile


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