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EK PRAYAS -

(2122/1212/22)

एक अँगार हूँ, दुआ कर दो!
बुझ रहा हूँ ज़रा हवा कर दो!

आपके ही सितम का क़ैदी हूँ,
हो सके तो मुझे रिहा कर दो!

ये सवालात क्यों सरल-से हैं?
आप इनको, घुमा-फिराकर दो!

यार! ख़ामोश-से खड़े हो क्यों?
कोई दुख है अगर, गिला* कर दो!
(*shikayat)

ग़ैर हूँ मैं, रक़ीब* जो क्या हूँ!
दुख रहा घाव है, दवा कर दो!
(*दुश्मन)

याद बचपन की आए है मौला!
उम्र के पेड़ को हरा कर दो!

दर्द की आग ये मिटेगी कब?
जाम छोटा सही, प' लाकर दो!

टूटती जाए है ख़ुदी मेरी,
ऐ फ़रिश्तो! जरा शिफ़ा* कर दो।
(*recovery)

दोस्ती, सिर्फ़ हाथ मिलना है?
दोस्ती का मज़ा, निभाकर दो!

ये ख़ता, 'ज़ैफ़', रब की मर्ज़ी है,
इश्क़ गर है ख़ता, ख़ता कर दो!

2014 © ज़ैफ़
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(2122/1212/22)

Ek angaar hun, dua kar do!
Bujh raha hun zara hawa kar do!

Apke hi sitam ka qaidi hun,
Ho sake to mujhe riha kar do!

Ye sawaalaat kyun saral se hain?
Aap inko, ghuma-phirakar do!

Yar! Khamosh se khade ho kyun?
Koi dukh hai agar, gila kar do!

Gair hun main, raqeeb jo kya hun,
Dukh raha ghaaw hai, dawa kar do!

Yaad bachpan ki aaye hai maula,
Umr ke ped ko hara kar do!  

Dard ki aag ye mitegi kab?
Jaam chhota sahi, p'  laakar do!

Toot.ti jaaye hai khudi meri,
Ae farishto! Zara shifa kar do!

Dosti, sirf hath milna hai?
Dosti ka maza, nibha.kar do!

Ye khata 'Zaif', rab ki marzi hai,
Ishq gar hai khata, Khata kar do!

2014 © Zaif

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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2014, 03:56:19 PM »
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EK PRAYAS -

(2122/1212/22)

एक अँगार हूँ, दुआ कर दो!
बुझ रहा हूँ ज़रा हवा कर दो!

आपके ही सितम का क़ैदी हूँ,
हो सके तो मुझे रिहा कर दो!

ये सवालात क्यों सरल-से हैं?
आप इनको, घुमा-फिराकर दो!

यार! ख़ामोश-से खड़े हो क्यों?
कोई दुख है अगर, गिला* कर दो!
(*shikayat)

ग़ैर हूँ मैं, रक़ीब* जो क्या हूँ!
दुख रहा घाव(             zakhm)   Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile            Usual Smile है, दवा कर दो!
(*दुश्मन)

याद बचपन की आए है मौला!
उम्र के पेड़ को हरा कर दो!

दर्द की आग ये मिटेगी कब?
जाम छोटा सही, प' लाकर दो!

टूटती जाए है ख़ुदी मेरी,
ऐ फ़रिश्तो! जरा शिफ़ा* कर दो।
(*recovery)

दोस्ती, सिर्फ़ हाथ मिलाना है?
दोस्ती का मज़ा, निभाकर दो!

ये ख़ता, 'ज़ैफ़', रब की मर्ज़ी है,
इश्क़ गर है ख़ता, ख़ता कर दो!

2014 © ज़ैफ़
**************************

(2122/1212/22)

Ek angaar hun, dua kar do!
Bujh raha hun zara hawa kar do!

Apke hi sitam ka qaidi hun,
Ho sake to mujhe riha kar do!

Ye sawaalaat kyun saral se hain?
Aap inko, ghuma-phirakar do!

