रोज़ नया ख़्याल...........saru.............

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«Reply #15 on: November 23, 2013, 02:42:59 AM »
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Bahut Khub Dhero.n daad

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«Reply #16 on: November 23, 2013, 03:40:21 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Saru jee.
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«Reply #17 on: November 23, 2013, 10:39:53 AM »
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ख्वाहिशों में खुद को उलझा के निकलती हूँ
ज़िंदगी तिरे दर से में मुरझा के निकलती हूँ

फ़िज़ूल  की  हरकतों  से  दूर ही रहें इसलिये
बच्चों को उनके काम में उलझा के निकलती हूँ

bahut umdah saru jee
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«Reply #18 on: November 23, 2013, 11:29:00 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: November 23, 2013, 01:31:59 PM »
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Raqeeb koi nahin sab se hans ke milna hai
Roz apne aap ko samjhaa ke nikalti hoon

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«Reply #20 on: November 23, 2013, 03:53:52 PM »
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ख्वाहिशों में खुद को उलझा के निकलती हूँ
ज़िंदगी तिरे दर से में मुरझा के निकलती हूँ

आज की रात को भी  चाहिए रोशनी इसलिए
घर के  सारे  दीये  में बुझा के निकलती हूँ

रक़ीब  कोई  नहीं  सबसे  हँस के मिलना है
रोज़ अपने अहम को समझा के निकलती हूँ

तुमको भी  संवारेगी 'सरु' जी  जान से अपने
घर की दर-ओ-दीवार को समझा के निकलती हूँ


Bahaut hi khoobsurat ghazal rahi Suru ji ... aur ye waale aashaar khaas taur se aur bhi zyaada pasand aaye ... aap ko dheron daad !!
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«Reply #21 on: November 23, 2013, 05:56:38 PM »
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thank u soooooooo much Hasanji  icon_flower icon_flower(q
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Bahut khubsurat ashaar se nawaza hai Bazm ko .
Saru ji , dil ki gahraaiyon se daad aur mubarakbaad .
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«Reply #22 on: November 25, 2013, 03:03:54 PM »
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bahut khooooooooooooooob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: November 25, 2013, 09:30:23 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut 2 shukriya nashwani ji..
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Aur ab aapko kehna chahiye ki,,
Apne har kalaam pe Rau pe kabza jama ke nikalti hoon..happy9
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«Reply #24 on: November 25, 2013, 09:33:18 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 22, 2013, 10:10:23 PM
waah waah...bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, mano jaise aapne apne tajurbe ki kitaab khol kar rakh di ho..
har ahsaar me kafi gehraii hai , bahut achha laga padhkar ..dheron daad aapko...
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Quote from: shiba on November 23, 2013, 01:31:59 PM
Raqeeb koi nahin sab se hans ke milna hai
Roz apne aap ko samjhaa ke nikalti hoon

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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerbahut 2 shukriya gyan prakash ji

Quote from: Gyan Prakash on November 23, 2013, 02:42:59 AM
Bahut Khub Dhero.n daad

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Quote from: mkv on November 23, 2013, 10:39:53 AM
ख्वाहिशों में खुद को उलझा के निकलती हूँ
ज़िंदगी तिरे दर से में मुरझा के निकलती हूँ

फ़िज़ूल  की  हरकतों  से  दूर ही रहें इसलिये
बच्चों को उनके काम में उलझा के निकलती हूँ

bahut umdah saru jee
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Quote from: zarraa on November 23, 2013, 03:53:52 PM
ख्वाहिशों में खुद को उलझा के निकलती हूँ
ज़िंदगी तिरे दर से में मुरझा के निकलती हूँ

आज की रात को भी  चाहिए रोशनी इसलिए
घर के  सारे  दीये  में बुझा के निकलती हूँ

रक़ीब  कोई  नहीं  सबसे  हँस के मिलना है
रोज़ अपने अहम को समझा के निकलती हूँ

तुमको भी  संवारेगी 'सरु' जी  जान से अपने
घर की दर-ओ-दीवार को समझा के निकलती हूँ


Bahaut hi khoobsurat ghazal rahi Suru ji ... aur ye waale aashaar khaas taur se aur bhi zyaada pasand aaye ... aap ko dheron daad !!
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