मेरा मिज़ाज नही- bekarar

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it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,

ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,

dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,

 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,

Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2012, 04:35:11 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sanjiv ji
Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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Koi aukaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaz nahi,
Be-chargi fir bhi  mera mijaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaz nahi,

ye do behad khoob rahe Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2012, 04:42:53 PM »
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Bekarar ji, in words ko theek kar lijiye jo aapne ghalat likhe hain

taaz(Taaj)
mijaaj(Mizaaj)
lailaaz (Lailaaj)
azab(Ajab)
rivaaz (Rivaaj)
bezan(Bejaan)
gubbara (Ghubbara)
begairat (Beghairat)
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2012, 06:27:51 PM »
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bht kamaal ke aashar kahen hai aapne Bekaraar sir--
mujhe last aashar thk se samjh nhi aya--
iss asshar me aap kya kahna chahte hain?
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2012, 06:42:12 PM »
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beautiful cmposition ;
since  corretions  have  been  suggested  above ,
pleae  include  the  following  also :
          Aukaat --> (Auqaat)
             fir --> (phir)
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2012, 03:26:15 AM »
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MKV ji sarhna ke liye shukriya.  Usual Smile

@Taazu ji,
I will correct it but I think no-one can claim spelling corrections if we write different language in different language.
if you write english in hindi language there might be different opinion for different words.
Thanks for your time and suggestions. Usual Smile

@Sarfira ji,
shukriya aapne is rachna pe gour kiya  Usual Smile
bhookhe aadmi ko kisi ne roti khairaat me nahi di, lekin jab wahi aadmi bhookh se mar gaya to marne ke baad uske kafan ka intzaam ho gaya, chande se,
ye tanj hai ki samaj upari tour par samasya ko dekhta hai, agar bhookhe ko samay par roti mil jaati to shayad wo bach jaata, to jo paisa kafan ke liye kharch kiya gaya usase kahin kam paise me uski jaan bach sakti thi....
umeed hai aap samjh gaye honge...fir bhi kuch aur sawal hon to banda hazir hai  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2012, 03:32:45 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 09, 2012, 06:42:12 PM
beautiful cmposition ;
since  corretions  have  been  suggested  above ,
pleae  include  the  following  also :
          Aukaat --> (Auqaat)
             fir --> (phir)

housala- afjaai ka shukriya Siddiqui ji, Usual Smile

corrected ..
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2012, 03:45:00 AM »
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bahut khoob bekaraar ji dil se daad
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2012, 05:56:13 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 09, 2012, 04:08:26 PM
it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,

ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,

dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,

 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,

Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

संजीव "beqrar"




Quote from: bekarar on April 09, 2012, 04:08:26 PM
it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,

ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,

dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,

 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,

Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

संजीव "beqrar"



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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2012, 06:30:27 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 09, 2012, 04:08:26 PM
it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,

ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,

dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,

 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,

Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

संजीव "beqrar"




Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Har Ek Ashaar Ki Gehraiyon Par Qurbaan Jaau..

Bahutttttt bahutttttttttttttt Khooob Mere Bhai..

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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2012, 06:41:10 AM »
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Bahut Khub Bekarar Ji..!!
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बहुत ही सुन्दर ख्याल हैं, बेकरार जी, मुबारक हो
Quote from: bekarar on April 09, 2012, 04:08:26 PM
it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,

log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,

ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,

dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,

 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,

Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2012, 06:49:29 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 09, 2012, 04:08:26 PM
it is really difficult to get 100% hindi words from english typing software, so ignore if you find some mistakes of spellings etc.
aapni rai jaroor den... Usual Smile

Koi auqaat nahi,  sar pe koi taaj nahi,
Be-chargi phir bhi  mera mizaaj nahi,
duniya mein kisi ki koi auqaat nahin. maut ne aa ghera phir chaar kaandhe chahiye.doosre misre mein bahut himmat waali baat ki hai wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
log tabdil ho gaye, teri sohbat pake,
dawa durust ho to, marz lailaaj nahi,
haan aaj kal dawa aur doctor dono hi durust nahin hain bekaraar ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
ajab dhang se, katraati hain laashen mujhse,
Shahar murda hai, yahan hasne ka rivaaj nahi,
 Laughing hard Laughing hard =))bahut ache ........!
dabaya zor se to fat gaya bejan gubbara
ik had ke baad, koi be-aawaz nahi,
very very nice.........! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 mara mai bhookh se khairaat me kafan aaya
itna beghairat hua abhi, mera samaj nahi,
bahut gahra tanz hai ji bahut sakht baan chara hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Sanjiv "beqrar"

कोई औकात नही, सर पे कोई ताज़ नही,
बे-चारगी फिर भी मेरा मिज़ाज नही,

लोग तब्दील हो गये, तेरी सोहबत पाके,
दवा दुरुस्त हो तो, मर्ज़ लाइलाज़ नही,

अज़ब ढंग से, कतराती हैं लाशें मुझसे,
शहर मुर्दा है, यहाँ हँसने का रिवाज़ नही,

दबाया ज़ोर से तो फट गया बेज़ान गुब्बारा,
इक हद के बाद, कोई बे-आवाज़ नही,

मरा मैं भूख से, खैरात मे कफ़न आया
इतना बेगैरत हुआ अभी, मेरा समाज नही,

संजीव "beqrar"



khoob kahaa,............!
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Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab badi mushkil Se aapki kalaam padh paayeN hai...
Gustaqee ke liye aur deri se haazri ke liye mazarrat
chahte hai janab... Usual Smile


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Behad khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab... sabhi
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