मुझे कहना नही आया, bekarar

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«Reply #15 on: December 27, 2010, 09:13:57 AM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Bekarar Ji Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot shukriya rishi ji
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«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2010, 08:48:38 AM »
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munh khol ke mangun, mujhe kahna nahi aaya,
bin mange mere yaar ko dena nahi aaya,

bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya,

bardasht kar bhi leta, magar aadat kharab hai,
julmo-sitam chup rah ke mujhe sahna nahi aaya,

lahron se dushmni ki kashti se haath dhoya,
lahron ke sath-sath mujhe bahna nahi aaya,

मुँह खोल के माँगूँ, मुझे कहना नही आया,
बिन माँगे मेरे यार को देना नही आया,

बशर्ते मुझे ख्वाइश रही उँची उड़ान की,
परिंदों के साथ मुझको मगर रहना नही आया,

बर्दाश्त कर भी लेता, मगर आदत खराब है,
जुल्मो-सितम चुप रह के मुझे, सहना नही आया,

लहरों से दुश्मनी की कश्ती से हाथ धोया,
लहरों के साथ-साथ मुझे बहना नही आया,





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Bahutttttttttttttttttt Khooob Sanjeev Bro...

Lafzon mein Gehrai Sahi Maayne mein, Isse Kehte Hai..

"Mooh Khol Ke Maangun, Mujhe Kehna Nahi Aaya
Bin Maange Mere Yaar Ko Dena Nahi Aaya..

Basharte Mujhe Khwaish Rahi Unche Udaan ki
Parindon Ke Saath Mujhko Magar Rehna Nahi Aaya"

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Bas Ek Guzaarish Hai.Aakhri Sher mein "Lehron Se Dushmani Ki" Ke Baad Ek Coma(,)Zaroor Dijiye..Padhne mein asaani hogi..


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«Reply #17 on: December 28, 2010, 05:43:04 PM »
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Bahutttttttttttttttttt Khooob Sanjeev Bro...

Lafzon mein Gehrai Sahi Maayne mein, Isse Kehte Hai..

"Mooh Khol Ke Maangun, Mujhe Kehna Nahi Aaya
Bin Maange Mere Yaar Ko Dena Nahi Aaya..

Basharte Mujhe Khwaish Rahi Unche Udaan ki
Parindon Ke Saath Mujhko Magar Rehna Nahi Aaya"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bas Ek Guzaarish Hai.Aakhri Sher mein "Lehron Se Dushmani Ki" Ke Baad Ek Coma(,)Zaroor Dijiye..Padhne mein asaani hogi..


Bahut Ache Applause Applause Applause Applause


bahoot bahoot shukriya khwaish bro...aapne bilkul sahi point out kiya..aur maine use sudhar bhi liya hai  Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: December 28, 2010, 06:31:24 PM »
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munh khol ke mangun, mujhe kahna nahi aaya,
bin mange mere yaar ko dena nahi aaya,

bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya,

bardasht kar bhi leta, magar aadat kharab hai,
julmo-sitam chup rah ke mujhe sahna nahi aaya,

lahron se dushmni ki, kashti se haath dhoya,
lahron ke sath-sath mujhe bahna nahi aaya,





Waah Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai Sanjiv Bhai,.
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«Reply #19 on: December 29, 2010, 04:34:26 PM »
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bekarar ji bahut khoob ,mazaa aa gaya.
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likhte rahiye ,humen anand dete rahiye.
munh khol ke mangun, mujhe kahna nahi aaya,
bin mange mere yaar ko dena nahi aaya,

bashrte mujhe khwaish rahi unchi udaan ki,
parindon ke saath mujhko magar rahna nahi aaya,

bardasht kar bhi leta, magar aadat kharab hai,
julmo-sitam chup rah ke mujhe sahna nahi aaya,

lahron se dushmni ki, kashti se haath dhoya,
lahron ke sath-sath mujhe bahna nahi aaya,

मुँह खोल के माँगूँ, मुझे कहना नही आया,
बिन माँगे मेरे यार को देना नही आया,

बशर्ते मुझे ख्वाइश रही उँची उड़ान की,
परिंदों के साथ मुझको मगर रहना नही आया,

बर्दाश्त कर भी लेता, मगर आदत खराब है,
जुल्मो-सितम चुप रह के मुझे, सहना नही आया,

लहरों से दुश्मनी की, कश्ती से हाथ धोया,
लहरों के साथ-साथ मुझे बहना नही आया,



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«Reply #20 on: January 02, 2011, 03:20:33 AM »
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Waah Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai Sanjiv Bhai,.

bahoot shukriya bhai azeem aapne waqt nikal kar padha aur saraha
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«Reply #21 on: January 02, 2011, 03:22:48 AM »
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bekarar ji bahut khoob ,mazaa aa gaya.
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likhte rahiye ,humen anand dete rahiye.

padhkar aapko anand hua aur aapke comeent dekh kar mujhe santosh....housal-afzai ke liye bahoot shukriya SURESH JI  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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