साफ़ हो गए

by vimmi singh on October 19, 2012, 06:08:25 AM
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टूटे पत्ते सुख कर
राख हो गए
ख़ुशी भी गम में मिलकर
ख़ाक हो गए
किसी रास्ते मिल जाएं
तो पहचान लेना
खून के धब्बे अब
साफ़ हो गए
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2012, 06:11:09 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2012, 06:57:14 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 01:27:18 PM »
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Bahut Khub..
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 19, 2012, 06:11:09 AM
Applause Applause

thank you sir........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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wah vimmi jee
khoob likha hai aapne Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2012, 05:55:20 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on October 19, 2012, 06:08:25 AM
टूटे पत्ते सुख कर
राख हो गए
ख़ुशी भी गम में मिलकर
ख़ाक हो गए
किसी रास्ते मिल जाएं
तो पहचान लेना
खून के धब्बे अब
साफ़ हो गए
bahut khub
baat buri lage gar jara bhi to kar dena maaf
husn dekh tera neeyat bhala kiski rahegi saaf
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 07:09:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2012, 04:08:11 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 19, 2012, 06:57:14 AM
very nice

bahut shukriya Nandbahu ji....... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2012, 04:12:14 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on October 19, 2012, 01:27:18 PM
Bahut Khub..
bahut bahut shukriya Rishi ji....
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Quote from: mkv on October 19, 2012, 05:45:08 PM
wah vimmi jee
khoob likha hai aapne Applause

bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on October 19, 2012, 05:55:20 PM
bahut khub
baat buri lage gar jara bhi to kar dena maaf
husn dekh tera neeyat bhala kiski rahegi saaf

bahut bahut shukriya Manoj ji... aapke daad ke liye aur is shayari ke liye...
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2012, 05:38:48 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on October 19, 2012, 06:08:25 AM
टूटे पत्ते सुख कर
राख हो गए
ख़ुशी भी गम में मिलकर
ख़ाक हो गए
किसी रास्ते मिल जाएं
तो पहचान लेना
खून के धब्बे अब
साफ़ हो गए

good Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2012, 09:30:40 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 19, 2012, 07:09:46 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji.......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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