लौटा दो बचपन मेरा "

by aarzoo-e-arjun on March 12, 2016, 10:20:03 AM
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लौटा दो बचपन मेरा "

खो गई मासूमियत
खो गया है वो समां
खो गई मुस्कान वो
खो गया है वो जहाँ
खो गया मैं ये कहाँ
हो गया मैं क्यों जवां
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा

गलियों में बेख़ौफ़ सा
दौड़ना छुपना कभी
दोस्तों के वास्ते
रूठना लड़ना कभी
कांच की थी वो गोलियां
जीतकर रखना कहीं
वो रंगीन पतंगे मेरी
लूटकर रखना कहीं
खो गए है वो रास्ते
ज़िंदगी के वास्ते
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा

स्कूल को जाता था मैं
टॉफियाँ भी खाता था मैं
कॉपियों में छुपके कभी
मोगली बनाता था मैं
डोनॉल्ड डक टॉम एंड जेरी कभी
सुपरमैन भी बन जाता मैं
सन्डे की रंगोली कभी
शक्तिमान भी बन जाता मैं
खो गया वो जादू कहाँ
आ गया मैं देखो कहाँ
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा

लोहड़ी की खुशियां कभी
बसंती बहारें मेरी
पिचकारी गुब्बारे गुलाल
से होती थी होली मेरी
रावण के वो पुतले जले
फुलझड़ी दिवाली मेरी
पीछे पीछे थी भागती
राखी पर वो बहना मेरी
बाबा की थी वो लाड़ली
राजा बेटा कहे माँ मेरी
मैं तरसता खड़ा हूँ यहाँ
वो मोहब्बत है बिखरी कहाँ
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेा
लौटा दो वो बचपन मेरा

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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2016, 02:20:02 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2016, 09:49:52 PM »
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Bahut umdah ehsaas hai waah, though the poem is bit too long.
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2016, 02:45:01 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2016, 04:49:27 AM »
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Kya baat hai bahut badhiya...
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2016, 06:54:39 AM »
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Shukriya... Aap sabke pyaar ka... 
Yes..  Poem is little longer...  It cud be more longer sir... Many a moments are left untouched....
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2016, 11:03:30 AM »
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Bahot khooob waaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2016, 04:57:23 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob
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