Yar! Khamosh se khade ho kyun?
Koi dukh hai agar, gila kar do!

Gair hun main, raqeeb jo kya hun,
Dukh raha ghaaw hai, dawa kar do!

Yaad bachpan ki aaye hai maula,
Umr ke ped ko hara kar do!  

Dard ki aag ye mitegi kab?
Jaam chhota sahi, p'  laakar do!

Toot.ti jaaye hai khudi meri,
Ae farishto! Zara shifa kar do!

Dosti, sirf hath milana hai?
Dosti ka maza, nibha.kar do!

Ye khata 'Zaif', rab ki marzi hai,
Ishq gar hai khata, Khata kar do!

2014 © Zaif



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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2014, 04:05:59 PM »
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SUPERB ek rau ke saath daad aur aasheerwad
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2014, 04:13:00 PM »
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waah...waah...waah....
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2014, 04:46:28 PM »
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bahut khoob Zaif Jee, bahut hi achhi ghazal rahi ..
Dheron Daad...
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2014, 05:25:05 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2014, 07:26:29 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2014, 08:47:32 PM »
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Bahut bahut khooooooob zaif ji...dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2014, 12:52:53 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Zaif bhai waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, bahut khoob, bahut achha lag raha hai aapko behr meN likhte dekh kar. Ye ashaar bahut pasand aaye:

ये सवालात क्यों सरल-से हैं?
आप इनको, घुमा-फिराकर दो!

टूटती जाए है ख़ुदी मेरी,
ऐ फ़रिश्तो! जरा शिफ़ा* कर दो।

Aur sabse zordaar sher:

ये ख़ता, 'ज़ैफ़', रब की मर्ज़ी है,
इश्क़ गर है ख़ता, ख़ता कर दो!

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah aur waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Rau abhi nahiN hai baad meN de paauNga.

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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2014, 01:27:00 AM »
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Ek angaar hun, dua kar do!
Bujh raha hun zara hawa kar do!
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Apke hi sitam ka qaidi hun,
Ho sake to mujhe riha kar do!
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Ye sawaalaat kyun saral se hain?
Aap inko, ghuma-phirakar do!
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Yar! Khamosh se khade ho kyun?
Koi dukh hai agar, gila kar do!
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Gair hun main, raqeeb jo kya hun,
Dukh raha ghaaw hai, dawa kar do!
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Yaad bachpan ki aaye hai maula,
Umr ke ped ko hara kar do! 
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Dard ki aag ye mitegi kab?
Jaam chhota sahi, p'  laakar do!
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Toot.ti jaaye hai khudi meri,
Ae farishto! Zara shifa kar do!
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Dosti, sirf hath milna hai?
Dosti ka maza, nibha.kar do!
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Ye khata 'Zaif', rab ki marzi hai,
Ishq gar hai khata, Khata kar do!
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wah wah wah wah bohut bohut bohut umda waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2014, 02:47:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: March 26, 2014, 08:46:24 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 26, 2014, 02:36:45 PM »
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mein beher to nahin janta par aapke sabhi sher bahut pasand aaye khaskar ye bahut umda hai
ये ख़ता, 'ज़ैफ़', रब की मर्ज़ी है,
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«Reply #13 on: March 26, 2014, 03:35:19 PM »
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wah bahut ahche kya improvement hai saaheb...

ये सवालात क्यों सरल-से हैं?
आप इनको, घुमा-फिराकर दो!

is sher ki dili daad aur ek rau meri taraf se...

zara ek baar angaar aur dosti lafz pe ek baar fir gaur kijiyega... Aur ek salaah hai mei taraf se, har sehr jo likha jaaye, jaruri nahiN i use ghazal me shaamil kareN, gar aapko kuch sher kamjor lageN to unhe hataane meN na katraayeN, isse ghazal aur nikharegi... Mashq zaari rakheN... Khuda aapko aur hunar bakshe...
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«Reply #14 on: March 26, 2014, 07:06:57 PM »
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Bahut shukriya. Taish ji. Usual Smile
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