मुझे कहना नही आया, bekarar

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munh khol ke mangun, mujhe kahna nahi aaya,
bin mange mere yaar ko dena nahi aaya,

bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya,

bardasht kar bhi leta, magar aadat kharab hai,
julmo-sitam chup rah ke mujhe sahna nahi aaya,

lahron se dushmni ki, kashti se haath dhoya,
lahron ke sath-sath mujhe bahna nahi aaya,

मुँह खोल के माँगूँ, मुझे कहना नही आया,
बिन माँगे मेरे यार को देना नही आया,

बशर्ते मुझे ख्वाइश रही उँची उड़ान की,
परिंदों के साथ मुझको मगर रहना नही आया,

बर्दाश्त कर भी लेता, मगर आदत खराब है,
जुल्मो-सितम चुप रह के मुझे, सहना नही आया,

लहरों से दुश्मनी की, कश्ती से हाथ धोया,
लहरों के साथ-साथ मुझे बहना नही आया,
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2010, 05:59:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob bekrar ji...
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2010, 06:31:07 PM »
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bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya

Kya baat hai mere bhai.............kitni saadgi se tumne khud apni aur zamane ki haqeeqat se rubaroo karaya hai................bohat sach_chaiee hai mere bhai is peshkash me koi banavtipana nahi.

Ghayel khush hua.
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2010, 06:39:14 PM »
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Bekaraar Sahab Aadaab!

Mudat baad kisi beshkimti khayaaloNse labrez kalaam ke ruberu huye
HaiN... Waah janab ahsaas o khayaal ke saath behad umdaa adygi ki
hai aapne... Daad janab daad..... Usual Smile

Behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai waah jee dil baagH baagH ho gaya.. Usual Smile          


Quote from: bekarar on December 25, 2010, 05:39:18 PM
munh khol ke mangun, mujhe kahna nahi aaya,
bin mange mere yaar ko dena nahi aaya,

Waah jee kia haqhikhat kahi hai waah behad khoob..
Achcha matla kaha hai daad Usual Smile          


bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya,

Masha Allah Janab bahut umdaa bahut khoob...
Kia khayaal hai kia adaygi hai... bahut umdaa waah:)          


bardasht kar bhi leta, magar aadat kharab hai,
julmo-sitam chup rah ke mujhe sahna nahi aaya,

Oye hoye Janab diljeet liya aapne ... behad khoob sher ..
Behad achchi adaygi... waah waah daad daad daad.... Usual Smile          


lahron se dushmni ki kashti se haath dhoya,
lahron ke sath-sath mujhe bahna nahi aaya,

Gazab janab behad gazab dil ko lag gaya.. Aapka yeH
Khayaal behad khoob behad umdaa dil se daad hazir hai... Usual Smile          




Masha Allah Janab Masha Allah..... Kia kaheN behad khoob
kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne bazm ko..... Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye.....

Bus chaNd au ashaar aa jate toH aur bhi gazab dhaa jati aapki yeH kalaam..
Par kafiye ki bandish meiN shayad aap tham gaye....
Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile          
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2010, 08:32:24 PM »
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Beqaraar ji
lajawaab poetry.
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 07:13:12 AM »
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bht bht khoob bekarar ji....
luved d 2nd and last one....
hats off....
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2010, 07:47:16 AM »
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bht mast likha hai bekaraar ji aapne..dil khush ho gya pdhkar
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2010, 10:19:04 AM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Bekarar Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 08:58:42 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 25, 2010, 05:59:58 PM
Bahut khoob bekrar ji...

bahoot shukriya BBL ji rachna ko aapki prashnsa ke shabd mile
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 09:00:30 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on December 25, 2010, 06:31:07 PM
bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya

Kya baat hai mere bhai.............kitni saadgi se tumne khud apni aur zamane ki haqeeqat se rubaroo karaya hai................bohat sach_chaiee hai mere bhai is peshkash me koi banavtipana nahi.

Ghayel khush hua.

muddaon baad aapki shabasi pakar bekarar bhi bahoot khush hua sajid bhai....bahoot bahoot shukriya dost
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 09:06:10 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 25, 2010, 06:39:14 PM
Bekaraar Sahab Aadaab!

Mudat baad kisi beshkimti khayaaloNse labrez kalaam ke ruberu huye
HaiN... Waah janab ahsaas o khayaal ke saath behad umdaa adygi ki
hai aapne... Daad janab daad..... Usual Smile

Behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai waah jee dil baagH baagH ho gaya.. Usual Smile         


Masha Allah Janab Masha Allah..... Kia kaheN behad khoob
kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne bazm ko..... Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye.....

Bus chaNd au ashaar aa jate toH aur bhi gazab dhaa jati aapki yeH kalaam..
Par kafiye ki bandish meiN shayad aap tham gaye....
Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         


daad dene ka aapka andaz na sirf likhne wale ke housale ko badhata hai balki is baat ka ehsaas bhi dilata hai ki har rachna ko aap kitni baareeki se padhte hain, nishchit hi is vyast jindagi me se kisi rachna ko aapki itni tassali se dee gai daad hasil ho to wo kisi puraskaar se kam nahi....
aur aapki bareeki ke kayal hum yun bhi ho gaye ki sach me aapne bilkul thik pahachana ki "kafiye ki bandish meiN shayad aap tham gaye"
bahoot shukriya parwaz ji aapne khasa waqt diya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2010, 09:08:47 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 25, 2010, 07:22:57 PM
Bahut Khub Sanjeev Bhai
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai
Waqai Mein Bada Maza Aaya Parhkar.

Hazaron Dad...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

aapki har daad ke liye shukriya bhai shihab humesha ki tarah aapka comment padh-kar bahoot sukun mila
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Quote from: nirala on December 25, 2010, 08:32:24 PM
Beqaraar ji
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bahoot bahoot abhar nirala ji   Usual Smile
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 26, 2010, 07:13:12 AM
bht bht khoob bekarar ji....
luved d 2nd and last one....
hats off....

manzil-e-ishq ji shukriya aapne apna samay diya aur rachna ko saraha  Usual Smile
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 26, 2010, 07:47:16 AM
bht mast likha hai bekaraar ji aapne..dil khush ho gya pdhkar

rachna ko padhkar aapka dil khush hua aur aapke comment padhkar mera.... Usual Smile.housala-afzai ka shukriya kdk ji
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