वाह–वाह देखनी है................saru................

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 10, 2013, 10:32:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2013, 02:03:06 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAU due hua.

ek baat bataao itnee bhetreen ghazal kaise likhne lage aap really amezing


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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2013, 04:49:56 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Suresh ji .
bahut badhai
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«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2013, 04:53:05 PM »
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Siddiqui ji bahut 2 shukriya
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bahut bahut khoob Suresh ji .
bahut badhai
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«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2013, 04:54:21 PM »
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sudhir ji thank u soooooooooooo much
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वार  ख़ाली  नहीं  जाता  कभी सच्ची मोहब्बत का
दिल  की  गहराई तक पुर-असर वो आह देखनी है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saangwaan ji,Bahut hi khobsurat ashaar kahe hain aapne.Yakinan,aapke ye ashaar dil ko chhoo gaye.Dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2013, 04:55:03 PM »
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thanks a lot qalb ji
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boss!!!!!!!!! rau hazir hai

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«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2013, 04:55:48 PM »
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thanks a lottt saman dear
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Wahhhhhh!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

Kya baat hai...
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«Reply #21 on: December 11, 2013, 04:56:00 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: December 11, 2013, 04:56:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajan ji
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #23 on: December 11, 2013, 04:59:12 PM »
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thankewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww soooooooooooooooooooooooo much sheba ji
10 nahin ek hi kaafi hai baaki baat mujhe aapke zazbaat ne samjha di hai
You are really an excellent reader and appreciator of ghazals

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«Reply #24 on: December 11, 2013, 04:59:56 PM »
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thankewwwww sooooooooooooooo much zarra ji
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ji bilkul waah waah hogi aisi khoobsurat jazbaat se bhari ghazal par ... dheron daad saru ji !!
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«Reply #25 on: December 11, 2013, 05:01:18 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerthankewww soooooooooo much iftakhar ji
aapki ye hausla afzahi yahan tak le aai hai mujhe
aur kya chahiye
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saru jee, behad khoob, umda ghazal, gehre jazbaat aur khayaalaat. Ye ashaar behad pasand aaye:

ए ज़िंदगी मुझको  तेरी रस्म- ओ- राह देखनी  है
उठाए दिल में क़सक जब  उठे वो निगाह देखनी है

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है
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«Reply #26 on: December 11, 2013, 05:03:27 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya nandbahu ji
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«Reply #27 on: December 11, 2013, 05:04:39 PM »
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Thankewwwwww sooooooooooooooooooo much Tauhid ji
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behad umda... aur behad khoobsurat bayaani saru ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #28 on: December 11, 2013, 05:11:54 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya sarfira ji
aapne jo poocha uska jawaab kya doon mein ..there are so many factors.but jo mujhe lagta hai vo ye ki yo se mujhe time to time sugeestions milte rahe...jaise Dr. sksaini ji,Iftakhar ji,Qalb ji,sheba ji,khwahishji,Tauhid ji, icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut......aur inki dua ke saath saath kuch yun hua ki jo dahi pehle hilaya gaya tha ab usko bilona shuru kar diya hai.....cream lani hai Giggle Giggle
SS ji ek bat mai bhi puchna chah rha tha Jo ki Qalb sabab ne puch lia hai..
aap wakai me behreen ghazal likhne lage hain aajkal magr Kaise?

pehle ki poetry ar aaj ki me itna diff.
Saahab awsm ghazal
daad daad daaad

aapki form barkaraar rahe
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«Reply #29 on: December 11, 2013, 05:12:44 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya amit ji.
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waah....bahut hi umda ghazal...dheron daad aur

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

इंसान  की  इंसानियत  पर  जां-निसारी  देखकर
खुदा  झुकता  हो  जहाँ  वो इबादत-गाह देखनी है

inke liye dili mubarkbaad....
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